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Old November 4th, 2012 (06:01 PM).
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I made some edits to my opening, history, and personality. Im not sure if this is better (It was hard for me to make flaw for a child who is generally sheltered).
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Old November 4th, 2012 (08:11 PM). Edited November 4th, 2012 by TornZero.
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Quote originally posted by Khawill:
Edit* Kitsune is restless when he has nothing to do, and he can not do things for himself. Without a leader or guidance he becomes lost, and even scared. He has an intense fear of being worthless. He lacks survival skills past eating berries he knows are safe, and even then he is severely addicted to Oran berries. If he does not eat at least one a day he begins to suffer from withdraw, and is prone to being more aggressive. (His addiction is predicted by his father to be a birth defect.) This addiction can cause him to quickly change allegiances.

Edit* It was common knowledge that this family had knowledge and this made them somewhat of targets to some gang leaders who didn't want knowledge and order being circulated through the region. They especially feared that if another gang could get the family to join then that gang would have an advantage. The Withrow's had to stay vigilant when traveling, not wanting to join any gangs.
Okay, your edits are making less sense than the original SU.

How is he addicted to Oran berries when they're already a rarity? If he's in a traveling family then it's even less likely to find a consistent source of that particular fruit. "A birth defect" isn't a proper explanation for an acquired psychological condition, either.

Also, knowledge isn't condemned in the least, especially among adults — they don't exactly want everyone to be as dumb as a Psyduck that can't get rid of its headache. Learning reading and writing, among other basic school-taught subjects, just isn't readily available to everyone. It does not mean at all that people are going to hate everyone that learns any of those things or try to use them for their own gain.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (08:05 AM).
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@Yellow Oh!... actually i had completely forgotten about the fused apperence ;; My bad, I've added that in now so i hope it will be alright.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (10:51 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Crystallized:
@Yellow Oh!... actually i had completely forgotten about the fused apperence ^^;; My bad, I've added that in now so i hope it will be alright.
As a note, Rayn's clothing really shouldn't be themed in a world where Pokémon to theme clothing around (not to mention the technology to make it past handcrafting) are all but gone. I have to seriously suggest that you change your clothing to something normal for when your character isn't fused. However, they're acceptable for a fused state as fusion has various effects on the person's clothes just as it does their body. (That's actually how Yellow and I interpreted it, in that you didn't have regular clothes to use but that that /was/ his fused form.)

That said, I have to ask you that you come up with a "regular" set of clothing for Rayn to use when he's not fused.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (11:47 AM).
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Quote originally posted by TornZero:
As a note, Rayn's clothing really shouldn't be themed in a world where Pokémon to theme clothing around (not to mention the technology to make it past handcrafting) are all but gone. I have to seriously suggest that you change your clothing to something normal for when your character isn't fused. However, they're acceptable for a fused state as fusion has various effects on the person's clothes just as it does their body. (That's actually how Yellow and I interpreted it, in that you didn't have regular clothes to use but that that /was/ his fused form.)

That said, I have to ask you that you come up with a "regular" set of clothing for Rayn to use when he's not fused.
Oh, I see. Well his clothes aren't really styles like Cacturne's, he's wearing a green t-shirt, black overcoat, and black trousers the only thing that i would see that is like Cacturn's style is the hat, which i will change Sorry for the misunderstanding.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (12:33 PM).
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Thank you; but it's not the T-shirt or pants. It's the gloves; it's the tattoo that appears to be there for no particular reason (that I'd actually like you to explain, please, because it makes little sense to have an actual tattoo concerning the time period); it's the overcoat that seems to have everything intact (for example, why are there no rips or missing buttons?). Everything seems to be made around the fact that he has a Cacturne spirit that makes it themed to me.

Anyways, thanks again for listening and working to fix up your SU.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (12:49 PM).
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Oh o.o Well if you want I could change his gloves or anything else that needs changing, just tell me what and I'll change it to see fit. And as for an explanation on the tattoo, can i maybe explain that in Rp? As it would be a lot easier that way.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (01:04 PM).
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The clothes are fine as a fused form (though the overcoat could very easily be altered, like the buttons becoming spikes), but I'd very much like that Rayn has "regular" attire so he's not going naked when he's unfused. Since clothing is going to be "fixed up" while fused (and styles changed; Aiden's Froslass, for example, effectively turns his shirt and jeans into a kimono), pretty much any normal kid clothes are good.

However, the tattoo /needs/ to be explained or removed, as it wasn't part of the fused form in the first place, and it doesn't make sense as part of the fused form since Cacturne don't have tattoos. The technology for safely applying tattoos is all but gone, and primitive needle methods are extremely dangerous without the sanitation that the Fallout world doesn't have.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (01:11 PM).
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Alright then Time to do some editing! I should have it done in a snap so just check my SU and it should be done.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (01:29 PM).
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I edited my SU, directly addressing those issues
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Old November 5th, 2012 (03:52 PM). Edited November 5th, 2012 by TornZero.
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Crystallized: Yellow is going to be the one giving you a final judging; however, like I said, the clothing is affected like the body — normal clothes generally become part of a spirit wielder's body while fused, and a spike can just as easily sprout from the gloves just like they would the rest of Rayn's body. Maybe one has a hole in the palm from Rayn's random falls and scrapes, and the other one's missing a finger because it got stuck between rocks once, maybe his pants are ripped... somewhere... you get the idea? You'll be fused the majority of the time and the clothes will better reflect the fusion by a temporary mending, so these are trivial things, but it still adds plenty of character in just a few words.

Khawill, nothing seems to have actually /changed/ from the things I first pointed out. He's still pretty much addicted to Oran berries for no explicit reason (along with it, why not Sitrus or a status-healing berry?), and with the gangs you're even contradicting yourself now. You're specifying particular, even fairly organized peoples (paraphrasing your words here), but the first sentence of the paragraph doesn't reflect this because they apparently /don't/ want organization and order.

While a well-placed addiction to something is fine (that is, the Oran obsession should be clearer), it'd be much preferred if the part of the "gangs" was changed outright, rather than trying to dodge the issue you're putting on yourself with it.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (04:03 PM). Edited November 5th, 2012 by machomuu.
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Speaking of getting "addicted to berries"...how would that happen? Berries are the equivalent of fruits in our world, the only real difference is that fruits have vitamins while berries have amplified health properties. But...there'd have to be extraordinary circumstances for one to get addicted to berries. It's true that one can get addicted to almost anything, but when it's something like berries, the intake...or however they are addicted to it would have to be ungodly, and it'd be rather far fetched if berries were to have the same addictive properties as medicine in our world, and people usually get addicted to those due to the pleasure they get from the highs. More than that, there are people who eat fruit almost every day. Heck, vegans and vegetarians, depending on the person, can have them for almost every day for their entire lives. Not too mention that Mako, my character for this RP, worked on a berry farm for a month, likely only eating berries during that time, and he's just fine. One would have to actively go out of their way to get addicted to berries.

I'm no GM, so you can ignore this if you want, but the circumstances for becoming addicted to berries would have to be incredible, and given the dispersion of food in the world of Fallout, it's unlikely that there's actually anyone prone to or capable of berry addiction.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (04:43 PM).
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Another edit again, honestly this is way more complicated than it was supposed to be
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Old November 5th, 2012 (05:04 PM). Edited November 5th, 2012 by machomuu.
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Another edit again, honestly this is way more complicated than it was supposed to be
H-hold on...he had a tumor that was cured by using Oran berries and Sitrus berries? How is that even possible? First, you don't really cure a tumor, you remove them from the body. Also...where would the berries factor in in that? There are so many questions that that raises, but I'd highly recommend not using the tumor, there is almost no possible way to make logical sense out of how Oran and Sitrus berries "curing" that.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (05:13 PM).
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So berries that heal burns and cure freezing makes perfect sense, but a berry that has (in game) healing abilities is not possible? A tumor is a group of cancer cells, growing out of control in a certain part, healing berries can certainly heal or otherwise stop these cells given enough time. I never said he just ate them and poof he was healed.

Why is this getting so realistic, the RP is based on a game where animals have elemental powers and water heals for as much as a potion.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (05:39 PM). Edited November 5th, 2012 by machomuu.
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So berries that heal burns and cure freezing makes perfect sense, but a berry that has (in game) healing abilities is not possible? A tumor is a group of cancer cells, growing out of control in a certain part, healing berries can certainly heal or otherwise stop these cells given enough time. I never said he just ate them and poof he was healed.

Why is this getting so realistic, the RP is based on a game where animals have elemental powers and water heals for as much as a potion.
Yes, but...you're dealing with terminal illnesses now (and one that exists in real life), that's a pretty big deal.

Also, I never said that he did just eat them and get healed. Again, my question is "where do the berries factor in"? It's...uh...possible that...maybe a berry could stop the cells, but that would only really matter in the formation of the tumor rather than...curing it. What's more, why would he need berries afterwards if the tumor were cured? As I said, unless berries had came with some sort of high or some pleasurable effect on the body, why would he want/need more? Then again, this is a different universe with different rules and different logic, but it you are really going to assert that his father found a way to use oran and sitrus berries, two minor healing berries (supposing that their healing properties work for humans, too), could aid in curing a tumor, a terminal illness, I'd recommend explaining it, at the very least.

It's really up to TornZero and Yellow, but...eh. It's just my two cents.
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Old November 5th, 2012 (08:37 PM).
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@Everyone: I've never really elaborated fully on scavenging vs thievery vs cannibalism, but if I haven't said it bluntly enough? In terms of non-murder deaths, scavengers tend to make up the majority of the remaining deaths. Allow me to elaborate. A vegetarian diet is kind of a complex thing to maintain because humans have long evolved past the point that our bodies are made to run efficiently on veggies. Therefore, someone who is struggling to find food at all is probably not going to be able to maintain anything close to a proper diet and will almost certainly suffer both malnutrition and deficiencies, which can very much prove to be fatal. You'd have to have a very wide range of crops on a farm to maintain said diet, so there's really no realistic way around this. This makes them more prone to injury, less energetic. The problems stack, and it definitely does not help when someone decides to attack them.

Thieves can also suffer this fate, but because they have a more lucrative food source they often have a better choice of food to pick from and at the very least, will suffer less from malnutrition and don't have to worry about simply starving to death nearly as much as scavengers. A fully balanced vegetarian diet is virtually impossible due to the lack of proper medical support. This is part of the reason that medical books are in fact still quite valuable.

Cannibals suffers none of these drawbacks. They are going to be stronger, more healthy, more fit for fighting, able to take a hit better, able to think and react faster. Their quality of life physically will generally be a lot higher. However they've got... other things to worry about. I will choose to leave that a tad mysterious (If you wish to learn about it, I recommend having your character research Anne, the Haxorus wielder that was killed in combat recently.)

I will tell you that in terms of thieves vs cannibals which type is better health-wise is subjective. The life of a scavenger completely objectively sucks though.

@Khawill: ...In an RP as dark as this, I dare say I hoped it would be implied that we take ourselves a bit seriously. It's a shame you apparently thought the RP was a joke, but I assure you that was not my intention at all. And y'know what? You're right. This is dragging on too long, the thing being that progress isn't being made. If I were you, I would either put the character idea aside and try to improve it again later once you've put a bit more thought into making it appropriate for the world at hand. That is to say, take a break and try again later. Start over, or abandon the idea of another character altogether.

@Crystallized: In contrast, I no longer have any issue with your appearance section and am ready to accept you. Welcome to the RP!
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Yeah.....Yellow, I'm dropping this one. It was good in concept, but the way the other roleplayers are carrying it out has really put me off. It was fun while it lasted, but then it began to take turns I'm not a fan of. I'm not going to mention any specific instances, however, so as to avoid offending anyone. It has nothing to do with you, or how you've run it. I simply haven't had the motivation to post here any more.
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Old November 8th, 2012 (01:33 PM).
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Hey, uh some guy named Hotmic posted in the Fallout RP, I thought he was an older role player but I went to his page and he has only 1 post, so there is no way he has a SU.

I don't know if you care or not, but I'm just pointing it out.
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Thanks for noticing it, Khawill, and Yellow and I have already done what we could to take care of it; sadly, since the post pretty much totally needs to be deleted, only a mod's going to be able to do that unless hotmic figures out what he did wrong and fixes it himself.
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Odd that he has had his account since 2008 and his first post is in Fallout's IC thread as a post...
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Old November 9th, 2012 (01:00 AM).
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Okay, for the people who see hotmic's posts, please totally and utterly disregard them while this issue with him is sorted out.
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Old November 9th, 2012 (03:43 AM).
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Lol what a bugger, he followed the 100 word rule and don't double post rule at least...
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any who lets start anew shall we!

Name: Howl Jenkins

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Sex: Male

Age: About 12 and a half (doesn't know as he isn't keeping track of the date)

Personality: Courageous, Kind, Regretful (if that makes sense),He has emotional breakdowns (reason below), He is scared of big groups and prefers to travel alone.

Apperence: Pale with long black hair, scars all down his body (reason below).
When Fused: He gains Absols scythe and his tail. his hands turn similar to Abosl's and his eyes turn bright Yellow, His Chest also is similar. He runs on all fours allowing for great speeds and agileness.
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Conditions: He has Minor amnesia and scars all down his body

Back story: Howl and his younger brother Koji where regular children (as regular as possible) just trying to survive in the harsh environment. They didn't Know there parents as they where abandoned at the age of 7 (koji was 5). Being the responsible brother Howl looked after Koji best he could but it wasn't enough and Howl looked for jobs in the underground. This is where the story picks up, A shady man sends them on an errand for him to go a retrieve an old diary kept by a scientist that worked with Pokemon. when they had arrived at the old building they were ambushed and beaten, Koji sustained major injuries and died at the scene and Howl was linked with the soul of an Absol.

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Other: He also has future sight that he can use kinda like a spider sense (spiderman).

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I wake with a aching pain in my head, what had happened? I open my eyes only to find an Absol staring at me. I can't here anything except the humming of silence, I try to stand but find it to be painful so I decide to sit instead.

"You will be fine, I am your Pokemon Spirit. You where found by some passers by, you and your brother were passed out... are you ok?" The Absol was alarmed.

"Yes my brother, Have you seen him he was injured!?" I demanded, knowing it was I who had gotten us into this situation.

"when you were found he had passed on, they did the best they could but it was to late for him. the only way to save you was to link my spirit with yours."

I cant accept the death of my brother, it must not be true!

"I know you have many questions but they will be answered in good time, for now sleep for a little while."

I wake again, as I slept Absol came to me and allowed me to reflect on my situation. I now know that I must go and find out what had happened, I knew it was my fault but what I did was unknown. For now Im going to start my travel to Eterna City. There I might find information on what had Happened.

Again i am truly sorry and hope we can all have a good time.
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