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Old April 11th, 2012 (01:04 PM). Edited August 14th, 2012 by Zero Darkness.
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Plot


Hollows, Quincys, Bounts, The Arrancar, Rebel Zanpakuto, Fullbring, and even treacherous, traitor Shinigami have all been our enemies. They cause us rage, despair, loss, and hate for they have all fought and tried to destroy us. Yet, they have all fallen powerless against us. They have felt our rage, despair, and hate with every arc of our swords. We have always stopped them in the past, but not without the loss of some of our brethren.

This is all true but what happens when we are Soul Reapers are pushed to the edge of extinction? We are now the ones who are nearly powerless. But who has ended our reign?

We know them simply as the Gyaku-gun, the Inverse Army. They are our opposites. Where we cleanse Hollow souls and allow Wholes to pass on, they enslave the Hollows and destroy Wholes, leaving no trace of them, not even a single hell butterfly. They are out to get us and they have nearly succeeded. Our numbers have diminished and the only chance we have is to destroy them all.

The only problem is, how do we do it?

Our only conclusion is too recruit Wholes and humans with high Spirit Pressure. We shall train them, hone their powers, and create the strongest squad the Soul Society has ever known. With them, we will crush the pesky Inverse and reestablish our grip.


You


We have explained the Inverse to you, but you may still wonder what exactly we are. Well, we are Shinigami, Soul Reapers. We are guardians of souls. We use our weapons, Zanpakuto, to allow Wholes, the dead souls, to pass on to Soul Society, as well as cleanse Hollows who were never bad in life. Hollows, however, who killed or did other horrible things in life, we fight and send down to hell. We are namely saviors of souls, both dead and alive, in more ways than one.

This is what we are asking you to become. We are asking you to be saviors of both the dead and the alive. We need you to help us fight the Gyaku-gun for without, there is a chance we will all die. Will you join us?


Information

Spoiler:

Zanpakuto sealed form types:


Most Zanpakutō look like regular katana, with slight variations between them as one would expect between different swords. Their variations are commonly:

Katana (刀): The term katana may be applied to the standard-size, moderately curved, Japanese sword with a blade length of greater than 60 cm (23.6 inches). The katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single-edged blade, a circular or squared guard, and a hilt long enough to accommodate two hands.

Wakizashi (脇差 (わきざし); meaning "side insertion"): A short blade between 30 and 60 cm (12 and 24 inches), with an average of 50 cm (20 inches). It is similar to, but shorter than a katana, and is usually shorter than the kodachi (小太刀 (こだち); meaning "small sword"). The wakizashi was usually worn together with the katana.

When worn together the pair of swords were called daishō, which translates literally as "large and small". The katana was often called the long sword and the wakizashi the companion sword.

Nodachi (野太刀 (のだち); meaning "field sword"): The nodachi was more difficult to wield due to its size and weight. The length of the nodachi's hilt varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). Its cutting capability and range exceeds that of a katana, due to its weight and size.

You can also slightly change the lengths of the blade, the structures of the cross guards, and the color of the hilt. Maybe add something neat and makes it, well, you. Also, you can choose the color of your sheath and maybe even make a pattern on it.

Soul Reapers Abilities:


These will mainly be explained in the RP but to know little before you a style...

Zanjutsu: The art of the sword, the ways to swing it and stab it, there is quiet amazing techniques in Zanjutsu, but you will have to wait to see them!

Kido: These are the "spells" of the Soul Reapers. This art has three sub classes:
Bakudo: The art of binding and barriers.
Hado: The art of destruction and offense.
Healing: The art of healing and restoring.

Hakuda: This is the bare hand art of the Soul Reapers. They jump, they dodge, and they hit.

Hoho: This is the movement art. Mainly consisting of the Flash Step secret technique, a technique that makes you able to take a large distance in a small amount of time. Also has some lethal techniques.

Soul Reapers Uniform:


Shihakusho: The black kimono worn by Shinigami. It is customary to wear a white undergarment underneath. Some wear bright colored scarves with it or shorten the sleeves. They commonly carry their Zanpakutō which is in most cases tied to their obi sash.

Squad Zero:


Name: Zero Division
Captain: Sasuke Hono
Lieutenant: Hidio Kobayashi
Division Specialty: Train high level spirit pressure humans and wholes to fight the Gyaku-Gun.
Division Color: Black
Barracks:
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Spoiler:
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The Squad Zero Barracks are a huge place like all other Barracks. It contains 4 training houses for each art of the Soul Reaper, Dorms and the Hanten Geto – The Inverse Gate. The Barracks is located at the north east side of Seiretei. It has a lake before the dorms and a ground full of grass, making it green, there is a black path starting from the entrance splitting in the lake and then connects at the end of it, and from there to the dorms. At the entrance of the dorms the path is split to two, one goes to the kido house and one to the Zanjutsu house, then the paths are going to the other two houses near them, and the join at the Hanten Geto.

Dorms: The dorms are a traditional Japanese house, located at the center of the Barracks, with 4 rooms, 3 Soul Reapers in a room, the captain room which is also his office, diner room and a gaming room which is also a library.
The building is shaped as a flipped "C", from the lobby there is two paths leading to 2 rooms each. A door to the Diner room, a door to the captain`s room/office and a door to the gaming room/Library.

Kido House: This is the place where you will train your kido powers; there are many parts to the building, a range of targets for ranged kido, and a reigai with soul candy to test bakudo and hado, and a lot of things that can create a kido master!

Zanjutsu House: In this place you will learn the basics of the Zanpakuto and how to use it. It has every possible target that can be, and it even has an underground training hall [similar to where Ichigo learn Bankai] for the more dangerous things.

Hoho House: This place is full with targets to pass which will help you train you Hoho skills. There are a rings and gates to pass as a race between Soul Reapers and a tiny lake with rocks on it to train the focus and accuracy of the Hoho.

Hakuda House: This place has 4 arenas; there will be matches between Soul Reapers, 1vs1, 2vs2, 2vs1 and so on. This place also has boxing rags and many things to train your fists and kicks!

Cero Lake: In the lake you will found two fishes, one white with a black dot on his head, and other black with a white dot on his head. They resemble the Ying and Yang, which resembles the Soul Reapers and Hollows. On the lake there is a path of silver rocks which can be used to meditate or training.

Hanten Geto: This gate looks like the Senkaimon but it is not leading to the Human World, it is leading to the Inverse world, the home of the Gyaku-gun. Currently Squad Zero possesses the only Hanten Geto in all of Seiretei!!



The Bleach Wikia is also a great place to find out things about the Bleach universe, and we highly recommend you to check it!



Rules:


1.PC and RP rules.
2.No Godmodding and no bunnying without permission.
3. Only the GMs choose when you will get Shikai and Bankai.
4. Please limit amount of cussing to a small minimum, damn is alright.
5. Be active. Post at least once a week.
6. At least two paragraphs per post. We want this to be a good RP! 7. We, as GMs, are the rulers here. Listen!
8. Post OOC in, well, the OOC thread!
9. If you won't be able to post, tell one of us and you won't get booted.
10.There is a max of 4 human soul reapers in this RP.
11.Each Rper is allowed more than one character though,only one human per set til we reach all 4.
12.NPC's are only controlled by the GM's unless said so by one of us.



Squad Ranking [This way, we can track the players and their progress.]

Spoiler:

Captain: Sasuke Hono [ZeroDarkness]
Lieutenant: Hidio Kobayashi [TheFinalWatchman]
3rd Seat: Dai Tsubaki [ZeroDarkness]
4th Seat: Kazumi Nakamuro [TheFinalWatchman]
5th Seat: Masao Yukimura [TheFinalWatchman]
6th Seat: Minoru Nao [Reader_Maniac]
7th Seat: Masaru Nariko [JackBlaze]
8th Seat: Ryo Mori [TheFinalWatchman]
9th Seat: Shizuki Suzu [Reader_Maniac]
10th Seat: Itsuki Saru [Zagan]
11th Seat: Alaric Harper [Stingray]
12th Seat: Unknown
13th Seat: Unknown
14th Seat: Unknown
15th Seat: Unknown
16th Seat: Unknown
17th Seat: Unknown
18th Seat: Unknown
19th Seat: Unknown
20th Seat: Unknown



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General

Name: (Self Explanatory, a Japanese name would be the best option as it will keep the style of the story)
Height: (Feet/in or cm)
Weight: (Lbs or kg)
Gender: (Male or female)
Race: (Whole or Human)
Age Appearance: (For those who are humans, it is your real age, while wholes are age they look)

Appearance

Clothing: (What you wear when not in Shinigami Uniform)
Physical: (Build, Tattoos, Looks, etc.)

Personality

(strengths, weaknesses, beliefs, etc.)

Shinigami Specialty: (Kido, Huho, Zanjutsu, or Hakuda)

History

(How has your life been thus far?)

Zanpakuto

[Like in the real Bleach universe, the Soul Reapers don`t know what the Shikai or Bankai forms of their Zanpakuto will be or even their names. We want the same to go here. You can only choose how it will look in it's sealed form and recommend what you would like it to be. We, the GMs, will look at this as well as your character's style and create your Shikai and Bankai.]

Name: GM fill

Sealed form: (Umm, what type of weapon is it in it's sealed form?)

Spirit Appearance: GM fill

Type: GM fill

Release Command: GM fill

Shikai: (Initial Release. Recommendations?)

Bankai: (Final release. Recommendations?)

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Old April 13th, 2012 (06:21 AM).
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This may seem confusing if you don`t know the universe of bleach, but we have 5 characters controlled by me and the last watchman and we will guide you into this universe.
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Old April 13th, 2012 (10:47 AM). Edited July 4th, 2012 by Zero Darkness.
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But if you find the time, come okay?
my SU

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Name: Sasuke Hono [Hono is Blaze]
Height: 1.80 Cm
Weight: 64kg
Gender: Male
Age Appearance: He looks like a man in his early 20s.
Species: Once was a Whole before becoming the Shinigami he is today.

Appearance

Clothing: Sasuke constantly wears his uniform and captain haori when in the Soul Society. The haori has a flame like pattern at the bottom while the inside is a pure black. The only difference is that when he has no fear of attack, he doesn't possess his Zanpakuto with him. However, when he does his Zanpakuto is held in a black sheath connected to the right side his waist by his obi sash.
When his soul is in his gigai, he wears a normal black, long sleeved shirt, dark blue jeans, and a pair of black sneakers.

Physical: Sasuke possesses a regular human build that is not to fat yet not to skinny either. He has long, black hair with his bangs falling both between his eyes and on to the left side of his face. His eyes are a light blue color. His face is clean shaven and his skin is unblemished.

Personality: After Momo, his Squad's former lieutenant, died in one of the fights against the Gyaku-gun, Sasuke`s personality changed, instead of being selfish and lazy, he became helpful and energetic. It might of been because he became the new lieutenant of squad 5 or simply because he felt guilty for not being able to help his friend's enough before their deaths. He is willing to protect his subordinates and is always helpful when it comes to training.

He promised to himself that he will not let anyone that is under his command die because of a battle, especially when fight the Gyaku-Gun.

When Sasuke becomes angry, he may lose control of his emotions so much that he'll destroy anything in his path. When this side of him comes out, it is best you just stay back and leave him to sort whatever out.

Shinigami Specialty: Sasuke is a trained master in kido. He can easily do a high level kido without the incantation and it will still work great. He likes to forge his own kido spells by upgrading or combining other spells. His signature move is the Hado #4 spell, Byakurai. Even if this is a low level Kido, Sasuke has perfected it in such a way that he could do nearly anything with it, thus he is known as ""The Pale Lightning."

History: Sasuke was born in the Soul Society, and more specifically, in the East Rukongai District. He lived a peaceful life of a kid in the soul society, there were times when he was a little bit hungry but his "family" always kept him satisfied even if this means that they will be hungry instead of him. Sasuke had a few friends, all of them dreamed about being a Soul Reaper, few of them had some spiritual pressure but whenever Sasuke showed them his they all got amazed, it was so large and so focused that it was hard to believe that he never had trained; his friends always kept telling him that he will be a captain of the thirteen quart guard squads but he always told that he can only dreamed about that.
After few years Sasuke and a bunch of his friends went to the Shino Academy, the place where future Soul Reapers are trained and study. Sasuke fast exceeded his class and his friends and was putted on the special accelerated class which as its name suggest had a faster study of the materials. Sasuke was good in all the combat forms of the Soul Reapers except one, Hakuda. He was very bad at hand to hand combat and due to this he got mocked in the classes of Hakuda, every time failing to do the drill. But Sasuke show them in what he really good at, Kido, when they had a Byakurai training he could fire it in the first time, and hit the center of the target, he was good in all the Kido spells and was able to fire a high class Kido, where his class mates were stuck behind him. Except from Kido, Sasuke was also good at Zanjutsu and Hoho, he fight fierce with the sword and moved fast like the light.

After six years of hard training Sasuke was able to exam to the thirteen quart guard squads, he failed in the first time, but at the second time he passed. He then became the tenth seat in squad five. Most of the time when a Soul Reaper that was from the best in the Academy comes to the quart guard squads he is no longer the best, because he get surrounded in the best of the best. But all Sasuke`s squad members was amazed from him, and his talent, they couldn't believe that he was just entered the Squads. Sasuke climbed fast the ladder of ranks and after a time he became the third seat of squad five.
He became good friends with Momo, the Squad's lieutenant, and Hidio Kobayashi, the fourth seat officer during his time there. The three of them always had tons of fun as they fought Hollows as well as being able to grow strong together. Hidio and Sasuke trained each other, Sasuke trained Hidio in Kido and Hidio trained Sasuke in Zanjutsu. At that time, Sasuke had already mastered Hado #4 Byakurai, and he could do almost everything with it; then he got the title The Pale Lightning [Byakurai].

But any good story had to end, this one ended when Momo was sent to fight the first wave of the Gyaku-gun, a new mysterious enemy, who`s said to be stronger then the Arrancars. No one had returned from this battle, Momo had to break the limiter that putted on any captain or lieutenant in the human world, so their vast power will not destroy the world instead of protecting him; but it still didn`t helped, the enemy was much stronger, Momo died and that was the fate of all the Soul Reapers that were sent there.

Sasuke was broken; one of his best friends had died. In her place, he became the lieutenant and on that day, he promised to himself that he would not let anyone under his command die. He wanted to become stronger so his promise will not brake and after a few months he obtained his Bankai. Unlike any Soul Reaper it took Sasuke six months to master it, not ten years, due to his vast spiritual pressure. But Momo wasn`t the only one to die, every once in a while a wave of Gyaku-gun came to the human world, and Soul Reapers was sent to stop them, each time they died, after learning that the enemy is stronger than an average Soul Reaper they start sending captains and lieutenants. But some of the Gyaku-gun even exceeded captains, as another lieutenant and a captain was defeated in battle and died. The other captains had to flee every time, or their fate was the same.

After a time, a message from the head captain Yamamoto, about creating a new squad, squad Zero, to fight the Gyaku-gun was delivered in all the Seireitei. Sasuke knew that this was his time, not for revenge, to protect; he knew that he should be the one fighting the Gyaku-gun and so he asked to be the captain of the new squad. He got six recommendations and six approvals from the twelve captains of the Thirteen Quart Guard Squads; and so he became the new captain of the new squad. He then got a mission from the Head Captain Yamamoto, to find and bring as much humans and wholes that had a vast spiritual pressure like his, and train them to fight the Gyaku-gun. He knew well enough what potential lie inside this kind of beings, as he was one. He asked to bring Hidio Kobayashi to be his lieutenant. He then got three other Soul Reapers that seemed to be master in different things to help him create Squad Zero. The barracks was built fast and they started search humans and wholes to join the Squad.

Zanpakuto

Name: Kurimuzon [クリムゾン, Crimson]

Sealed Form: He doesn't have one; Kurimuzon is a Constant-Release type Zanpakuto. This means it is always in its Shikai due to the vast amount of soul energy Sasuke has.

Spirit Appearance: http://wikimon.net/images/thumb/f/f9/Apollomon.png/212px-Apollomon.png

Inner World: Sasuke`s Inner World is a red plane full with active volcanos, there is a lot of lava there but it will only harm Sasuke and Kurimuzon if they are weak to resist it. The skies are dark blue, filled with many black fogs; the air is fine and very clear for change. When Sasuke is depressed, sad or scared the lava will stop flowing; sometimes Sasuke can be so depressed, sad or scared that his Inner world will sink into the ocean [similar to what happened to Ichigo when he learned the Final Getsuga Tensho] and it will be hard to him to use his Zanpakuto, due to the fact it is Fire type Zanpakuto.

Type: Elemental Type - Fire

Release Command: None

Shikai: In his Shikai Release, Kurimuzon takes the form of a crimson daito [Japanese long sword]. The cross guard has four prongs, each bent out to form the shape of the manji. The hilt and the cross guard are black and the blade is crimson.

Shikai Abilities: In his Shikai state, Kurimuzon can create crimson colored flames made from spirit energy that can burn everything in sight. Sasuke, after perfecting the Shikai, is able to control the flames movement and intensity.

Reddomūnsukā (レッドムーンスカー, Red Moon Scar): Spirit energy is gathers in the tip of Kurimuzon blade and then it launched with a slash of the blade in the form of a crimson red scar; Sasuke can use Reddomūnsukā in many ways, he can slash it at his enemy normally, or doing a lot larger area attacks, like releasing the attack while Kurimuzon is in the ground, making the manji symbol with crimson red spirit energy.

Bankai: Akakiryū [赤き竜, The Crimson Dragon]: When Sasuke uses his Bankai a pair of metallic wings and a chest guard appears on himself [ http://images.wikia.com/digimon/images/c/c0/RizeGreymon_b.jpg . He however, doesn't possess the gun and still keeps his Shinigami form.] The 6 cannons on his wings [3 on each] are called Crimson Cannons. In his Bankai, Sasuke still has Kurimuzon's Shikai Blade, but now it is darker and just a little bit longer.

The thing is that the cannons aren't exactly cannons. They simply make flames that Sasuke and Akakiryū can manipulate.

Bankai Abilities: In his Bankai state, Akakiryū`s blade can create crimson flames in the same way as in his Shikai state as well as with the six crimson cannons on his wings.

The wings also give Sasuke the ability to fly in the sky and move faster. When they are activated to fly and quickly move, the wings are glow a crimson red. Sasuke can control the flames in this form just like in his Shikai form, but now the flames move much faster and more accurate.

Kurimuzon kizuato [クリムゾン傷跡, Crimson scar]: This time, the attack is much faster and stronger than in the Shikai form; however, the flames are darker than before. Due to his new wings and powerful flash step, he can change the frequency of the attack and charge another one in more directions to trap the opponent.


Honō no danmaku [炎の弾幕, Flame Barrage]: Sasuke creates crimson flames from his six crimson cannons and then he forms them in the shape of his Akakiryū, he then launch the blades to his enemy in a very high speed. The attack can be lethal if it hits the head, neck heart or every other important part of the body, but it can be useful also if it hits other parts like the legs as it cut their movement and slow the enemy down and also can block the enemy way.

Doragon no saishū denka [ドラゴンの最終電荷, Final Charge of the Dragon]: Doragon no saishū denka is Akakiryū`s ultimate attack. Sasuke creates flames from his cannons as well as his blade and then engulfs himself and his sword within them. From there, he charges at the opponent at high speeds with his wings and slashes the charged attack at the opponent. After Sasuke slashes his opponent, a huge pillar of flames is created from the enemy, burning everything under and above him.
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My only problem with joining if I get the time would be the fact that you cannot customize your Shikai or Bankai appearance. Its like saying you aren't allowed to customize your clothes. I can understand why, but its a big part of being a Shinigami.
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My only problem with joining if I get the time would be the fact that you cannot customize your Shikai or Bankai appearance. Its like saying you aren't allowed to customize your clothes. I can understand why, but its a big part of being a Shinigami.

I see your point. It's just that we thought it would be interesting to have people be surprised just a bit by their Zanpakuto. The thing is we are going to be basing the sword on your recommendations, not only our own choices.

Most likely, the sword will be exactly like what you wanted in the end. Either way, I'll talk to Zero and see if we should change it. Thanks for stating your thoughts though.
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I think that the abilities and the type and look, isn't the important thing, the important thing is how you fight with the sword, what is yours battle style? Take for example my character Sasuke, he will most likely use kido in the battle as well as his sword, he might even do a combo combining both one of his attacks and a hado. So what I'm trying to say is that like in bleach universe you create your on fighting style, while learning what your sword can do! Also as watchman said, we will create the zanpakuto with your recomandations and we might talk with you here or in pm or other ways to see on what direction you are.

And I might as well add that one of the big mysteries in bleach is how the Zanpakuto is created, maybe they forge it and maybe it just apear! The thing is that what we planned is that you will have that feeling of unknown about your zanpakuto like every soul reaper! And sometimes breaking the norma of choosing every tiny detail of your character will end fun and will keep players interested in the RP, actually I have an idea that will be a huge new thing in all the aspect of the Zanpakuto and it will be somewhere after we will master the bankai but this is all I can tell, I will give you a word, Gin'noken!
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Actually, because of the gyaku-gun the academy paused so all the trained reapers could help, you guys are wholes or humans that have a vast amount of spirit pressure( like Ichigo) that picked up to squad zero and trained by five soul reapers. The idea is that soul society got desperate so they started searching for answers, then they remembered Ichigo and what he could do in so little time of training and thought about a squad of people like him and this is how squad zero created! You might read the histories sections of the characters because there is some important thing in them like Momo's death and stuff
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Watchman and I decided that the max amount of humans will be 3, watchman will have a human character which meens that we will have 4 humans, all from karakura town, but they don`t know each other, unless you make it like this. For the other characters they will be wholes, there is no big diffrence in this decision between human and whole in the advance of the RP, so don`t get disappointed if you can`t make a human, and we restrict it to only one human per user so this will be fair.
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Name: Minoru Nao (Nao means docile)
Height: 5 ft.
Weight: 150 lbs.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age Appearance: 21

Appearance

Clothing: Nao tends to wear carpenter blue jeans with a leather belt in all weather. If it is warm, he may go out with just a shirt. If it is cold, he will wear a black zipp-up sweatshirt along with it

Physical: Nao has little definition at all on his body, his musles seemingly small. His hair though, is fairly noticeable, being that it is a straw blond, from his fathers side of the family. He keeps it short, bangs barely below the eyebrows, but always spiked up. His hair naturaly tends to get like that at the end of the day anyways, haveing thick hair and all. He has green eyes behind his rectangular glasses, thin eyebrows, and a serious expression a majority of the time when not around friends. He has only one tattoo, which is a thick black band drawn around his wrist, with a sky blue filled in circle in it on top with his horoscope sign, gemini(II), in black.

Personality

Nao is an introvert, prefering to think alone than to talk with anyone. He holds little patience for anything though, always on his feet and walking around if possible, or writeing in a notebook he brings with him everywhere. Nao is nervious around groups, and tends to avoid them. He may seem quick witted in most normal situations, but it is only because he spends a lot of his free time imagining what if questions, and has already decided beforehand what he should do. If he faces a new situation, he may freeze up, or retreat to think up of a plan, since he has rarely been successful in 'winging it'. He is a lot more open to ghost, or people who he really trust, including Suzu, his little sister. He trust the ghost, since their are no people that he knows that can talk to them, so it isn't like his secrets will get out if he accedentally tells one. It takes a long time for Nao to trust, but the few friendships he does manage to make last through thick and thin. He loves to write, and sometimes takes ideas for his mystery novels from the ghost themselves. He has tried to stay in practice of martial arts to the best of his ability, but has grown rusty from being away for so long.

Shinigami Specialty: Huho: Nao is particularly gifted in Huho, takeing little practice to get above average for his fast movements. Hakuda is a close second, since other than a chance to learn Martial Arts at a young age, he enjoys secretly thinking up of ways to defend himself. His Zanjutsu is sub-par, and is more likely to see him follow or precede his sword strikes with a punch or a kick.

History

He is the first child of two, though his parents are divorced for reasons niether are ready to talk about. Nao's first house was a two story house at the edge of Karakura Town, though he has few memories of it back then, since he was young. His mother(an artist) refuses to see him most of the time, since his hair is the same as his father's and brings back memories of him. He hasn't been in the old house once, though he sees his younger sister, Suzu('bell', now currently 19), outside of the house. They stop and talk, and try to keep in contact, dispite their parents stubborness. He lived with his father, in a large appartment, closer to the center of town near his father's work(Police). Nao lived on the 13th floor, his room had a few works of Caligraphy adornin the walls, though the appartment had a rather militarian organization to it, with plain dressers, a gray couch, old TV, Ect.. The walls were bare though the rest of the house, save for his dad's collection of weapons in his room. He was told never to touch them, though Nao did on rare occurances, but put them back exactly as it was. His father put Nao though Martial Arts, and he did rather well. He had talent in the staff and spear, and was known to be fairly swift. Nao got a black belt, though was taken out of the program as he started high school, and is out of practice. He tries to go through the moves, if only to keep from getting fat. He moved out after High school, and became a so far mildly successful mystery novelist.

Nao has always been able to see ghost, though never as clearly as he does now. As a child, all he saw were blurs, which at the time, he didn't understand, and he convinced himself that his glasses are smudged. However, as he grew older, they grew clearer and clearer, and as a teen, he was unable to avoid the fact he could see ghost. He grew more and more interested in them, instead of scared, as his sight got better, and began to hang out with them instead of humans. At school and at home, He was seen as a loner, which worryed a few adults. He made a few 'human' friends to just make it look like he was shy, though he does it just for show, and only truely cares about his ghost friends. That is, until they start disappearing. He has noticed that they tend to disappear every few monthes or so since their death, and has never seen one that has "lived" past a year. He figures that they found their peace or something. It is rarer to see black robed men(?) running across rooftops that no one seems to notice, even when they walk in front of them, but he keeps it to himself, not wanting the attention.

He currently lives alone in a cheap appartment. A little bit of influence from his father, and a little bit of not haveing the money, he keeps an organized, simple look to his one room appartment. He has a window right above a dresser with his small notebook and ornate pen he brings everywhere, right next to his bed. A TV sits at the end of his bed on top of a short table. His closet is next to the door, and he uses the bathroom at the end of the hall to shower and such. He has a work table against the wall opposite of the bed(which he also uses for eating on), and a shelf above it for the few books he reads. He brought with him the works of caligraphy that use to hang in his room, and hangs them above his bed, except for the one that reads 'creativity', which holds a centerplace above his worktable. He also has a small refrigerator next to the stove and microwave, with a sink, between the worktable and the closet. His rooms saveing grace is that it is long, or else he would feel shut in. His current ghost friends include a small girl(brutally murdered), a office man(suicide), ornery old man(natural causes), and a young boy(accedent).

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Name: GM fill

Sealed form: Just a normal Katana, with a square handle. the handle is wrapped in red and black thread, with the red thread woven into the black thread to make diamond shapes.

Spirit Appearance: GM fill

Spirit Personallity: GM fill

Inner World: An aerial view of his world would be a vast plain, green with grasses, with a slight breeze pushing the tops like waves of an ocean. However, it is not how the the ruler will see it. Starting out, Nao will only be an inch tall(the grass will look like trees from his prespective)!! He will be able to leap to the hieght of the top of the grass, like a grasshopper, and 'survey the area', despite the appearant impossibillity of it.
His emotions hold a lot of sway in the look of the plain, ussually in the severity of the wind, but may affect in different ways depending on the emotion such as rage burning sections, rain for depression, or a dust cloud for dispair. While the damaged parts may eventually repair, signified by the grasses compleatly growing back, it may leave scars across the land, such as the fire leaving scorched ground. His state of mind also holds sway in how tall Nao is. As he gains power(as a result, gaining confidence), he will grow taller until the grass only reaches up to his waist at his best.

Type: GM fill

Release Command: GM fill

Shikai: (Initial Release. Recommendations?)I was thinking either spears, or a sort of binding that hangs from his wrist/ankles like a bangle that would focus on his hand to hand fighting technique.

Bankai: (Final release. Recommendations?)If you pick Spears, multiple wind spears? If you pick something else, I trust your judgement. Wind is definatly what I want may power to be.
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I guess I should explain it, Whole is a human that died and now moved by the Soul Reapers to the next world, the Soul Society, his aging proccess is slowed, and he can live for many years then in the human world, and so his look, he ca be fairly old in years but will look young. When a whole dies, he joins the cycle of rebirth, and born as a new human without memories in the Human World.
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Name: Masaru Nariko [Nariko is Thunder]
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 150 lbs
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age Appearance: 18


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Clothing: Simple and nothing extravagant, Masaru usually wears blue jeans with black and white sneakers and straight t-shirt with a symbol of a small pig laughing, which he finds hilarious and he has in various different colors. When the temperature gets colder he can be seen wearing a white parka coat not fully zipped so that people can still see the pig on his shirt.

Physical: Masaru is surprisingly not scrawny for a boy who does nothing much and could almost be called muscular but still just a skinny kid. He has eyes of a jade green hue and black hair styled in a fauxhawk and he has a chinstrap sort of beard. Masaru's personality though leads him to look untidy at times with his hair messed up and even when at school he would be seen with his shirt untucked but with a straight face as if he was doing nothing wrong, but its almost as if sometimes he doesn't even realise.

Personality

Masaru is a calm and cool-headed individual bordering almost on care free and lazy. Mostly being perceived as a slacker Masaru would deny that fact, if he made the effort to deny it, but rarely proves people thoughts about him wrong. His friends though see him differently as a boy who regularly gives them jokes and as his don't care attitude usually gets them in trouble with teachers and superiors but it always gives them something to laugh about later. His love for his friends and family always shows though and that is one thing nobody can doubt about him. When he actually sets his mind to something he gets it done.

Shinigami Specialty:

Zanjutsu- Masaru relies mainly on swordplay, and thus would be considered a swordsmanship specialist who relies on his speed as well. His style of fighting would be a style in which he would attempt to end any fight as quick as possible. His use of kido would be limited and only used in instances when Zanjutsu alone would be failing him, using Bakudō to bind the opponent before releasing a flurry of quick attacks with his Zanpakuto.

History

Masaru grew up any an extraordinary family with both parents being successful in their field of work and two older brothers who left school with honors and are well known around where Masaru grew up. When Masaru was born he was tipped for greatness as well and from a young age was being compared to his brothers and was told he had to live up to their standards. His parents didn't pressure him though and it was usually the words of those around him and elders in the community that would place those expectations on him.

He tried his best for some time but when it looked a futile effort to be as good as his brothers he became a slacker of sorts, despite all the potential he had. A talented boy in sports and in his schoolwork Masaru eventually fell of the radar and was now being branded as a slacker or more often a waste of talent. When needed though he can prove his worth and has never failed a class but has never really topped any, thinking that the effort is unnecessary and draw unwanted attention to him. His friends love him for his jokes and care free attitude but always knows he can do better than what he has settled for. But all Masaru wants is to live a normal average life.

For as long he can remember though Masuro had always been able to see Pluses, without his own know;edge of what they are, or as some would say "ghosts". Masaru always wrote this off as nothing, more like his imagination running wild and any conversation he had with these imaginary people made Masaru really have to question his own sanity. Growing up those "imaginary companions" meant that Masaru was never ever really alone ranging from nice , kind motherly figures to even the most hostile of persons made him start to wonder if one person fantasy could actually be so vivid and life like. Masaru tried to deny, tried to not believe in what was supernatural and not of this world but in the back of his mind in the deepest regions of his subconsciousness he knew that there was more to this world than he first believed.

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Name: GM fill

Sealed form: Is the same as any other Katana just longer and with a slight more curved tip almost hook like at the end, the crossguard and the hilt though are all white.

Spirit Appearance: GM fill

Type: GM fill

Release Command: GM fill

Personallity: GM fill

Inner World: Masaru's inner world is a bright white room that changes color at will anytime he blinks his eyes but is completely devoid of gravity, sound or any form of distractions possible.

Shikai: (Initial Release. Recommendations?) A sword and shield combination. His zanpakuto would turn into a long blade of pure lightning energy and he would also have a shield of pure energy as well.

Bankai: (Final release. Recommendations?) Masaru would produce a pair of electric wings and he would now possess two swords of lightning instead of the one he had in his shikia form. He would also have little spheres of electricity that hover around him and would move and act as shields when he is attacked.
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Jackblaze, the SU is good, but I don`t think that a sealed form zanpakuto can be all white, it should be like any regular sword, you can only tweak the crossguard, hilt and maybe the length, but the color of the blade, this is something that only in shikai and bankai happans, and not in sealed form. But, except the blade, the crossguard and hilt can be white.
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There is a lot of open spots, except for the humans characters which there is a max amount, so you will have a spot d4rka8isz.
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Just to note something, my character Sasuke Hono`s attacks may sometimes have a connection to the manji symbol-卍, this is not the symbol of the nazis, this is a japanease letter, and unlike the nazi`s symbol it is not angled, it is used for a lot of the games we know today, "the legend of zelda", "maple story", even in the bleach series Ichigo bankai daito crossguard is designed after the manji symbol [btw, this part I copied to Sasuke`s crossguard, but this is minor].
And to finish this, I`m jewish and at first when I saw this, I was in a little shock, but then I relized that this is not the same symbol, and the manji was before the nazi`s symbol, which means, it has nothing to do with them!

So here I clerefied this thing, so in the future there will be no quastions about it.
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the personallity is good, but for the race and histroy - you wrote you are a whole, but in your history you are human? and sorry for not mention this before, but when you come to soul soceity you lose your memories when you were human, this makes a reunion between friends and families almost impossible [they might be toghter but they won`t know that they was toghter in the human world].

But if you will change your race to human, it will make it kinda work, just delete the part says he will meet them in soul society, because no one knows about this place [even ghosts] until his dead or someone told him.
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the personallity is good, but for the race and histroy - you wrote you are a whole, but in your history you are human? and sorry for not mention this before, but when you come to soul soceity you lose your memories when you were human, this makes a reunion between friends and families almost impossible [they might be toghter but they won`t know that they was toghter in the human world].

But if you will change your race to human, it will make it kinda work, just delete the part says he will meet them in soul society, because no one knows about this place [even ghosts] until his dead or someone told him.
OBJECTION!!!

It isn't true that you lose your memories when you enter the Soul Society. Where you enter is not always the same and sometimes you lose your memories. When you are reborn you lose all memories of your previous life. If you lost your memories Shibata (the cockatiel that Chad befriends) would not have remembered Chad during the Soul Society Arc. Memories vanish over time but they don't immediately get lost most of the time.

Sorry for that, on another note I have got used to my timetable and I think I should be able to fit another RP in. I might have my SU done while I wait for Cybeast.
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