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Old August 3rd, 2012, 07:43 AM
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Man, this is kind of sad.

Anyways... Can someone list out for me the changes to people leaving the RP?
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Old August 6th, 2012, 04:30 PM
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C'mon everyone! Let's not let this RP die now! I'm sure things will get exciting when the next IC day arrives!

I will see if I can post tomorrow on my 3DS. Right now I'm a bit busy with other stuff, so until next time my friends!
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Old August 8th, 2012, 05:15 PM
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I am back....What did I miss?
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Old August 8th, 2012, 06:40 PM
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Good to see you back Genevieve!

On another note it'll be a shame if this RP dies so lets not let it happen! I'm willing to post if someone is prepared to interact with Teruyoshi but with no further interactions there is nothing meaningful for him to do until the next IC day. Anything else that isnt character interaction would be pointless filler in my eyes as the setting lends itself poorly to developing Teruyoshi's character much more than it has been already. I'll make a character developing filler post if required but would rather he gets to meet people other than Makoto!

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Old August 8th, 2012, 07:24 PM
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Oh yay, I am finally over my sickness! I ended up with like a high fever or something, so I wasn't allowed on. But now, I'm back, and can't wait to begin role-playing with all of you guys again!~ :3

I mean seriously. hasn't it been forever sense we really did role-play that much on here, other that you of course, Diamond. So yeah, I will try my hardest to get a post up tomorrow morning before I go shopping for my school supplies, I'm starting Middle School this year ya know!
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Old August 8th, 2012, 09:17 PM
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I mean seriously. hasn't it been forever sense we really did role-play that much on here, other that you of course, Diamond. So yeah, I will try my hardest to get a post up tomorrow morning before I go shopping for my school supplies, I'm starting Middle School this year ya know! :)
Yeah, we seem to be slowing down quite a bit... but I'm sure that won't stop us from making this RP a great experience!

Also, that's awesome! Middle school pretty fun. I kind of wish I could go back lol. I'm gonna be a senior in high school and uh... not looking forward to it tbh -.-

This is super off-topic but omg I almost spilled my chocolate milk on my bed while typing this and I had a mini heart attack XD
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Old August 10th, 2012, 01:26 PM
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Wow, am I like, the youngest in the role-play or something? X3

I mean, seriously, you guys are all in high-school, I think. . . Well any ways back on topic. I really would like to write a post up for Aimi, but right now I seriously don't have any creative outlet at all and plus, she has been kinda role-playing with herself lately, and I don't want to do that, because it get no where, except with her and Nina doing random things and such with each other to pass the time. . .
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Old August 10th, 2012, 02:00 PM
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^Honestly, I never would have guessed you weren't in High School, let alone Middle School. It certainly doesn't show in your writing, or the way you talk (I mean, I was told I was articulate at a young age, but not that articulate)

On-Topic, I'll try posting today or tomorrow. I was originally waiting for someone else to post, but I guess posting now is appropriate.
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Old August 10th, 2012, 02:45 PM
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Full Name: Masahiro Tashimata
Nicknames: Hisoka
Sex: Male
Age: 16
Family: Sacred Fire
Career: He used to be a herbalist for his village.
Appearance: He's 5'7, and 120 pr unds.He has long, jet black hair that reaches his chest that he lets hang loose. Masahiro has a scar acrosss his face from his left ear to the corner of his right lip.His eyes are deep hazel with red flecks in them. He could be called handsome, and all the girls in his village loved him, but he never noticed.He always wears a beige robe and thongs(sandals). He has a sheath engraved with the Japanese characters for Night's Bane.夜 の ベイン. He has a plain leather quiver he keeps three dozen arrows in at the most.
Personality: Masahiro believes in destiny and following your heart. He is always dead serious. During his time as a musician.He loves the beauty of fire, and often keeps a beautiful relic he found while on a hunt for rare ingredients, a glass sphere with a flame burning in the center. He has never loved a woman, and rarely smiles.He is a slave to honor, and always fights fair.
History: Masahiro never trully knew his parents. When he was born, they left him on the street. The village gardener found baby Masahiro and raised him himself, though he was never very fortunate. Masahiro grew to love the man like a father, and spent almost every moment with him. He grew up in watching other children from the shadows, living a miserable, lonely life, and spent time with no one besides the gardener. He began to show great interest in the village's garden and spent hours with the gardener. The village herbalist heard of this, and saught him out. He found him, and asked if he would like to work with him. Masahiro worked with his village's herbalist as an apprentice at age five. He always helped who ever came, just as tradition was. He took up playing the lute, and learned songs of adventures and bravery. He began to sing the songs, and became a musician as people loved his preforming. He was a master with a lute, and loved to play anywhere, but his true love still in the art of herbalism. When he was introduced to a warrior, he fell in love with the way of combat and dropped all personal attachments (Except for the gardener and herbalist) to train with the sword and bow. No one would take him under the wing, so he trained himself. He gained his scar while honing his skills with 夜 の ベイン. He was distracted when he heard a scream. He jumped while his sword's cord was around his wrist, and it leapt out of his grasp and cut his face. His fame as a warrior was growing, but the village herbalist asked him to do a favor. The herbalist was his idol, but it involved killing a Sneasel. He couldn't do it.

Skills: Masahiro is a skilled herbalist and uses potions he's mixed together in battle to improve his fighting or to heal. He is a master with a sword and a bow.He has talent with a lute, and he has a melodious voice, and he served as a bard in the past.
Flaws: Masahiro always does what his heart tells him to, and it always tells him to do the 'stupid' things. He is oblivious to love and has driven many friends away. He is also very solitary.
Weapon: Masahiro uses a two-handed katana named Night's Bane.He also uses recurve bow that he has no name for, but names every arrow he fires.
Pokemon: Duslops
Pokemon Name: Shade
Pokemon Personality: Dead serious, just as Masahiro. He, also like Masahiro, has never loved, and rarely smiles.
Pokemon History: Shade had grown up quite isolated from humans. He left his fellow Dusclops at a young age and fought whatever pokemon challenged him. He soon became a skilled warrior and had a powerful shadow punch and shadow ball. He still fights as he used to.
Pokemon Specialty: Shade is skilled with close combat, and rarely uses his abilities to use, preferring to fight with honor. He has slightly above average long range attacks.
Pokemon Flaws: With the same as Masahiro, but he has a strong fear of fire.

Proof of Reading: A woman was linked with Ho Oh, a man with Lugia. Lugia accidentally created a giant storm. Ho Oh and the woman were enraged, and attacked. The three children linked with Raiku, Entei, and Suicune perished when the tower burned down. Ho Oh resurrected them Sacred Ashes. They grew weak, and the Lugia and man saw an opportunity and left for an island. They divided into a second family and war broke out.

Anything Else: Nevermind
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Old August 11th, 2012, 07:11 PM
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Would anybody care to see of I'm accepted or not?
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Old August 11th, 2012, 07:46 PM
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Old August 11th, 2012, 08:12 PM
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Alrighty.Now,I begin the ultimate waitting game.Theinportant one anyways.
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Old August 12th, 2012, 01:27 PM
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Yeah, we seem to be slowing down quite a bit... but I'm sure that won't stop us from making this RP a great experience!

Also, that's awesome! Middle school pretty fun. I kind of wish I could go back lol. I'm gonna be a senior in high school and uh... not looking forward to it tbh -.-

This is super off-topic but omg I almost spilled my chocolate milk on my bed while typing this and I had a mini heart attack XD
Number 1: PC has been running slowly in general, so it isn't just this RP. I'm not exactly sure why it happens all at once, but it just does.

Number 2: I graduated soooooo I'm better than all of you... ((KIDDING)) *shot*

Number 3: Are you gonna share that shake?

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Wow, am I like, the youngest in the role-play or something? X3

I mean, seriously, you guys are all in high-school, I think. . . Well any ways back on topic. I really would like to write a post up for Aimi, but right now I seriously don't have any creative outlet at all and plus, she has been kinda role-playing with herself lately, and I don't want to do that, because it get no where, except with her and Nina doing random things and such with each other to pass the time. . .
The RP travels about as fast as the community of RPers does, so we'll be at the New Moon Festival for some time longer, but afterward we'll be able to settle in with characters in their homes, or doing their jobs... Getting into their "Norm". But don't worry, the norm won't last long...

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Full Name: Haru Tashimata
Nicknames: Tashimata
Sex: Male

Age: 16
Family: Sacred Fire

Career: He used to be a herbalist for his village's apothecary, then a bard at the local inn, but now he serves as a mercenary.
Appearance: He's 5'7, and 120 pounds.He has long, jet black hair that reaches his chest that he lets hang loose. Haru has a scar acrosss his face from his left ear to the corner of his right lip.His eyes are deep hazel with red flecks in them. He could be called handsome, and all the girls in his village loved him, but he never noticed.He always wears boiled leather armor as in a cuirass, greaves, boots, gauntlets, and a helmet whenever he is in battle.He has a sheath engraved with the Japanese characters for Night's Bane.
Spoiler:
夜 の ベイン
(Yoru No Bein)

He has a plain leather quiver he keeps three dozen arrows in at the most.

Personality: Haru believes in destiny and following your heart. He is always dead serious, and only learned songs of battles and glory during his time as a bard.He loves the beauty of fire, and often keeps a dangerous relic he found while on an assignment, a glass sphere with a flame burning in the center. If he would drop it, it would explode and burn everything within a fifty foot radius.He has never loved a woman, and rarely smiles.He is a slave to honor, and always fights fair.
History: Haru never trully knew his parents. He grew up in an orphanage, living a miserable, lonely life. He began to show great interest in the orphanage's garden and spent hours with the gardener. The village herbalist heard of this, and saught him out. He found him, and asked if he would like to work with him. Haru worked at his village's apothecary as an apprentice at age five, but after ten years, he quit due to an incident involving two wrong ingredients mixed. He took up playing the lute, and learned songs of glory and legendary battles. He began to sing the songs, and became a bard as people loved his preforming. He was a master with a lute, but his career ended in a short year when he was introduced to a warrior. He fell in love with the way of combat and dropped all personal attachments to train with the sword and bow. He became a mercenary, and took whatever job he found honorable and completed them. He was gaining fame, but lost it all when he was told to kill a vicous gang of Sneasels. He had grown up quite isolated from pokemon, but he knew it would be wrong.
Skills: Haru is a skilled herbalist and uses potions he's mixed together in battle to improve his fighting or to heal. He is a master with a sword and a bow.He has talent with a lute, and he has a melodious voice, and he served as a bard in the past.
Flaws: Haru always does what his heart tells him to, and it always tells him to do the 'stupid' things, which has led to injuries when people had hired him. The scar on his face was made when his old master told him to attack some rogue warriors that had stolen his most priceless ingredients when the leader slashed his face with a dagger when Haru ran in swinging his sword at whatever moved.He is oblivious to love and has driven many friends away. He is also very solitary.
Weapon: Haru uses a two-handed katana named Night's Bane.He also uses recurve bow that he has no name for, but names every arrow he fires.

Pokemon: Dusclops
Pokemon Name: Shade
Pokemon Personality: Dead serious, just as Haru. He, also like Haru, has never loved, and rarely smiles.
Pokemon History: Shade had grown up quite isolated from humans. He left his fellow Dusclops at a young age and fought whatever pokemon challenged him. He soon became a skilled warrior and had a powerful shadow punch and shadow ball. He still fights as he used to.
Pokemon Specialty: Shade is skilled with close combat, and rarely uses his abilities to use, preferring to fight with honor. He has slightly above average long range attacks.
Pokemon Flaws: With the same as Haru, but he has a strong fear of fire.

Proof of Reading: A woman was linked with Ho Oh, a man with Lugia. Lugia accidentally created a giant storm. Ho Oh and the woman were enraged, and attacked. The three children linked with Raiku, Entei, and Suicune perished when the tower burned down. Ho Oh resurrected them Sacred Ashes. They grew weak, and the Lugia and man saw an opportunity and left for an island. They divided into a second family and war broke out.

Anything Else: Haru may be a name i've used once, is this ok?
You'll notice that I've highlighted parts of your sign-up; you don't seem to be following the theme of this story, if that makes sense. And, well, having your nickname be your last name just sounds... Odd. Nicknames are used affectionately, while using your surname sounds entirely formal and... Well... Strict. Notably the spoiler, I did give you the exact writing and romaji for "Night's Bane". Secondly, you have given your character an orb... That is practically a bomb. It sounds a bit overpowered to me, and on top of that, there's no story or explanation about it. Also, I've told others this, there's no form of currency, so "Mercenary" or "Hitman" don't really apply to anything here. Another mistake that many seem to make is the use of outside characters. The idea of this large Japanese family is sort of like the Japanese Mafia, "Yakuza", though without the crime and violence. They are two families that, not bound by blood, help each other out and work together. Therefore, characters outside of the families wouldn't be welcomed... They'd likely be killed. The smartest move is to have your character born into the family (meaning the parents are members of the family). Herbalism is however still a possible job, though it would be to help others, not so much about profit. There were also no orphanages around at the time (Hell, I have a character with no family right now who just crashed the party, kinda). Also, the war in the RP hasn't happened. Right now, all members are together (well, mostly) from both families at a Festival under the New Moon.

So, to sweeten and shorten this, you should fix:
  • Get into the Ancient Japanese "Theme"
  • Explain and nerf, or remove the orb-bomb
  • Have your character be part of the family, instead of born outside
  • Don't involve currency, as it is non-existant in this RP
  • Understand that this is the most basic form of civilization, no Orphanages or Inns

Resubmit a more accurate sign-up and I'll get to it as soon as possible.
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Old August 12th, 2012, 06:12 PM
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Alright.I'll work on it.No problem.

Can he still be a warrior? I kinda like the solitary idea.

I've worked on it a little, and I'm going to post a seperate story about the orb.
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Old August 12th, 2012, 08:56 PM
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Hey Heretostay!

Essentially yes he can be a warrior but not as the characters sole vocation. Its peace time in Johto during the start of this RP and has been for many years so any warriors would likely be old or possibly dead. It would make little sense for a young character to therefore be a warrior as a vocation. That said the ways of Bushido (the warriors way/way of the samurai) would still be practised by some. Look at my own and others SU's for ideas as to why your character may be trained as a warrior without ever having known war.

Quick sum up of my own characters reason is that his grandfather taught him Bushido as a way of calming the boy and teaching him honour and other values. The old man was not forthcoming and these are merely presumed reasons by Teruyoshi (perhaps the old man could sense oncoming war or another such event). From this I hope to grow Teruyoshi as such skills become more important to the family as tensions grow between DW and SF (if this is indeed what is planned.)

Hope some of that was at least vaguely helpful!
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Old August 12th, 2012, 09:01 PM
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Alright.He's still a herbalist, but he knows the way of the warrior.
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Old August 13th, 2012, 05:10 PM
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Number 1: PC has been running slowly in general, so it isn't just this RP. I'm not exactly sure why it happens all at once, but it just does.
I'm in another RP that's faster than this one, but now that I think about it, it's been slowing down a teeny bit as well... weird.

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Number 2: I graduated soooooo I'm better than all of you... ((KIDDING)) *shot*
:[ It's true! *cries*

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Old August 13th, 2012, 05:24 PM
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I just realized, NightOfRemorse Adeline never realized her sister is ill *gasp*
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Old August 13th, 2012, 06:17 PM
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@Akio could my story about the orb be in roleplay format?
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Old August 15th, 2012, 12:20 PM
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I really don't want this rp to die everyone, I might make a second character
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Old August 15th, 2012, 01:16 PM
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Yo, sorry for not posting sooner. Homestuck has controlled my life for the past two weeks...
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Old August 15th, 2012, 02:32 PM
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Here's the start of my second character, Sakuya of Sacred Fire

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Full Name: Sakuya Haibara

Nicknames: Kuya

Sex: Female

Age: 26

Family: Sacred Fire

Career: Seamstress (Used to be Hunter, explained in History)

Appearance: Sakuya is tall for a woman of her age standing at 6'3 and weighs 130lbs. She has tanned skin and a heart shaped face that is dotted with freckles and a small scar on her right cheek. She has what are described as cat shaped eyes that are colored a natural red in color. Her hair is long going to the middle of her back and is a deep golden blonde in color. For her clothing she wears a peasant styled dress that is white with sleeves that are short and don't cover her shoulders on the top with a brown vest like corset over the white part. The Skirt of the dress is a deep forest green in color, on her feet she wears a pair of brown high heeled boots and she has a limp on her right leg always having a bandage around the knee, she will often be seen carrying a can made out of willow.

Personality: Sakuya is a very kind, mature, and caring women. She can act like an overbearing mother at times, even though she has no husband or children yet. She can just be a bit protective of those she cares about. Sakuya has an eye for detail which is what makes her have such a good shot in archery and such fine skill at sewing. She's also extremely generous, she will barter and trade for things, like if a family needed new clothing but had no money she would accept food or help with chores as payment. She just doesn't want to see anyone go without, though she will not tolerate being cheated or stolen from. She can take very badly to that. One thing she really loves about being a part of the Sacred Fire Family is that women are respected and she is treated as equal to the men.

History: Sakuya was born to two loving parents Shigeto and Ayame Haibara. Though she was raised by just her father Shigeto after her mother died when she was five. Her father taught her all about hunting, having noticed her sharp eyes he started training her in archery when she was eleven, and she grasped the skill quickly. So quickly in fact that she was invited to start hunting with her father and the other hunters when she was only sixteen years old. Sakuya was happy with the path her life had taken and Ayako was right by her side encouraging her. But it seemed like fate had other plans for her. When she was eighteen she was out hunting without her father who was home ill at the time, it was just her and a few other hunters. The day was very rainy and it was foggy in the morning, but the group had to run silently through the woods to sneak up on their catches, it had been like that a lot and nothing had gone wrong before, but on that day Sakuya slipped on the wet rocks and took a slide down a hill. When she came to she was in her home with her father next to her. The fall had badly damaged her right knee, she would never be able to walk without a limp now, and after that her father told her she was done hunting. For some reason it didn't really upset her as much as everyone thought it would, she had a hobby on the side, sewing. So after that she decided to become the families seamstress.

Skills: Sewing, archery, stealthy.
Flaws: she has a limp, bad with swords and knives, She can't run very fast.

Weapon: Bow and Arrows

Pokemon: Togepi

Pokemon Name: Ayako

Pokemon Personality: Ayako is a very sweet Pokemon, just like her human link she loves to help people but she can also take offense to things more so than Sakuya can. For example she hates to be insulted for her size. Neither she nor Sakuya want her to evolve and she is content to stay a Togepi for all her life.

Pokemon History: Same History as Sakuya

Pokemon Specialty: Cheering up others and sneaking into very small places.

Pokemon Flaws: Ayako is very sensitive about her size, she hates to be called small.

Proof of Reading: Ethan defeating the team rocket grunt and saving the kimono girls.

Anything Else: Nothing
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I'll post tomorrow. Icarus was interacting with Hikari, & maybe Kitsuko. Now he'll interact with Adeline.
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Old August 17th, 2012, 04:51 PM
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I'm gonna post my orb backstory now.

Masahiro walked into the deadly dungeon. I hope master was right about this... He wasn't one to complain...or rejoice...or talk. He slipped his leather helmet on and drew Night's Bane. He walked deeper in, holding the katana in front of him.

He entered a large, cavernous chamber with a large dragon staring him in the eyes.He jumped back, silent but screaming death. He charged forwards, slashed forth, and felt his sword strike stone. God's above...who would put such a monstrosity there? He glared at the stone beast. It was in the shape of a Gyarodos. Terrifying beast. He looked at the rest of the chamber. All he saw was blank stone walls the shade of his olive toned skin with the occasional fire carved on.

He spotted a tunnel ahead, and started down it. Maybe this is where the ingredients lay... he continued forth, and it soon became to tight of a space to keep Night's Bane out. He reluctantly sheathed his sword, and continued forth with his fist held up to protect him. He had to crawl as it got tighter, and he had no defense.

He crawled forth anyways, his hair brushing the ceiling, and his arms brushing against the walls. It's too tight in here... After a good while of crawling, he came out in a large chamber. At the far end was a pedestal with something on top of it. He approached it cautiously, and noticed that it was a glass orb. How curious. He warily searched the nearby area, and noticed no traps. He picked up the orb and felt a sudden burning sensation.

He almost dropped it, but caught it in mid air. Somehow a flame had appeared in the middle...Maybe master was confused. I saw no ingredients of any value down here. He spun around and started to head back to the crawl space.

As he crouched down, he felt a stabbing sensation in his back and spun around and looked at it. There was a needle stuck in him. Oh gods... he pulled it out and pulled a potion out of the satchel he always kept with him. He popped the cork out and chugged it. Knowing places like this, the dart was poisoned, and the potion he drank contained a cure to most known poisons.

He felt a little light headed, but decided against staying still. He pulled the dart from his back, and put it in his satchel. Maybe the poison is rare, and his master could use it. He started to exit the ruins, and finally emerged from the deadly, ancient temple. As soon as he set foot outside the building, he collapsed with exhaustion.
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Old August 17th, 2012, 05:49 PM
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Here's the start of my second character, Sakuya of Sacred Fire

Done :)

Spoiler:
Full Name: Sakuya Haibara

Nicknames: Kuya

Sex: Female

Age: 26

Family: Sacred Fire

Career: Seamstress (Used to be Hunter, explained in History)

Appearance: Sakuya is tall for a woman of her age standing at 6'3 and weighs 130lbs. She has tanned skin and a heart shaped face that is dotted with freckles and a small scar on her right cheek. She has what are described as cat shaped eyes that are colored a natural red in color. Her hair is long going to the middle of her back and is a deep golden blonde in color. For her clothing she wears a peasant styled dress that is white with sleeves that are short and don't cover her shoulders on the top with a brown vest like corset over the white part. The Skirt of the dress is a deep forest green in color, on her feet she wears a pair of brown high heeled boots and she has a limp on her right leg always having a bandage around the knee, she will often be seen carrying a can made out of willow.

Personality: Sakuya is a very kind, mature, and caring women. She can act like an overbearing mother at times, even though she has no husband or children yet. She can just be a bit protective of those she cares about. Sakuya has an eye for detail which is what makes her have such a good shot in archery and such fine skill at sewing. She's also extremely generous, she will barter and trade for things, like if a family needed new clothing but had no money she would accept food or help with chores as payment. She just doesn't want to see anyone go without, though she will not tolerate being cheated or stolen from. She can take very badly to that. One thing she really loves about being a part of the Sacred Fire Family is that women are respected and she is treated as equal to the men.

History: Sakuya was born to two loving parents Shigeto and Ayame Haibara. Though she was raised by just her father Shigeto after her mother died when she was five. Her father taught her all about hunting, having noticed her sharp eyes he started training her in archery when she was eleven, and she grasped the skill quickly. So quickly in fact that she was invited to start hunting with her father and the other hunters when she was only sixteen years old. Sakuya was happy with the path her life had taken and Ayako was right by her side encouraging her. But it seemed like fate had other plans for her. When she was eighteen she was out hunting without her father who was home ill at the time, it was just her and a few other hunters. The day was very rainy and it was foggy in the morning, but the group had to run silently through the woods to sneak up on their catches, it had been like that a lot and nothing had gone wrong before, but on that day Sakuya slipped on the wet rocks and took a slide down a hill. When she came to she was in her home with her father next to her. The fall had badly damaged her right knee, she would never be able to walk without a limp now, and after that her father told her she was done hunting. For some reason it didn't really upset her as much as everyone thought it would, she had a hobby on the side, sewing. So after that she decided to become the families seamstress.

Skills: Sewing, archery, stealthy.
Flaws: she has a limp, bad with swords and knives, She can't run very fast.

Weapon: Bow and Arrows

Pokemon: Togepi

Pokemon Name: Ayako

Pokemon Personality: Ayako is a very sweet Pokemon, just like her human link she loves to help people but she can also take offense to things more so than Sakuya can. For example she hates to be insulted for her size. Neither she nor Sakuya want her to evolve and she is content to stay a Togepi for all her life.

Pokemon History: Same History as Sakuya

Pokemon Specialty: Cheering up others and sneaking into very small places.

Pokemon Flaws: Ayako is very sensitive about her size, she hates to be called small.

Proof of Reading: Ethan defeating the team rocket grunt and saving the kimono girls.

Anything Else: Nothing
Accepted. Also, if you already have a charter, there's no need to fill the "Proof" section.

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I'm gonna post my orb backstory now.

Masahiro walked into the deadly dungeon. I hope master was right about this... He wasn't one to complain...or rejoice...or talk. He slipped his leather helmet on and drew Night's Bane. He walked deeper in, holding the katana in front of him.

He entered a large, cavernous chamber with a large dragon staring him in the eyes.He jumped back, silent but screaming death. He charged forwards, slashed forth, and felt his sword strike stone. God's above...who would put such a monstrosity there? He glared at the stone beast. It was in the shape of a Gyarodos. Terrifying beast. He looked at the rest of the chamber. All he saw was blank stone walls the shade of his olive toned skin with the occasional fire carved on.

He spotted a tunnel ahead, and started down it. Maybe this is where the ingredients lay... he continued forth, and it soon became to tight of a space to keep Night's Bane out. He reluctantly sheathed his sword, and continued forth with his fist held up to protect him. He had to crawl as it got tighter, and he had no defense.

He crawled forth anyways, his hair brushing the ceiling, and his arms brushing against the walls. It's too tight in here... After a good while of crawling, he came out in a large chamber. At the far end was a pedestal with something on top of it. He approached it cautiously, and noticed that it was a glass orb. How curious. He warily searched the nearby area, and noticed no traps. He picked up the orb and felt a sudden burning sensation.

He almost dropped it, but caught it in mid air. Somehow a flame had appeared in the middle...Maybe master was confused. I saw no ingredients of any value down here. He spun around and started to head back to the crawl space.

As he crouched down, he felt a stabbing sensation in his back and spun around and looked at it. There was a needle stuck in him. Oh gods... he pulled it out and pulled a potion out of the satchel he always kept with him. He popped the cork out and chugged it. Knowing places like this, the dart was poisoned, and the potion he drank contained a cure to most known poisons.

He felt a little light headed, but decided against staying still. He pulled the dart from his back, and put it in his satchel. Maybe the poison is rare, and his master could use it. He started to exit the ruins, and finally emerged from the deadly, ancient temple. As soon as he set foot outside the building, he collapsed with exhaustion.
Okay, so... This doesn't seem to explain much of anything except how he found it. Do you think you could make it a little less overpowered, so that it isn't a huge battle insta-fix? Also, You still need to work on that sign up.
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