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Old August 18th, 2005 (06:23 PM).
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Same people
They always surround
Everyday
I hear the same old sounds

Barely listen
To all of these words
What is the point
My life is a blur

Down, down, down it goes
Down the drain
Drown, drown, drown I go
In this rain
Round, Round, round it goes
All the same

Days go by
They all pass so fast
Much faster
Than I could ever last

Barely survive
Through all of these days
All of my life
I've been in a daze

Down, down, down it goes
Down the drain
Drown, drown, drown I go
In this rain
Round, round, round it goes
All the same

Not one more day
I couldn't
Not one more day
I wouldn't

Don't make me
Please take me
Away

Down, down, down it goes
Down the drain
Drown, drown, drown I go
In this rain
Round, round, round it goes
All the same
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Old August 19th, 2005 (04:49 AM).
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Very well done, and repeating the same lines gives it more umph.
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Old August 19th, 2005 (06:28 PM).
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Repeating the same lines is called a Chorus...XD
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Old August 20th, 2005 (08:54 AM).
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Someone's angry. :/
 
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I thought chorus was only with songs.......ah never mind. Whatever. you still did great nonetheless.
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Old August 20th, 2005 (11:44 AM).
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This is a song...oops XD I forgot to say that!
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