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Old June 29th, 2013, 12:31 PM
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NARUTO : A NEW WORLD ROLEPLAY

GMed by JNathan and gimmepie
-How it will work
Spoiler:

This RP is pretty much a sandbox one except for when I choose to make an event in it. You can choose to set up any mission you want, please keep ranks in mind. Chuunin only gets B and C ranks missions but a Jounin can have A and S ranks missions. When you set up your own missions, you can’t encounter a Kurotenshi member in it. To keep things fair each ninja squad will have 2 members as will the Kurotenshi. I will randomly match people together but if you want to be matched with a member, the both of you will VM me and I will match you.

-Story
Spoiler:

The world was devastated in the 4th Ninja War. Both sides were suffering painful losses, heroes died and villages were destroyed. The world was in pain with that war. But the battle was still raging between the Hidden Villages and the Akatsuki. Ninjas were slowly losing with the summoning of the Juubi. But a miracle happened; the previous Hokages appeared along with Team Taka and gave their help to Konoha. This helped the ninjas regain their advantage on the Akatsuki. The war continued for many days until many of the ninjas including the members of Team 7 and the Kages sacrificed themselves in order to seal the Ten Tails away and give the victory to the Ninja World. The war came to an end and slowly the world regained his peaceful state and ninjas were worshipping the heroes that saved them.
Today, the world is in peace. The people regained their happiness and forgot the Ninja War. It was now a legend that the kids studied at school. But this peace was being threatened by some mercenaries known under the name of the Kurotenshi. They are formed of admirers of the former Akatsuki. They developed the same ideals as Pain and passed them on to their descendants. The ones who received these ideals began intensive training in order to become as strong as the Akatsuki was. They formed their children and generations after, the Kurotenshi was formed with 6 strong ninjas that were all S-Rank criminals. They worshipped Pain and Madara and believed that pain was necessary to achieve peace. Following this idea, they began seeking the Ten Tails. The Kages got word of that and were horrified. They were afraid that what happened on the 4th Ninja War would reproduce itself there. They began immediate mobilization of Chuunin and Jounin troops under the Alliance of Ninjas. They were sending them accomplish different missions everywhere hoping to stop the Kurotenshi from finding the Ten Tails.

-You
Spoiler:

  • · You are either a fresh Chuunin or an experienced Jounin. You were called by the different Kages in order to investigate the likes of the Kurotenshi and find the location of the Ten Tails. There are 6 of you that were entrusted with these dangerous missions but you accepted to fight for the peace and destroy the threat that Kurotenshi represents.
  • · You could also be one of the 6 members of the Kurotenshi organization. You are the descendant of an ancient Akatsuki collaborator. You will be executing different missions, including stealing and beating other ninjas while searching for the Ten Tails.
-Rules
Spoiler:

· -General PC rules apply.
· -This is an M-rated RP so you can expect violence and some gore but it won’t go too far.
· -Godmodding and bullying aren’t allowed.
· -Please try to post at least once a week.
· -Romance is allowed but please don’t push it too far.
· -If you don’t post for a week, I’ll give you a warning by VM. If you still don’t post, I’ll give you a -PM and if you continue to be inactive, I’ll open up your spot to others.
· -The code is “Tailed Beast”.

-Major Places
Spoiler:

The RP will be located in a Konoha-like village.
Ichiraku Ramen: Ichiraku Ramen is a small restaurant in the village, which serves ramen.
The Jounin Standby Station: It’s a building located beside the Ninja Academy where the Jounin stay when waiting for the Hokage’s orders or emergencies, as well as when they are off duty.
Hot Springs: The Konoha Hot Springs is the public bath of the village, divided down the middle between genders. Shinobi can use the baths as a training ground for basic chakra training. Using the hot water as a form of motivation, the trainee is more focused in using their chakra to support themselves on the water
Flower Shop: It is a shop in the village. It sells flowers of all sorts and variety.
The Mission Assignment Desk: It is located within the Ninja Academy where ninjas go to in order to receive most of their missions from the Hokage. The Mission Assignment Desk is located within a huge, wide-open space with six windows and high ceilings with two stick-like lights. The ceiling also has the kanji for the word "shinobi" printed on it. There is a long table where the Hokage and other ninja sit when distributing the missions. On the front of the desk, there is a white banner with the kanji that says "mission assignment this way and at the top is another banner that says "everybody, do your best”.
The Konoha Hospital: It serves the medical needs of ninja and other villagers in Konohagakure. Though the staff is skilled enough to treat most basic ailments, skilled medical nins must step in to assist with severe injuries.

-Sign-Ups
Spoiler:

Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Age (must be more than 15):
Appearance (long description or picture + short description):
Chakra Nature (Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Electricity):
2nd Nature:
Your side (Akatsuki or Ninja Alliance):
Skills (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Stamina):
History (what were you doing before? What motivated you to be a ninja or a mercenary):
Personality:
Custom Jutsus (5 maximum, describe them accurately please):

-Slots
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Ninja Alliance :
1.Gothax Nakamura - JNathan
2.open
3.Nev Amoa - Khawill
4.Klicer Bontare - PJBottomz
5.Ileana Kirsch - Daisuke Mitsuharu
6.Aria Susuki - DeuceClubs
Akatsuki:
1.Akihiro Hamasaki - Jegretis
2.Haru Nashimura - heretostay123
3.Shin Kaito - gimmepie
4.Ayame Ibaraki - atif
5.Asina Paoi - Retro Bug
6.Nyichi Nobu - Yamagi Sosuke

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Old July 1st, 2013, 06:45 AM
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Name: Saiyuu Mori

Nickname: Sai of The Wind

Gender: Female

Age (must be more than 15): 15

Appearance (long description or picture + short description):
She never removes her hat, and sometimes she removes her scarf.

Chakra Nature (Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Electricity): Wind

2nd Nature: Earth

Your side (Akatsuki or Ninja Alliance): Ninja(Chunin)

Skills (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Stamina):
Stamina: Very High
Genjutsu: Average
Ninjutsu: Very high
Taijutsu: Average

History (what were you doing before? What motivated you to be a ninja or a mercenary): Saiyu always dreamed of become a great ninja. We she became a Chunin, she worked as hard as she could to get Jounin, but failed. She takes the test every year. Her father died as a ninja, and Saiyuu decided to follow his foot-steps. Saiyuu is weak against cute things because she thinks they make her soft. She has a lot of memories of her dad but zero of her mom. Her mom left after she was born and died. Her Dad died from a stab wound in battle.


Personality: Brave and bold Saiyuu let's no one stand in here way. Saiyuu can be very rash, heading into danger without a thought or plan. Though she's very skilled, she can be clumsy. Saiyuu learns the living experience and practices whatever she see's the other ninja's doing. She is independent when it comes to work, but for things such as training she calls on others.
Saiyuu can be be very difiant as well. When it comes to following orders she accepts, but put's her on person spin on the rules. (She does it so she's not following the rules, but not breaking them either.) She is mild tempered, and can withstand multiple crisis's before getting confused, and is often multitasking. She is mischievous but she knows not to go to far. When she get's in to trouble she talks bluntly, not caring about the consequences. She's a quiet girl who's not afraid to speak her mind. When Sai speaks it is said the wind repeats. She almost never gets ost and is always going the right way. (She is also a Kid know-it-all.) She is not very open and is not afraid to shun those she does not trust. Unfourtunatley, Sai is motivated by money as well as power. Her missions do not come cheap. Often she has turned down missions for that very reason.

Custom Jutsus (5 maximum, describe them accurately please):
Wind Style: Air Missile- A Wind style that forms pointed edged wind pressure that can pierce skin and bone.

Earth Style: Rock Blade- A solid formidable blade created by forging the Earth together.

Wind Style: Wind Double- Creating solid doppelgangers of Wind.

Earth Style: Earth Kunai- Kunai knives encased in rock. Hard to stray it of coarse.


Kekki Genkki
Wind Style: Air Rush- Last resort. Using all remaining chakara, Fill the opponent with more air than their lungs can handle, causing them to shut down(If only a little chakara.) or burst(If alot of chakara).
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Anime Jutsu:

Wind Style: Dust Storm Jutsu- And storm of wind filled with dust particles that can decimate a foe in moments.

Wind Style: Blade of Wind- A chakar based wind blade that is barely visible to the target.

Wind Style: Blade of Wind Hurricane- Creates a hurricane from a Blade of Wind thats sucks in enimes, violently slashing at them.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 07:06 AM
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Na....NARUTO ROLEPLAY! EVERYONE BACK THE FRIG UP! I'M JOINING ALL UP IN HERE!

Name: Haru Nashimura
Nickname: Fire Demon
Gender: Male
Age (must be more than 15): 27
Appearance (long description or picture + short description):
Chakra Nature (Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, Electricity): Fire
2nd Nature: Earth
Your side (Akatsuki or Ninja Alliance): Akatsuki
Skills (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu and Stamina): Ninjutsu
History (what were you doing before? What motivated you to be a ninja or a mercenary):
Personality:
Custom Jutsus (5 maximum, describe them accurately please):

Fire Style Fire Ball Justu: If you've seen the anime, you know what I'm talking about. It's also self-explanatory.

Fire Style Blazing Earth Jutsu: He launches a flaming boulder at all nearby enemies, and sets most landscape on fire

Earth Style Continental Rift: Creates a giant rift in the Earth

Fire Style Burning Hell Jutsu: A massive wave of fire that engulfs everything in its path, only a last resort jutsu, seeing as he never has to go that far. He's the friggin' Akatsuki. Takes massive amounts of chakra.

Fire Style Inferno Dragon Jutsu: Launches a dragon made solely of flames, much like the water dragon jutsu
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Old July 1st, 2013, 07:18 AM
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I'll probably do my own SU later if I have time to RP in this.

@DarkMoonPhase - You could do with adding more detail to the majority of the categories in SU. If you are new or have problems writing SU's I recommend reading some SU's from other RPers. That being said JNathan has the final say on whether to accept you or not.

I forgot I said I'd co-GM this :')
Not to worry though, the more the merrier.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 08:01 AM
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I'm definitely interested! Ill be going for the Akatsuki side. Ill have my SU by today.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 08:02 AM
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Name: Nev Amoa
Nickname: Nev
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Nev wears a white face mask and a white cloak with feathers on the right shoulder. The cloak is worn as tradition in his Clan. Underneath he wears a full black hooded shirt and pants. (The black over his head in the picture is the hood). He has white hair that is covered by his hood, and covers his ears. His headband is also covered by his hood. All of his weapons and tools are kept on summoning scrolls. His Raven is a badly drawn, but fairly large.


Chakra Nature: Wind
2nd Nature: Water
Your side: Ninja Allies (Chuunin)

Skills: Nev lacks abilities in genjutsu due to his kekkei genkai, additionally his ability to learn ninjutsu is significantly increased, though his chakra reserves are unaffected. His taijutsu and stamina are his best assets, being skilled in close range and medium ranged attacks. Although his most powerful attacks and most of his skills come from taijutsu, he is capable of using weapons effectively, and his accuracy is above average.
Taijutsu: 3.5/5
Ninjutsu: 2.5/5
Genjutsu: 1/5
Stamina: 4/5
Chakra: 3/5
Intelligence: 3/5
Strength: 3.5/5 (4/5) (5/5)
Speed: 3.5/10 (4/5) (5/5)
Hand Signs: 3/5

Numbers in () are using his Swift Fist Barrage jutsu
Numbers in Italics are using his kekkei genkai

Nevs raven has half of each stat except in genjutsu where he scores a 3/5

Additionally, everything comes to a total of 26/45 (27/45) (30/45)

History: Nev is next in line to be the leader of the Amoa clan. As an only child, he has been encouraged to be among the strongest in the village. He is also one of the few members to actually have the Hurricane release kekkei genkai, making him a prodigy in his father's eyes. However, at the age of 6, Nev accidentally injured himself with his kekkei genkai, giving him an intense fear of using it. The incident's effect on him greatly annoyed his father who made numerous attempts to help Nev. Eventually his father could think of only one solution, summoning a raven that would replace Nev's mind with its own. (It isn't an ordinary raven of course, it from a different land than their own), the raven and the young Nev grew very close, greatly increasing Nev's father's spirits.

Nev did excellently in school, passing with high scores, especially in teamwork areas. His falling point was his genjutsu, and his inherited weakness to it. Despite this, he passed the Chuunin exam on his first try due to his excellent taijutsu, ninjutsu, and dojutsu.

He has completed 30 missions:
13 D-Rank
10 C-Rank
6 B-Rank
1 A-Rank

Because of his natural skill, he has been allowed to participate in tougher missions (upon direct request of his father, leader of the clan). He has participated in only one A-ranked mission, which consisted of escorting his youngest cousin through territory run by strong ninja. His cousin also possessed his kekkei genkai and she was planned to be married to another clan in another village for peace reasons. Originally the mission was to be given to a Jonin, but due to the relationship of Nev and his cousin, it was decided that he would participate on this mission. Nev and his cousin got to their destination safely, though Nev nearly lost his life protecting her (along with the clan's kekkei genkai).

I will give a more in depth explanation of this mission during the RP as it is a very important event to Nev.

Personality: Nev is a timid boy who does not ask for anything. He is content with spending all of his free time training, or doing whatever he is told to do. He is a very kind person who doesn't seem to get angry at anything, though he also never seems to be happy about anything either. He is very dutiful and loyal, and normally very serious. His most obvious quality is his polite and chivalrous attitude, often using the word sorry (even if he has no reason to apologize, or even during battle to apologise for any mess-ups he did). He has a fear of his own strengths though, and constantly holds himself back. This fear is actually life-threatening, as he is very scared of his own power, and as such only uses normal jutsus while conscious. (Though the use of genjutsu he can use his kekkei genkai)

His relationship with his Raven is very friendly, though the raven is much more enthusiastic and excitable than him.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hurricane Release: (Kekkei Genkai) A nature kekkei Genkai that greatly enhances the speed of the user and allowing them a high use of quick taijutsu, it is as dangerous as opening the 8 gates (yet stronger when used by the more powerful ninja who have it) if used for too long. Additionally Nev would not use this lightly, as it would render him very weak at his age. (His would be akin to opening the 2nd gate). The danger diminishes with intense physical training, unlike opening the gates, though it will still leave the user significantly drained.

-Dojutsu (Part of the above): Nev's vision is much more accurate in addition to increased accuracy. Nev can keep track of the fastest opponents, and can very well sense intentions. Unfortunately it makes him more vulnerable to Genjutsu than average. It also allows him to easily learn taijutsu and ninjutsu, being able to learn either after watching the technique 3 times (he can do a rough version if he sees it once, and an improved version the second time. In battle it is practically useless unless someone is constantly using the same jutsu.) It makes his eyes have a constant, cloudy, and swirling effect, similar to a hurricane. (Functions very well as a scouting ability)

Custom Jutsus:
Wind Release: Swift Fist Barrage- A taijutsu based attack that uses wind release to allow quicker movement and swifter punches, not as much of an increase as hurricane release, but still uses lot of chakra. If used for longer than 5 minutes, it will result in heavy fatigue in Nev. This is not part of the kekkei genkai and can be taught or used by anyone who can use wind release jutsus.

Beast Coordination: Feather Storm: Nev's raven turns into a clone of him, fighting side by side with him at the expense of a split (not always 50/50, can be any combination) chakra pool. The raven has feathers on both arms, along with lacking the swirling eyes. The beast can copy basic ninjutsu, but can't copy his kekkei genkai. Additionally the raven and Nev can switch positions very quickly. (A reverse version also exists, where Nev turns into a version of his raven, with swirly eyes, mainly used for scouting)

(Raven) Genjutsu: Nev's raven has the ability to perform genjutsu. It is generally only used on Nev himself to overcome his fear if needed. (The genjutsu prevents Nev from thinking about his emotions, which leaves him very vulnerable to manipulation. Normally the raven will give orders at that point, basically becoming Nev). Nev's conscious is transferred to the raven's body temporary. Due to the raven not being the one with the kekkei genkai, this style of fighting is very limited and will leave both Nev and his raven unconscious and bed ridden for 3 days. Unfortunately this is unavoidable, and Nev's father is still attempting to rid Nev of his fear, otherwise he will never be to his true potential.

The Raven
Since his is technically a character, he gets a small section.

Abilities: The Raven has the ability to talk like most summoned animals. Additionally it posses the ability to use genjutsu (made easier by Nev's weakness to it). Due to constant training with Nev, the raven can efficiently use Nev's kekkei genkai, along with perform close to Nev's skill in taijutsu when transformed into him. The raven is also enjoys a better sense of hearing than Nev. Though Nev's eyesight is much more keen and is better in every way.

Personality: The raven is very caring of Nev, seeing him as a good shinobi and a great pal. He is much older though, being around 25 human years old, he has served the Amoa clan since he was hatched. This makes him extremely loyal to Nev, though much more wise. Additionally his personality differs from Nev's passive and docile attitude. He enjoys action, talking a lot, and generally having a good time. He doesn't enjoy being told what to do (unless by Nev, who rarely gives him orders.) and generally sees Nev as a stick-in-the-mud. he is also very rude to people, causing Nev to apologise constantly for him. Still, they are virtually inseparable (by request of Nev's father, and also because the are so close.)

The raven greatly enjoys taking over Nev's body, seeing as it makes him feel much stronger. Nev does not enjoy giving up his body, but sees the necessity. They have ever only switched bodies to fight 2 times, and both times Nev regrets.


It should be noted that even during training, when the Raven switches bodies with Nev, they will be unconscious for at least 1 day. Training sessions normally can only last ten minutes to half an hour before both pass out.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 08:13 AM
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I'll keep that in mind guys. But Only JNathan can edit the OP.

Also, my character will be Jounin of the Alliance xD
I was originally going to play as a villain but *shrugs eh.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 08:52 AM
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Just a quick question, are Bloodline traits allowed?
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Old July 1st, 2013, 08:56 AM
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Sorry to be so late. Where I am now don't have internet connection so I have to use my phone. @Phase : do just as gimmipie suggested. Your SU needs more details like the history and personality ones.
@everyone : when you guys are done PM me so I can look over it.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 09:02 AM
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@JGretis - That will depend on the bloodline trait you include. It can be custom or one existing so long as we don't feel it is OP. I personally would prefer you using custom bloodline traits if you include them.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 09:10 AM
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Alright thank you. It will be custom. Also, do clones count as a Jutsu, or is it implied everyone knows how to make a clone?
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Old July 1st, 2013, 09:23 AM
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Old July 1st, 2013, 09:23 AM
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I think basic clones probably don't count whilst the more advanced (and dangerous) stuff like the multi-shadow clone would fill a slot. You will have to wait for JNathan to confirm that though.

Edit: @Dark Moon - You're on the right track now but you still need a bit more. Aim to hit around 350-400 words in personality if you can.
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Old July 1st, 2013, 10:56 AM
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Alright I"m really getting somewhere now....

Tailed Beast

Name
Kaizu Jinsoku

Nickname
Kaizu of the storm

Gender
Male

Age
21

Appearance
Spoiler:

His appearance is just as the picture shows. His forehead protector, tied around his left shoulder, has the kanji (嵐) meaning storm instead of the symbol for Kirigakure more commonly known as Village of the Bloody Mist. The other equipment seen with him include, kunais attached to metal chains, which he sends lightning through when attacking enemies plus an all black kodachi he carries behind his back, around his waste. The jacket with leaves is a both a symbol of his loyalty to his new village plus no one sees a leave coat and initial assumes the person wearing it is the one known as Kaizu of the storm. When out on missions though he wears a similar, shorter jacket without the leaf symbols at the end.

Chakra Nature
Lightning

2nd Nature
Water

Your side
Ninja Alliance - Jounin

Skills
Taijutsu - Average
Ninjutsu - High
Genjutsu High
Stamina - Above Average

History
Born in Kirigakure or Village Hidden by Mist, whichever you prefer, Kaizu spent most of his early years being lied to. Growing up in a village that persecuted kekei genkai users, Kaizu's parents hid him away with another family after his birth to protect him from the the eventual destruction of his clan, leaving him as one of the few ninjas with the mist release ability. Kaizu was kept in the dark about, by his foster parents, his past until the moment he made his intentions of being a ninja clear to them. That's when the floodgates opened, to hear about how his clan was murdered because of his village's fear of them, Kaizu quickly renounced his foster name and retook the name of his destroyed clan.

Kaizu went through the ninja academy with a lot of eyes watching him, not only because of his past but because he was actually not the worst student around. Coasting through, making some friends along the way and impressing on missions, all because of the same abilities than were once feared. During all his years at the academy, Kaizu was slowly building up a reputation for not only himself but for the entire Jinsoku clan.

After gaining jounin status Kaizu left the village of the mist and made the leaf village his new home...

Personality
When your entire life dream is to end up being a legend, you carry yourself in a certain way...or at least that's how it should be. Outside of missions Kaizu doesn't take himself too serious, usually lazing about waiting for the moment he's called up for duty. That call though brings a drastic shift in personality, the Kaizu of the storm persona you may say, mission time is the only time you won't even see a smile on his face "No matter the mission, it's no smiling matter, somebody usually ends up dying"

Kaizu isn't cold hearted in any sense but if you fall behind on a mission don't expect him top be the first one to turn back and help you on your feet. Kaizu admittedly doesn't see himself as a team player, he's seen his fair share of death to people considered team mates or friends. At least when he's sent on a mission alone he only needs to be responsible of himself and his own actions and can keep deaths off his conscience.

Despite not having the lightest of histories, Kaizu has somehow been able to put it all behind him, usually trying to forget all that has been done to his people and hopes that one day he can restart his clan and restart a rich history that was taken away from him. He did leave his village because of a little anger which he did actually build up in the back of his mind despite all the time he spent their and the good he did.

Custom Jutsus
Kekkei Genkai
Mist Release
Kaizu can conjure up incredibly thick mist, without the need of any water source, which Kaizu can control. This mist can be used to bind opponents or even just used to take away their sense of sight if necessary. Kaizu also has the ability to dematerialise his body allowing him to pass through physical objects, from a wall to sword or even through a person, Kaizu can then materialise at will. Although it is a powerful tool in Kaizu's arsenal his use of it depends on the opponent as he is unable to use any Jutsu while he is either manipulating the mist or his body has become intangible this means Taijutsu or any other weapons are the only things he can attack with during that period.

Lightning Release: Storm Burst
In his youth Kaizu would play around with this little ability to create small storm clouds, terrorizing ants and small animals with thunder and lightning. Now, this infamous jutsu is what has made Kaizu renowned in the ninja world and the jutsu the gained him the name Kaizu of the storm. Whenever those black clouds roll in and the you spot the shadowy figure in the distance you know that death awaits.

Essentially the technique creates dark storm clouds which can produce lightning and thunder on Kaizu command directing it in any direction he so desires.

Illisonary Ocean
A genjutsu technique that creates the illusion of the target drowning at the bottom of a vast ocean. I the target is able to swim to the top they are greeted with a breath of fresh air even more water. Not only does the technique offer them some sort of hope of surviving it then just takes that away, in reality the target is just trapped in an endless ocean and another endless ocean and even more ocean.

The technique can be used while hidden as a means of assassination or can be used to garner information from a target almost like waterboarding them.

Water Release: Blizzard Knives
Creates tiny ice shards which are then fired at the target. The ice can also form into a large shuriken or kunai.

Dual Release: Conductor Stream
Essentially a sure kill technique or so far that's what it has been for him, Kaizu releases two equally powerful streams of lightning and water which swirl around each other. The stream electrocutes the enemy since essentially one stream soaks the target while the other send bolts of electricity rushing through their body, which has become even more deadly since the target it wet. This all happens simultaneously meaning the if the stream hit the target the attack takes instant effect, If you dodge the one stream, you avoid both the lightning and the water.

Other Jutsu

Lightning Beast Running Technique
By manipulating lightning chakra into their hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a hound. The hound remains connected to the user's hand, allowing them to control it during its attack. Kaizu enhances it by releasing some water chakra through the attack.

Lightning Release Shadow Clone
This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill.


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Name: Akihiro "Aki" Hamasaki

Nickname: The Moon's Blade

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Appearance: Akihiro stands a bit on the tall at side, at 6'2". With a pretty solid build, he's no twig, but he isn't beefy. He has medium-short black hair, and light brown skin, without any major imperfections on his skin, as he gets paranoid about keeping it from getting covered in acne. His eyes are dark brown, almost black if not seen up close. He's well trimmed, but tends to get a 'scruffy' look if not shaven for a little bit. His regular attire consists of a well-fitted, light blue buttoned t-shirt, and black pants. For shoes, he wears black low-cut boots. For his main weapon, he carries around a jet-black sword, which is on a strap attached to his back. It is slightly longer than a regular sword, and is made from a meteorite which fell from the sky, making it more durable than an average sword. Underneath his clothing, he simply wears a black undershirt, and some pale blue boxer briefs. Although occasionally, he will only wear his undershirt when it's hot out, or if he feels comfortable enough.

Chakra Nature: Water

2nd Nature: Wind

Your side: Akatsuki

Skills:
Ninjutsu: 5
Taijutsu: 5
Genjutsu: 3.5
Intelligence: 2.5
Strength: 4
Speed: 4
Stamina: 3.5
Hand Signs: 4
Total: 31.5

Ninjutsu would be his main form of offense/defense, but in a serious fight he would also use Taijutsu. Genjutsu is really hard for him to learn, only knowing one. His Stamina is nothing special, just 'okay'.

History: Born into a family mainly made up of Water Shinobi, Aki didn't have much knowledge on other types of Jutsu. Although he did practice with sword fighting a lot, and has become near excellent at handling it, with his skill rivalling even the most skilled swordsmen. He was always taught that Water Jutsu was a gift, and all the Shinobi who used Water Jutsu were 'gifts' and were physical manifestations of the moon. He was taught that Water was superior because it symbolized peace, and health, and could also be dangerous when threatened. Without water, there would be no life.

Although Aki understood, he always thought it was a load of crap. He never was one for traditions, and honestly hated all that talk about being 'people of the moon'. In school he was the more quiet type, but once graduated, his personality took a change. He was more resentful to his clan, and felt as if they were all just wasting his time. As he got older, they kept on giving speeches about how their clan was 'special' and more nonsense, which eventually made Aki snap. They were still treating him like a kid, and it was obvious that their clan stories were just made up. At least that's what he believed. Being a member of ANBU, he was someone that shouldn't be messed with, as he was also a leader of his own squad at age 18. Of course he was allowed to know secrets of the village that he wasn't allowed to share with his clan, but his clan though differently. Again they kept on pouring their belief system down his throat and how family shouldn't be keeping secrets from each other. Aki didn't agree, and although he didn't tell them, the whole ANBU organization knew how his clan was, and they demoted him solely based on their bias beliefs. Angry, he soon went into a fit of rage. He had spent years trying to become the leader of his own Squad, and they had taken that away based on something he didn't even do, or believed in.


Months later, Aki was caught leaking information to other villages for the duration of several months, which resulted in the deaths of numerous ANBU squads, and an assassination attempt on the Kage. All of this escalated into something more, and it then became obvious to Aki that he didn't want the life of an ANBU, taking orders with no freedom, or following his clan's footsteps and their dumb philosophies. He just simply wanted to lead his own life and do whatever he wanted to do.

Personality: Surprisingly, Aki is laid back and relaxed and often doesn't get worried about many things. Although he is serious at most times, he likes to crack the occasional joke here and there, and can be quite talkative at times. He's also a flirt most of the time, saying cheesy pick-up lines.

On his more competitive side, he's confident and reeks of cockiness. Not really aggressive, but he just simply hates to turn down a challenge. Being an Akatsuki member, he knows his abilities are nothing to be messed with, and his sword skills have yet to be matched. Ironically, he does tend to avoid any physical confrontations unless it is necessary or if another person starts it.

He doesn't drink alcohol, being a fan of fruit juice, and chocolate milk. Once you get to know him, he is not the kind of person that just simply kills for the sake of things, but would only do so if need be.

Custom Jutsus:

Water Style: Water Rend: A body of water is manipulated into basic forms and uses, such as creating a small wall, hitting it with foes, etc. His main Jutsu for attacking. The uses for the water are limited, so he can't use it for things such as creating complex structures.

Water Style: River Torrent: This is a more 'defensive' Jutsu than offensive, however its effects can do both. Water spirals in a vicious torrent/whirpool centering around Aki, attacking enemies in all directions with forceful pushes of water. Can also flood small areas. Good for crowd control, or making getaways.

Crescent Blade: Similar to Naruto's Rasengan, it has no real element. He launches a crescent-shaped mass of chakra at the foe, capable of slicing. This is one of his more powerful attacks, and is only usable through the use of his sword.

Hidden Mantis (Genjutsu/Wind): A Genjutsu he learned a long time ago, it grants the user the ability to 'fade' with the wind, and 'disappear' for a short time. Constant supply of chakra is needed to stay hidden for longer amounts of time. Obviously mostly used for getting away, or just to stay hidden.

Kekkei Genkai: Lunar Heart: Able to repel/attract water. Of course it's not unlimited, as Chakra is required to repel/attract. Essentially he can remain unharmed by any Water attacks by using the bloodline trait.

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Water Prison Technique: From the anime. The user creates a large inescapable sphere of water. Once captured, the target cannot move while inside, however the user must keep one arm inside of it at all times. Can also be used as a barrier of sorts.

Water Clone Technique: User creates a clone of water, containing 1/10th of the user's power. Reverts to normal water after being injured. Useful for doing tasks the user would not normally do.

Water Style: Black Rain Jutsu: From the anime as well. User creates a dark cloud above an area and rains black oil. Highly flammable.

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@Moon - Considering you are new to this and still developing your skills I'm pretty much okay for you to be accepted based on that edit so long as you can meet the base requirements of posting in the RP Corner.

@Yogi - So far so good.

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Alright, sweet!

It says Kurotenshi members and the other Ninjas can't meet in their missions, but will there be times where we meet? Or does it just mean they need permission to encounter with each other?
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XD this actually looks interesting.... You did a really good job on the story so much so, that you made even naruto look appealing! Good Job... I might join too so just a heads up :D
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Name: Nev Amoa
Nickname: Nev
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance:
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Nev wears a white face mask and a white cloak with feathers on the right shoulder. The cloak is worn as tradition in his Clan. Underneath he wears a full black hooded shirt and pants. (The black over his head in the picture is the hood). He has white hair that is covered by his hood, and covers his ears. His headband is also covered by his hood. All of his weapons and tools are kept on summoning scrolls. His Raven is a badly drawn, but fairly large.


Chakra Nature: Wind
2nd Nature: Water
Your side: Ninja Allies (Chuunin)

Skills: Nev lacks abilities in genjutsu due to his kekkei genkai, additionally his ability to learn ninjutsu is significantly increased, though his chakra reserves are unaffected. His taijutsu and stamina are his best assets, being skilled in close range and medium ranged attacks. Although his most powerful attacks and most of his skills come from taijutsu, he is capable of using weapons effectively, and his accuracy is above average.
Taijutsu: 7/10
Ninjutsu: 6/10
Genjutsu: 2/10
Stamina: 8/10
Chakra: 6/10

History: Nev is next in line to be the leader of the Amoa clan. As an only child, he has been encouraged to be among the strongest in the village. He is also one of the few members to actually have the Hurricane release kekkei genkai, making him a prodigy in his father's eyes. However, at the age of 6, Nev accidentally injured himself with his kekkei genkai, giving him an intense fear of using it. The incident's effect on him greatly annoyed his father who made numerous attempts to help Nev. Eventually his father could think of only one solution, summoning a raven that would replace Nev's mind with its own. (It isn't an ordinary raven of course, it from a different land than their own), the raven and the young Nev grew very close, greatly increasing Nev's father's spirits.

Nev did excellently in school, passing with high scores, especially in teamwork areas. His falling point was his genjutsu, and his inherited weakness to it. Despite this, he passed the Chuunin exam on his first try due to his excellent taijutsu, ninjutsu, and dojutsu.

He has completed 30 missions:
13 D-Rank
10 C-Rank
6 B-Rank
1 A-Rank

Because of his natural skill, he has been allowed to participate in tougher missions (upon direct request of his father, leader of the clan). He has participated in only one A-ranked mission, which consisted of escorting his youngest cousin through territory run by strong ninja. His cousin also possessed his kekkei genkai and she was planned to be married to another clan in another village for peace reasons. Originally the mission was to be given to a Jonin, but due to the relationship of Nev and his cousin, it was decided that he would participate on this mission. Nev's team and his cousin got to their destination safely, though Nev nearly lost his life protecting her (along with the clan's kekkei genkai).

I will give a more in depth explanation of this mission during the RP as it is a very important event to Nev.

Personality: Nev is a timid boy who does not ask for anything. He is content with spending all of his free time training, or doing whatever he is told to do. He is a very kind person who doesn't seem to get angry at anything, though he also never seems to be happy about anything either. He is very dutiful and loyal, and normally very serious. His most obvious quality is his polite and chivalrous attitude, often using the word sorry (even if he has no reason to apologize, or even during battle to apologise for any mess-ups he did). He has a fear of his own strengths though, and constantly holds himself back. This fear is actually life-threatening, as he is very scared of his own power, and as such only uses normal jutsus while conscious. (Though the use of genjutsu he can use his kekkei genkai)

His relationship with his Raven is very friendly, though the raven is much more enthusiastic and excitable than him.

Kekkei Genkai:
Hurricane Release: (Kekkei Genkai) A nature kekkei Genkai that greatly enhances the speed of the user and allowing them a high use of quick taijutsu, it is as dangerous as opening the 8 gates (yet stronger when used by the more powerful ninja who have it) if used for too long. Additionally Nev would not use this lightly, as it would render him very weak at his age. (His would be akin to opening the 2nd gate). The danger diminishes with intense physical training, unlike opening the gates, though it will still leave the user significantly drained.

-Dojutsu (Part of the above): Nev's vision is much more accurate in addition to increased accuracy. Nev can keep track of the fastest opponents, and can very well sense intentions. Unfortunately it makes him more vulnerable to Genjutsu than average. It also allows him to easily learn taijutsu and ninjutsu, being able to learn either after watching the technique 3 times (he can do a rough version if he sees it once, and an improved version the second time. In battle it is practically useless unless someone is constantly using the same jutsu.) It makes his eyes have a constant, cloudy, and swirling effect, similar to a hurricane. (Functions very well as a scouting ability)

Custom Jutsus:
Wind Release: Swift Fist Barrage- A taijutsu based attack that uses wind release to allow quicker movement and swifter punches, not as much of an increase as hurricane release, but still uses lot of chakra. If used for longer than 5 minutes, it will result in heavy fatigue in Nev. This is not part of the kekkei genkai and can be taught or used by anyone who can use wind release jutsus.

Beast Coordination: Feather Storm: Nev's raven turns into a clone of him, fighting side by side with him at the expense of a split (not always 50/50, can be any combination) chakra pool. The raven has feathers on both arms, along with lacking the swirling eyes. The beast can copy basic ninjutsu, but can't copy his kekkei genkai. Additionally the raven and Nev can switch positions very quickly. (A reverse version also exists, where Nev turns into a version of his raven, with swirly eyes, mainly used for scouting)

(Raven) Genjutsu: Nev's raven has the ability to perform genjutsu. It is generally only used on Nev himself to overcome his fear if needed. (The genjutsu prevents Nev from thinking about his emotions, which leaves him very vulnerable to manipulation. Normally the raven will give orders at that point, basically becoming Nev). Nev's conscious is transferred to the raven's body temporary. Due to the raven not being the one with the kekkei genkai, this style of fighting is very limited and will leave both Nev and his raven unconscious and bed ridden for 3 days. Unfortunately this is unavoidable, and Nev's father is still attempting to rid Nev of his fear, otherwise he will never be to his true potential.

The Raven
Since his is technically a character, he gets a small section.

Abilities: The Raven has the ability to talk like most summoned animals. Additionally it posses the ability to use genjutsu (made easier by Nev's weakness to it). Due to constant training with Nev, the raven can efficiently use Nev's kekkei genkai, along with perform close to Nev's skill in taijutsu when transformed into him. The raven is also enjoys a better sense of hearing than Nev. Though Nev's eyesight is much more keen and is better in every way.

Personality: The raven is very caring of Nev, seeing him as a good shinobi and a great pal. He is much older though, being around 25 human years old, he has served the Amoa clan since he was hatched. This makes him extremely loyal to Nev, though much more wise. Additionally his personality differs from Nev's passive and docile attitude. He enjoys action, talking a lot, and generally having a good time. He doesn't enjoy being told what to do (unless by Nev, who rarely gives him orders.) and generally sees Nev as a stick-in-the-mud. he is also very rude to people, causing Nev to apologise constantly for him. Still, they are virtually inseparable (by request of Nev's father, and also because the are so close.)

The raven greatly enjoys taking over Nev's body, seeing as it makes him feel much stronger. Nev does not enjoy giving up his body, but sees the necessity. They have ever only switched bodies to fight 2 times, and both times Nev regrets.


It should be noted that even during training, when the Raven switches bodies with Nev, they will be unconscious for at least 1 day. Training sessions normally can only last ten minutes to half an hour before both pass out.
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Kind of a dumb question, but will we be able to learn new Jutsu throughout the course of this RP?
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@Jegretis: yes you'll be able to learn new jutsus but you'll have to train a lot first and when a GM decides the time has come, we'll give the okay to use it. Also you can't meet in missions given by NPC but you'll meet in event missions.
@Phase : you do it standard missions(not involving Ten Tails) with NPC but the event missions will be made by the GMs.
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