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Old July 28th, 2013, 06:30 AM
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Yay, we get our Pokemon! I'll have a post up as soon as I can.

Also, EliteBeats: Dalia's accent made me laugh. It was rather ridiculous.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 09:10 AM
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@Fuyu it's gonna be funny when Zeus and Romanov meet, Romanov will NOT acknowledge the fact that Zeus probably won't like him.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:04 PM
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Sephy, Zeus will beat him to death via tail.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:05 PM
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@Dansparce. I'll make sure to write a reply as soon as I can! :3

@Lilizuki. Bahaha, that term is most accurate, indeed xD

@Fuyu. Woot! More posts! :D

@Garde. Thank you, me and Birdy do our best to remain ridiculous :3

@Sephy. I so look forward to that encounter :p
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:07 PM
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It's not that easy to beat a Munchlax to death And oh well anyways, it would be a great excuse for a battle I love battles.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:40 PM
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Sephy, so you know, if Zeus can't beat Munchlax to death, he'll beat you to death.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:42 PM
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@Sephy. Yup, Zeus will literally grab the fourth wall and smash you with it.

@Dansparce. Reply is up! :D

@Everyone Else. Halfways with the Reserve layout! :B
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:54 PM
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Can Imoen keep the HottieDar? And then it can develop a personality that hits on all the hotties it finds, like when it snarked at Ash in the beginning of the anime...

I'd have Imoen do the flirting, but her orientation is "Hitting-people-with-a-Magikarp-sexual".
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Old July 28th, 2013, 12:57 PM
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I love how Birdy and Elite understand Zeus that well.

Zeus: Peasants do not belong in MY roleplay. *smashes everything*
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Old July 28th, 2013, 01:45 PM
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It's okay, he will be my friend if I have to rebuild my own face a thousand times. I declare it Zeus will be mah fwend!
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Old July 28th, 2013, 01:59 PM
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@Lili. I don't see why not xD Go ahead and complete the HottieDex :3

@Sephy. What's that? I can't hear you between the sound of Zeus smashing everything!
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Old July 28th, 2013, 02:15 PM
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Zeus: Gods require servants, not friends. ... Peasant.

Noel: Then what am I?

Zeus: A human goddess, I would suppose.

(He's such a tsundere.)
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Old July 28th, 2013, 02:25 PM
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(He's such a tsundere.)
Double-tsundere gay prime time rom-com drama with the egotistical Feebas!
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Old July 28th, 2013, 06:20 PM
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Hello! I'm new around PC and I've never attempted a forum RP... But I've done a lot of Minecraft RP so hopefully I'm not too far off. Please feel free to criticize and tell me where I can improve on. I'm all up for any changes.

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Full Name: Eleanor W.
Age: 15
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IN-DEPTH
Appearance:

Eleanor is a petite girl of 15. She stands at 4'9, looking more bone than flesh except for the round bump of a stomach. "That's just baby fat and she'll grow out of it", as her mother says. Her skin is chalky white and her hair raven murkrow black. A red ribbon pulls her bangs back, securing it in place with a large bow at the top of her head as if to tie up a package. Her hair cascades down her back, stopping midway.

Ellie, as her parents call her, is often mistaken for much younger, resembling a small china doll. Her brown eyes are hidden behind a pair of rosy colored contacts. They're unnaturally large buggy eyes which conveyed a scrowl without her lips moving.

She prefers clothing of plain colors and rich textures. Black, gray, white, brown- neutral colors that make dressing easier in the morning. Efficiency plays a part even in clothing. Knee to ankle length dresses are her preference (because deciding on matching pants and shirts take 5 minutes out of every morning) and she'll finish off her look with black stockings and black slip on heels. To prepare for her adventure, she bought a dark red purse with a clip in the front and a gold chain that hung over one shoulder. It really didn't have any space for more than a pokédex, a few pokéballs and her wallet.

Personality:

Eleanor is a spoiled child, for a lack of a better word. She was raised in a wealthy family and sheltered like one. From her strict education involving private tutors, she grew up fast, maturing past her size but leaving her socially inept. She only comes into contact with maids and workers who more or less run at the sight of her.

Her mind works by calculating for efficiency. For example, she takes meticulous count of how many servants run the household and their costs. Why? "Why not," she would respond. "I will inherit this one day," a bit of disdain in her voice, "I should know how much it costs to run it."

Eleanor also has known fear of physically touching things. Especially public objects. (i.e. water fountains, elevator buttons, door handles and so forth.) Shaking hands is a definite no-no. Each servant is instructed not to touch her before beginning their service. A pack of wet tissues and hand sanitizer is always at the ready in her right pocket.

Her aspirations of becoming a trainer intermingle with her aspirations for independence. This is her chance to set forth from the shadows and experience the world, no matter how dirty. The Pokémon itself aren't so important to her, it's her opportunity to escape and smell the flowers. She just won't touch them.

Background: ERR MERR GERRD, SHE'S AN ORPHAN ((I kid))

Born to a family of old money in Kanto, Eleanor Watanabe is like any child. She drinks from gold goblets and eats with a silver spoon. The family once served as a lesser Daimyo during the Tokugawa era. Their present day money coming from the vast land in Kanto they still hold ownership to. Her father rarely returns home but when he does, servants gather in the hallway to greet him and Ellie would be leaning over the banister. Ever the dutiful daughter, she would greet him at the top of the stairs in her best dress. Sometimes she noted a younger man by his side in a black suit and red tie, whispering in his ear and offering her odd looks. Whether her father was with another woman or her father was in some funny business, Eleanor could never tell. If it was the latter, all the more reason for her to find some independence.

On the other hand, Eleanor's mother is always around. Never stepping outside the doors for more than a few moments. She walks from room to room, ensuring all the cleaning is in tip-top shape. Her hand gestures as she glides past rooms would put a maestro conducting an orchestra to shame. People would run back and forth with a flick of a wrist, scrambling to change the dinner ware to the fancy china or a different colored linen to match the seasonal curtains.

Growing up inside a large mansion left a lot of time for exploring hallways and unused rooms. She rarely got visitors except for the string of tutors that came to teach a range of topics from biology to modern literature. Her favorite subjects were business, math and any of the sciences. Boredom would settle in at times and she'd simply shrink further inside herself. Novels were a good escape and long bubble baths. Watching from afar, her mother would take pity on her at times and hire girls to be play dates. For Eleanor, it was easier talking to an accountant.

This is why Eleanor wants to become a trainer. Her mother was slowly grooming her to take over her role. All her mother's talent, ambitions, and hopes just wasted away in a timeless mansion. And so a plan was concocted.

For three nights Ellie's father proved his love for his daughter by sitting through five slideshows, seven presentation boards and three hired expert opinion. When he could bare it no longer, he finally gave his permission with a begrudging nod. Ellie gave a punch into the air before quickly composing herself with a pat of her dress. Ellie's mother was close by to witness it and stood frozen in place with a blank look that told nothing. She will later pull Ellie aside to give her some kind advice.

And so with her small purse filled to the brim with wet tissues, she sets off with her daddy's card.

POKÉMON

Starter Pokémon: Ponyta

Ponyta is proud and stubborn. When she gets mad, her nostrils flare open and small flames shoot forward. She'll throw her head back, mane wavering in the air and kick the floor in warning. By the third kick, she would be running straight at you. It's a rare temper that occurs only when you insult her. Don't insult her.

She was the perfect match for Ellie. Ellie, who played polo occasionally (against no one but her riding tutor of course), knew how to handle a ponyta. At least she thinks she does..


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Old July 28th, 2013, 06:46 PM
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@Peachy3xx. That's an impressive first SU :3 Just a few things about it:
  1. Her last name. If you wish to keep it a secret then you can PM it to me and Birdy and just reveal it as time goes on. Otherwise, we require you to specify it in your SU
  2. All eyes could express anything, even if just one emotion -or plain emptiness. Does that count? :o- :p Although it's not really a problem xD
  3. May I just say how hilarious it is that she'll be outside surrounded of tons of publics things even though she'll certainly despise the mere thought of touching them? XD
  4. In the history, could you add how Ellie's parents reacted to her going out on a journey? :B
  5. At the end of your SU you mention how Ellie's meeting with Ponyta went, even though, it being a starter implies you'll receive it when the RP starts and not before it (which is when you post in the IC Thread). It's totally okay if you want Ellie to have Obtained her Ponyta via other means. I'm just kinda confused on that part xD

Fix these tiny observations and you'll be jumping into the RéBURST bandwagon in no time! :D
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Old July 28th, 2013, 06:48 PM
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First, welcome to PC, and the RPC! May your time here be joyful, as long as you don't get punted into the sea.

Second, I like Ellie! We needed a spoiled brat. For sign-ups, generally, different GMs will have different expectations for character sheets, and the kind of formatting to use, but the most common is simply with the section titles (Appearance, Personality, Name, etc.) being bolded, and nowadays it's a good chance that they'll be looking for about two paragraphs' worth in each section, and maybe more for the History.

Third, everything Beaty pointed out, plus everything else I'm about to say.

I'd also like to see a little more description in the Appearance, such as what kind of clothes she normally wears.

In the history, what region is she from? Not all of the characters are from Hoenn. Since you kind of made half of her backstory about her parents, what kind of life did she live outside the grooming? Were her friends all her servants, or did she try to run away once (or thrice)? Things like this.

Lastly, please use the [spoiler] tag for your sheet. It's just a personal preference of mine, but it makes it much easier to scroll through the posts.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 07:45 PM
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Thanks! I also hope I don't get punted into the sea. Sounds like it'll hurt.

I've left out the meeting Ponyta part. I must have been a bit confused.

Her last names also not too important. I took it from my distant family in Japan and was embarrassed with using it in case I put it to shame. ><;; (And I read a guide earlier that said not to name your character "Kitsune" or another generic Japanese name, so I tried to avoid having to state it... haha...)

I'll add more to the history so be sure to re-read it~ And thanks again for the constructive criticism!
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Old July 28th, 2013, 08:26 PM
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Thanks! I also hope I don't get punted into the sea. Sounds like it'll hurt.
It is. I have trained Sharpedo and Lanturn to hate anyone punted into the sea.

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Her last name's also not too important. I took it from my distant family in Japan and was embarrassed with using it in case I put it to shame. ><;; (And I read a guide earlier that said not to name your character "Kitsune" or another generic Japanese name, so I tried to avoid having to state it... haha...)
It's not "generic" Japanese names. They are as varied as any other language's names, and most are acceptable. There's nothing wrong with using legitimate Japanese names (first and last) for a character; many people do it very well. The guide only really pertains to something as stupid as using "Kitsune" as a name or nickname, because it both looks and sounds stupid in use when naming any person ever.

Also, good for you for reading the guide! It's nice to know people still read it, and especially nice knowing new players read it, too.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 08:38 PM
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Must resist asian jokes...I'm normally pretty good about appropriate jokes vs. inappropriate but...my best friend is half chinese so by now it's ingrained in my being to do asian jokes at him......Banana rama...I think i'm okay now.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 09:46 PM
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The guide only really pertains to something as stupid as using "Kitsune" as a name or nickname, because it both looks and sounds stupid in use when naming any person ever.
Lady, I've seen Dragonsteel as a legit surname in history.

Ain't nothin' gonna top that.
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Old July 28th, 2013, 10:13 PM
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Old July 28th, 2013, 10:41 PM
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Old July 28th, 2013, 11:15 PM
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Everyone's Father was Chesterfield Snapdragon McFisticuffs, he could get anyone he wanted, hell I think he might even be MewTwo's father, and he's a clone.
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Old July 29th, 2013, 05:01 AM
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Old July 29th, 2013, 05:50 AM
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That's what I was thinking, Gardevoir. xD

Anywho, sorry for not posting yesterday, it completely slipped my mind.
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