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Old October 12th, 2013, 01:50 PM
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Warning! The following comic is rated for ages 14+ it contains Fantasy Violence, Mild Scary Scenes, Blood, Mild language.


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Introduction

Hey everyone, Karasuma here! I thought of so many ways on how to make my comic panel reading more enjoyable for you guys and I finally came up with this! Ippan-tekina is NOT a Pokémon comic. I'll be posting new pages every Monday thru Friday, the reason is cause I've had my comic making on hiatus for TOO long and I think you guys deserve it. I hope you enjoy it and hopefully this can stay around for awhile. This is a comic that I'm making during my spare time, so I'm not too sure if I'll end up making more. Please feel free to leave me both positive and negative feedback! :D


Story

The Story Begins! In a world where humans are born with abilities that need to be awakened by certain sages. These abilities are powers that are fictional since they come from anime or video game characters. Imagine a world in which you can fly or regenerate yourself or even handle material...this is that world. This is Ippan-tekina!

The Story Continues! With Guile dead and everyone recovering in the hospital, its time to return back to Hudson University! Yep, the fighting is over(well sort of) and its back to the school drama! In order to have money for AnimeNext, the gang decides to hold its first ever food festival at Hudson University to raise money...but will anything go wrong? Find out on Volume 2 of Ippan-tekina!

The Story Continues! Bee and Lawrence have been kidnapped by Renzo and Will, while blowing up Hudson University in the process! Looking forward to AnimeNEXT, Ranmaru told the gang there will be a tournament event going on with the prize being the Water Essence! Consisting of 5 members for each team to enter, Team Quiss was made! What will happen next? AnimeNEXT begins on Volume 3 of Ippan-tekina!

The Story Continues! The gang finally arrived at Somerset for AnimeNEXT's Anime Fighting Contest. They manage to defeat Team Nintendo with luck, but Team X will give them a challenge since Chris, Eric, and Manny aren't unable to fight due to their absence. Ranmaru and Haruhi will now go head on against Team X, but will they stand a chance? The second match begins on Volume 4 of Ippan-tekina!


Volume 1


Chapter 1: So it begins...
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Volume 2


Character List
Chapter 2: Triple Trouble
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Chapter 3: Unlucky Fate
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Chapter 4: Drama Times
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Chapter 5: Wind Legacy
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Chapter 6: Food Festival
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Chapter 7: Ability Impact
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Chapter 8: Changing Plans
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Chapter 9: Farewell School
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Volume 3


Character List
Chapter 10: Changes...
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Chapter 11: The 8 Teams!
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Chapter 12: First Fight!
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Chapter 13: Pikachu MadNess!
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Chapter 14: Fire and Ice!
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Chapter 15: Armando...!?
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Chapter 16: Sexual Healing!
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Chapter 17: BFB Bang!
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Chapter 18: Digital Love!
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Volume 4


Character List
Chapter 19: X Power!
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Chapter 20: Limits...
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Chapter 21: Enough...
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Credits

All miscellaneous and background sprites used in this comic are from Spriters Resource.
Google and Bing images for some of the random pictures.
Everything else has been made by yours truly on Paintbrush.
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Old October 13th, 2013, 12:39 PM
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I have to say, this was pretty interesting to read. You shouldn't give up on something if you think people won't read. As long as you love doing what you love, there's nothing that will stop you. I can sense this having a lot of potential. Best of luck with everything. ^-^
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Old October 13th, 2013, 05:39 PM
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Nice, a comic! I see some Scott Pilgrim references here on the way you introduce your characters. A little nitpick though: why are all of them awesome? IMO you could use other words to give variety in their descriptions.

I shall derive a line Syndrome(the villain) said in Disney's Incredibles: "With all of them [awesome], no one will be."

Keep it up!
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Old October 13th, 2013, 06:19 PM
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Whoa. Is it me or I just really miss Comic like this.
Best of luck and keep making!
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Old October 14th, 2013, 01:52 PM
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Thank you everyone for the compliments! I understand that there are some typos in some of the speech bubbles, so on my behalf I apologize. I would love to draw/make comic books one day as a career but for now it is only a hobby of mine, I'm not even good at it yet, but patience is a virtue. ^-^

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Old October 14th, 2013, 05:09 PM
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I'm excited to see what the action sequences look like. I'm also excited for what anime references come up next! Keep it up!
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Old October 15th, 2013, 02:23 PM
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Thanks for the compliment. I'm trying to put some anime and video game references as this goes on. It should be interesting how this will turn out as I keep going. I still have a lot to learn on making action sequences. Practice makes perfect, I guess. lol

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Old October 15th, 2013, 06:11 PM
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I like your idea of making references. I'm trying to understand the plot of the story so I'm having a hard time understanding. Then again it could be me since I'm a slow reader haha but keep it up!
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Old October 16th, 2013, 11:39 AM
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Much obliged for the feedback! I'll try to make it easy to understand. Uploaded 5 new pages, so enjoy.
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Old October 16th, 2013, 03:20 PM
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Guile?! But, America!

Seriously though, I love this comic so far. And there better be an Attack on Titan reference or I will cry.
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Old October 17th, 2013, 03:53 AM
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I'm probably one of those people who hasn't seen Attack on Titan yet. I don't have a crunchyroll account and I don't like watching anime on unknown sites, but once it is on Netflix I shall see it. ^-^ Uploaded 5 new pages.
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Old October 17th, 2013, 04:25 AM
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Ranmaru looks so much like a certain Ranmaru from Pokémon Conquest. But it's good, keep it up! I like the characters so far. You are, I suppose, planning to add those gory action scenes which you mentioned later?
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Old October 17th, 2013, 09:08 AM
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Thank you for the compliment. As for the gore, I put that up as a precaution in case I ever made a gore comic panel, but I want to keep it at a tolerant level so for now I don't plan on it. Maybe include one panel with some gore, but as far as focusing on it, not yet. I'll see what I can do.
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Old October 17th, 2013, 06:15 PM
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I'm probably one of those people who hasn't seen Attack on Titan yet. I don't have a crunchyroll account and I don't like watching anime on unknown sites, but once it is on Netflix I shall see it. ^-^ Uploaded 5 new pages.
Dude, what?!

Season 1 is over, so all of the current episodes are available on crunchyroll for non-members. Watch it, it's totally my favorite anime.
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Old October 18th, 2013, 02:23 PM
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Hey thanks for letting me know joey. I just haven't had time to watch any new anime, definitely will watch that over the weekend. Let us not go off topic now. Anyway, uploaded 5 new pages. Enjoy.
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Old October 19th, 2013, 02:59 PM
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I'm enjoying it very much. Don't give up on it!
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Old October 19th, 2013, 03:03 PM
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Thank you very much. It is getting a little easy on making these comic panels so I'm going to challenge myself on making the quality a little better. Uploaded the final 5 pages of Volume 1.
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Old October 20th, 2013, 06:15 PM
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I'm in love with this!!!! PLEASE do more!!!
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Old October 21st, 2013, 12:33 PM
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During the weekend I was finally watching Attack on Titan. It's good, loving the 1st season. Anyway, I uploaded the first 5 pages of Volume 2. I also included a little character info, so that you guys know their ages and any special techniques they know/will learn in due time. Enjoy.
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Old October 22nd, 2013, 06:25 AM
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Yay!!! New volume! It's going pretty well so far, can't wait to see what happens next!! ^_^
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Old October 22nd, 2013, 05:44 PM
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Thank you for taking the time to read. I'm glad I have some fans of this. Even though this is a hobby of mine and something that I'm not putting much effort, I'm still glad you are all enjoying it. Uploaded a new chapter.
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Old October 23rd, 2013, 01:43 PM
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Love at first headbutt lol I like it, DO MORE!!!!!
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Old October 23rd, 2013, 05:42 PM
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Thanks! Uploaded a new chapter today. I've made 50 pages so far, can't believe I've gone that far. xD
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Old October 24th, 2013, 04:03 PM
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That is a LOT of pages!!!! I'm loving the relationship between those two, please keep it up!!!!
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Old October 24th, 2013, 05:52 PM
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Uploaded a new chapter. It is a battle between close friends.
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