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Old November 26th, 2013 (08:57 PM).
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I see what you're saying, but I'm confused.

I know it says we wake up and told to run because they're coming so I assumed I'd be able flesh out all that during the ensuing RP. I was trying to give more of what kind of person he was then show what kind of person he'd become after the experiment since it looks like it's not long after. I feel like it's hard to depict what I'd feel suddenly waking up and being told to run. Being transformed would be an after thought as I don't think I go right into a mirror when I'm told to run.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (09:56 PM).
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Quote originally posted by 幕之内 一歩:
I feel like it's hard to depict what I'd feel suddenly waking up and being told to run.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (10:02 PM).
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Quote originally posted by 幕之内 一歩:
I feel like it's hard to depict what I'd feel suddenly waking up and being told to run.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:20 PM).
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I believe that what Manska meant is that rather than simply saying (for example) "Jeni likes attention" you would flesh it out to explain how they have obtained this trait, such as an event in their past, and how they express this need for attention. Is it by making a show of themselves in public places, or perhaps carrying out a knowingly reckless stunt in order to get people to notice them?

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Eddie tends to see everything in a positive light and isn't one for much negativity.
You could ask the questions why, how, when this first occurred, and things like that to help add depth to your foundation.

I hope I explained that correctly. If not then completely ignore me! :3

On a separate point, I think that Eddie and Elsie would be a dangerously powerful duo. Eddie uses anger to strengthen his attacks while Elsie feeds off the negative emotions around her (anger being one of the more common ones.) My girl would provide a means for his anger, such as conjuring illusions to instigate the emotion, while he would provide her a constant stream of dark energy. Perhaps, if you are accepted into the RP, Elsie would seek out Eddie after their powers are discovered with this revelation in mind. I think it would be fun to work with.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:21 PM).
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Quote originally posted by 幕之内 一歩:
I feel like it's hard to depict what I'd feel suddenly waking up and being told to run.
"Is your name the Doctor, by any chance?"
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:23 PM).
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I was about to make a snarky comment about how getting close to somebody to feed their anger has Unfortunate implications, but then this happened...
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"Is your name the Doctor, by any chance?"
Oh my god I love Doctor Who so much it's awesome!
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:27 PM).
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I was just using those as examples, in retrospect probably bad ones since I was pretty tired and rushing since I had to go soon; very bad ones actually, your personality should be mostly if not all about before the experiments since you've mostly been unconscious for them. There isn't anything specific I want you to add since I don't know Eddie well enough to say what's important enough to warrant adding, that's kinda the problem.

I'm just looking for you to expand the personality section a bit and give me a better idea of your character in general. Right now I just have a very basic idea of what Eddie is like. Stuff like fears, goals, likes, dislikes, little individualities that separate him from any other guy who is like him on the surface. They don't seem important but they help a lot; it gives the other players a better idea who they're playing with and, very importantly, it helps me as a GM to work in little story elements and scenes tailored to a particular character. Sovereign made a good point as well with showing some little bits of his past that caused him to be particular ways, if you think about that and those points I made here that should be a good amount of information. Or something else, again these are just examples to help get you thinking.

A lot of this story once it gets to the later steps is going to be me half twisting existing events to fit your character and half writing a new story based on what they do and for that I need to know more than the bare basics about your character.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:52 PM).
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Fun fact, I have never seen Doctor Who. I have always heard people rave about it but I have never sat down to watch an episode. Is it worth getting into this late in the race?
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:55 PM).
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Well, you can't start off with the old series, 'cause a bunch of episodes are literally lost to time. You can start with the new run, beginning with Christopher Eccleston, and have a pretty enjoyable time of it. 'Tis where I started.

Buuut, I definitely wouldn't start off with the new series coming up. Stuff be confusin', yo. Especially with Steven Moffat at the head writer. Better to begin before things got more convoluted, so you can be eased into it.
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Old November 26th, 2013 (11:58 PM). Edited November 27th, 2013 by 幕之内 一歩.
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Ah, I see. I'll do what I can to flesh it out a bit then. I was wondering why everyone else had a story for their personality. I was like, what could you possibly put in there that you can't just do with simple lines.

I'll edit it up here in a bit.

EDIT: I touched it to a point where it's (hopefully) acceptable.
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Old November 27th, 2013 (07:51 AM).
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Haha, I realize I didn't click the thread so I wasn't getting my frequent e-mails from it, and when I return you're all discussing my most favorite thing ever.

Either way I can't wait for this to start. START.... START NOW PLEASE.... plez. haha
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Old November 27th, 2013 (03:29 PM).
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I've got nothing better to do, and there seems to be an opening... If you don't mind, I'd like to sign-up. It'll take me some time to actually write something up though.

Here's an RP sample though, PM me if you want to know where it came from, since it's not from this forum.
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"That's... That's one large sinkhole." Anastassia couldn't help but say as she peered down the hole that suddenly appeared. For a moment, she is reminded a bit of the Research Center, at least it looks like it if the holes were on the walls, not as large, or is able to bring down entire buildings.

Yeah, that last part is slightly scary. It almost made her wish that she is potent enough in Psychokinesis to make herself fly all the way over to safety. Then again, if she could do that, she’ll be better off pulling up the ground and see exactly what made the hole.

As is though, shining a flashlight down it shows nothing but pitch black, which just means that it is more than an underground tunnel collapsing on itself. Well, it should be obvious when buildings sunk like a ship, but…

“Joy.” She smiled from her dark humour.

When she felt something prodding her mind, she remembered that she was in a telepathic communication with one of the survivors. One of the few who is coherent enough to not be a zombie, doesn’t want to kill her (maybe), and is a decent enough distraction. She must be talking to her, but she blocked it out during her inspection of the hole. She has a habit of doing that if she’s too focused on something.

_/I apologize. There seemed to be some kind of commotion here in the Industrial Section. Please send some capable hands, as I’m worried for any other survivors here that survived the aftermath of pitfalls suddenly appearing\_

She waited for some time for Irene to do what she asked before she resumed talking to her. The albino girl turned to examine her surroundings, taking in the devastation further dealt by that sudden tremor. Now that she’s listening more carefully, the place doesn’t seem as deserted as is, hearing the occasional explosion coming from the distance.

_/Lady Irene, if I may? I would like to explore the area.\_ Anastassia began when she thought that the woman on the other end wasn’t busy. _/We might lose track of the Piper who may or may not have a hand in the chaos. I’m not totally defenceless though, as I can smash any zombie that tries to attack me with the rod I have, so you need not worry about my sneaking around.\_

After all,’ The girl thought, ‘I can always check my surroundings with my Psychometry.’

She blinked, smacking her face as she just realized something. ‘Right, I could use Psychometry. Why in the world did I not think of that?

Anastassia looked around once again. ‘Oh, right. Zombie apocalypse.
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Old November 27th, 2013 (06:36 PM).
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Sure, I'll note you down as a reserve. And that means that signups are closed once again.

Also since we're getting pretty close to enough people to get things started reservations now last three days from when they are taken out, or from the time of this post if you already had one.
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Old November 28th, 2013 (02:32 AM).
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Old November 28th, 2013 (02:44 AM). Edited December 2nd, 2013 by Rune Alchemist.
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I'm running out of western-esqe names, so I'm recycling the one I used in my RP sample, since I like it and fits what I have in mind.


Name: Velvette Haziel
Age: 19
Pokemon Species: Froslass
Personality: If anyone were to ask someone who knew the Haziel family about Velvette, they would be told about a gorgeous, quiet, and polite girl who loves her siblings. While not incorrect, this font is the result of her upbringing.

As the eldest daughter of a well-off family, Velvette is expected to be graceful, talented, and beautiful. The girl didn't disappoint. Since her earliest years, Velvette has been taught the proper etiquette fit for high-end gatherings, learned with the best scholars of their time, and met many prolific figures. Through it all, she did it for the sake of her family, never complaining and simply enduring.

At one point, she couldn't take it anymore. She fled her classes and hid herself in one of the less used rooms of her home. There, she found something that would spurn her on through her endeavors. It was an art room, paintings from various artists hung from the walls, intricate sculptures dotted the room, but what caught her attention is an inconspicuous portrait of her mother and father sitting in a bench looking at a sunset. Her parents looked very sincere in it, unlike the mask they wore on a daily basis.

From then on, she aspired to live her life to the fullest, living up to people's expectations but not letting it hamper her chances to do what she wished to do. She wears a mask of a calm, quiet heir when in front of other people, but few actually know of her hidden depth.

Whenever people visited her home, she would sit on the side, watching them. Often, she would slip in a few words for the sake of conversation, but otherwise is quite content not participating much.

She is very passionate about art, but often keeps her words in check, she learned to tinker during her spare time, and never out-right speaks her mind.

Overall, Velvette is an understanding girl, intelligent, and is open-minded about other's opinions. Above all, she values the importance of life and the emotions people express.

Appearance: Velvette's most striking change from her old look, is her hair. Where before it used to be a curtain worthy of her namesake, the top of her head is tipped with short, straight snow-white strands. It sweeps over to one side to resemble a tear-drop. Long strands falling down to the small of her back retained their purple coloring, but their tips on both ends are white. A few framing her face were capped with ice, but still flowed when she moves.

Her skin turned quite pale and tinged slightly blue. There are a few patches of her skin with unnatural coloring though, like her midriff which is a bright red in color, and the blue spot on her hands.

The few features she retained from her old life is her vibrant violet eyes, her delicate fingers and her bright, expressive face.

Background: Velvette is the elder of the first-born twins of the Haziel family of Sinnoh, but while her twin-brother went away on his Pokemon Journey, she stayed at her home and took care of her other siblings while one or both of her parents left for business.

The Haziel family is a respected family known for their trade of metals and Steel Works. They are the main producers of quality steel, capable of providing materials for ship building even overseas such as Hoenn. They participate in fair-trade, and promote customer satisfaction and employee safety. Still, they are not without enemies.

There came a day when Velvette's monotonous routine changed, when one of her younger brothers was taken from their home. To make matters worse, her mother, who was pregnant at the time, suffered from their loss the most. From that moment, she vowed to value life at its best, and find her missing brother.

Her twin returned to their home, blaming himself for not being able to protect them, even if he wouldn't have been able to do much for the culprit to have slipped past the many bodyguards of the family. Still, this left few to search for her brother, and she left on trips as her family's representative as her father searched for him, her loyal Pidgeot that she raised from infancy by her side.

She traveled to Kanto, and got caught on work, slowly losing contact from her family. It has been over a year since she last heard from her twin when an event that changed her life happened. It was under the cover of night, her Pidgeot resting inside its Pokeball by her bedside table, that she was taken.

It took two whole months before anyone noticed that Velvette Haziel has gone missing.

Features - Positive:
-She can levitate almost instinctively.
-She can create invisible barriers, and make things float and move.
-Quite skilled with the manipulation of Ice and Snow.
-Capable of changing the atmosphere of a room and/or location with effort.
-Extremely agile and stronger than Humans.
-Both Human and Pokemon medicine are effective on her

Features - Negative:
-The less moisture there is in the air, the harder it is for Velvette's body to breathe. The hotter it is, the more fatigued she becomes.
-Unlike what it is to be expected, she is completely solid, she can't phase through objects and her Ghost-Pokemon constitution only protects her from Pokemon attacks.
-She knows next to nothing about controlling her ghost powers, even instinctively.
-Her biology, for the most part, is that of a human's, including her immune system and rest and recovery.

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With a skip to her step, Velvette fell in line with the other students on board the vessel. All of her things are in her satchel, and anything that doesn't fit it she would get from the storage docks.

In order to pass the time waiting for the ship to land, she recited passages of history where the ship and vessels alike never managing to reach their destination because of some event where they were attacked by a powerful Grimm or where the weather turned suddenly to anyone who is willing, or is unfortunate enough to listen to her.

"-and so, the Skytanic sunk below the turbulent storm clouds, the naïve passengers who thought that the great skyship would never sink all perished as the humongous Grimm went for another pass and swallowed them all whole.

This is the last sight the survivors in the tiny life pods saw before they were mercifully taken to safety by the passing Merchant ship."

Oh, look. They're all pale. Velvette shrugged. If they fainted, then they wouldn't be fit for Beacon, now would they?
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Old November 28th, 2013 (09:31 AM). Edited November 28th, 2013 by Manska.
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@幕之内 一歩 I apologise, I didn't notice your edit. Could use a bit of work but your roleplay sample shows that you know how to write so I'm inclined to give the benefit of the doubt; accepted.

@Rune Alchemist That looks good so far, looking forwards to seeing it done. Something I do have to point out though is that far as I can tell, Froslass don't actually have psychic powers. Ghost =/= psychic and they don't learn it naturally, or many ghost powers for that matter; their abilities tend to be more towards the Ice side of their typing.

So with Aura dropping that leaves us with Six completed characters, one WIP from Rune and one slot open to whoever would like to take it.
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Old November 28th, 2013 (02:41 PM).
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This is looking great! If only we had more variety in our character types... hmm...
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Old November 28th, 2013 (03:26 PM).
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As SB was just hinting me and the accepted players have been talking in our super awesome secret skype chat of doom and we have decided that some more variety is in order.

I'm increasing the overall amount of slots to 10, leaving three slots free for newcomers. However, for these new slots the types dark, psychic and ghost are banned. If your desired pokemon is primarily a different type and half one of those then I might allow it, VM me or something. Rune Alchemist this ban doesn't apply to you, feel free to carry on making your Froslass.
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Old November 28th, 2013 (04:02 PM).
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When I said "Psychic", I was referring to those that Froslass can use... like making things float and move, and creating a barrier... But you're the GM. -shrugs-

I guess I'll try and draft up my Character's Backstory...
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Hey I'm sorry, I gotta drop out. Heading to the field soon (military training). I don't know how long I'll be out there, probably a month or so and I don't want to hold this up.

I apologize once again. Hope you guys have fun!
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Ah, it's been a while since I last logged into this forum. Anyway, my friend Rune cordially invited me to join this RP, so I'd like to reserve a spot if you'd be so kind as to accept me. I'll be working on my profile for now.
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Old December 1st, 2013 (02:59 PM).
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Sure, that's fine

And speaking of Rune your character is accepted.
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Old December 1st, 2013 (08:38 PM).
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Just informing you guys that I have received a name change. Sovereign. is now Nebula. Hope that doesn't cause too much confusion. :3
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Old December 2nd, 2013 (08:34 AM). Edited December 19th, 2013 by soranium21.
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Alright, here we go. Please inform me if there's something disagreeable or just plain wrong in what I wrote.

Name: Stella Plain
Age: 18
Pokemon Species: Mawile

Personality:
If you need someone to look at an empty glass and say that it's half-full, then Stella is the one for the job. There's always a chance, even when you don't see it - these are the words that she lives by. Of course, this goes both ways; she knows that being too optimistic isn't such a hot idea.

There was a time when she didn't trust anything or anyone but herself due to being looked down upon due to her lineage, but that changed when she became a breeder and regained the ability to establish connections, first with Pokemon, then with people. People began to see her in a new light: as the Pokemon-loving Stella, not as the child of terrorists. However, that unyielding pessimistic part of her head is a carry-over from those old times.

Having been abandoned at an early age, coupled with being denied of her existence by a lot of people, Stella had to learn a lot of things through her own efforts, and isn't much for tact. She does, however, appreciate people who are straightforward with her.

While once on the verge of cursing her existence for the rest of her life, she reclaimed her trust on others, first on Pokemon, then on people. This was catalyzed by a one-time chance meeting with a man training with his Pokemon, whom she later identified to be Bruno of Kanto's elite four.

As a breeder, she gives high regard to the proper handling and interaction with Pokemon, and will try to crack down on anybody who decides that they don't deserve respect, or unjustly mistreats them. In addition to this, she values taking care of the self, and looks down on people who don't eat properly, don't get enough sleep, or live a slovenly life in general.


Appearance:
Stella is somewhat insecure about her rather prominent forehead, but stopped being so tripped up over it when a boy told her that it looked great. Her hair, which used to be a plain fluffy black, had acquired naturally-occurring purple highlights. The fluffiness of her hair helps to hide the tiny black steel horns that she had acquired from being altered.

A major change in her physique, aside from the horns, is that her black eyes had changed into a deep red, and her hands had been stained permanently black, and her arms a vivid purple up to a few centimeters from the elbow.

Her height increased after the change, with Stella now standing at around 195 centimeters. As for her weight, while she thinks that it's been affected by the Metal type constitution, she still doesn't want to talk about it.


Background:
Stella's story is best begun by looking back to before she was born, at how her parents were Team Rocket members who dissented against the dissolution of the organization. With their common interests, they found themselves becoming a couple, eventually leading to the marriage that brought forth Stella into the world. However, as she was just about old enough to walk, they left her behind at Lavender Town's Pokemon Center, where she the three year old Stella met Mr. Fuji. Her parents then began their scheme to revive the defunct Team Rocket, starting by taking over the Pokemon Tower. However, things went wrong when an intrepid trainer had tried to foil their schemes before they could set it to motion, and accidentally triggered the bombs they had set up all over the tower. The trainer got out safely, but Stella's parents were never heard from again. At the same time, chunks of the tower had been blown off, disrupting the Pokemon that had been put to rest, and setting the Kanto region into turmoil.

The tower ended up getting a long-term remodel, and Mr. Fuji was kind enough to raise Stella herself. He took her parent's crimes in stride, saying that it wasn't her fault at all and that she shouldn't be blamed for anything. He taught Stella how to take care of Pokemon, and accept their love by giving it back two-fold. The girl took to his teachings so well that it was almost as if Stella was the daughter that he never had.

However, people would not forget easily. She would be the target of constant stream of abuse from the townspeople. As the target of their rage was gone, they shifted it to the closest in line, which was their daughter, the "Offspring of the Corpse Killers". It got worse when Fuji just disappeared one day, and all of the Pokemon she had been taking care of refused to interact with her; they only wanted Fuji. Young, hurt, confused and betrayed, the pressure of living alone coupled with being ostracized got to her eventually, and she left Lavender Town without a real plan. She ended up being lost in the wilderness where she chanced upon Bruno, who she decided to accompany despite not knowing who he was back then. In her journey as his tag-along for two months, she learned many new things that rekindled her love for Pokemon, and eventually allowed her to forgive people and their nature.

After giving her farewells, she returned to Lavender Town once more to find that the Fuji's Pokemon that she'd left behind had caused a racket across town, apparently looking for her. They hadn't hated her, after all; they were just worried about Fuji that they couldn't think of anything else, they same way that they were worried for her this time. From then on, she decided to be a breeder, to learn how she could best take care of Pokemon and return the happiness that she felt that day.

Years later, and she'd earned the respect of the people; no longer do they look down on her like scum, or think of her as a budding terrorist. She isn't a very well-known breeder, but the people of Lavender Town all know how well she takes care of abandoned Pokemon, carrying on Mr. Fuji's will. Of course, she believes that Mr. Fuji is still out there somewhere, probably at his old home, possibly making friends with more Pokemon.

On a certain day, as she was heading back from the recently completely rebuilt Pokemon Tower after paying tribute to the Pokemon she took care of that have passed away, she was taken, and has yet to be spotted since then.


Features - Positive:
Being a hybrid Steel/Fairy type, she has two immunities, as well as a wide array of resistances. In addition to this, she is also immune to actual poison.
Her Steel type constitution increases her stamina and resistance to physical damage, aside from the fact she is more agile and strong when compared to a normal person in general.
As a half, both Pokemon and Human methods of healing are applicable to her.
Her eyesight is heightened to the point where seeing in the dark is no problem to her, due to the Mawile's tendency to stay in caves.

Features - Negative:
As a consequence of being a Steel Pokemon, she is extremely sensitive to high temperatures, to the point where she is debilitated when it's too hot. She also gains an allergy to dust.
With her sense of sight heightened, her eyes become very sensitive. As an example, flashing a light at her will take her more than twice the time that it usually takes a person to recover.
Despite being a Steel type, her body is still mostly flesh with mostly just the bones being strengthened, so her skin can still be pierced like other people's.
She will have some difficulty in using her offensive Steel type moves, as her horns aren't well-developed enough to use them in full capacity.


Roleplay sample:
[This is actually from a story, not an RP, but it should suffice. Took out the names to make it more general.]

She sighed right after she got out of the clubroom, partly out of relief, but also partly out of disappointment, to her surprise. Though she only really did what she usually did while playing, she felt like she achieved something in that game alone. Perhaps it was because she cheered someone up by participating? That must have been part of it, she concluded. Only partly put off by the fact that she didn’t have any more time to borrow more books or even just return the ones that she was already done reading, she went on to walk back to the school entryway where her outdoor shoes and umbrella should be waiting for her.

She thought back to what the president said said.

You have great potential in this game. If ever you get around to thinking that you don’t dislike playing so much, then I’d be honored to have you join the club.

Normally, she’d have given this statement an outright, if not polite, rejection, but today she said “I’ll think about it” for some reason. Could it be that she really wasn’t as against the thought of playing the game as she thought? Only time will tell, she thought.

For now, the biggest obstacle for her was dinner. Last she saw, they didn’t have much rice left in store, so she had to buy some too. Of course, all the money was at home, so she couldn’t just drop by the market on the way. Finding herself in the entrance already, she changed into her outdoor shoes and picked up her umbrella from the rack.

“I guess curry will do for tonight.”
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That looks mostly good, though I would like you to clarify one thing; her appearance is a bit vague, what exactly do you mean by horns? Do you mean the mouth-like horns that a Mawile has, or something smaller/different?

Also it's worth noting that with one prearranged and specific exception, Gijinka do not react well to Mega Evolution components, especially a species with major physical changed around their head like a Mawile. Just wanted to point that out since you mentioned Mawilite in your SU.

As an aside to everyone, the game will be starting soon. In the off chance that someone has been working on a SU and not posted in this thread yet post here asap to tell me so I can hold off a little bit if you want to be in the opening sequence.
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