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Old July 18th, 2014 (06:49 AM).
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Rated T due to killing of pokemon.

Rules:
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If you are inactive for 5 days, you will be removed from player list.
No god-Modding/bunnying.
Killing players on the opposite side as you IS ALLOWED, but MUST be prearranged.
All regular rules apply.


Story:
About a hundred years ago, the god of our world started to reawaken and wreak havoc on his own creations. At first, it was just picking of a zangoose here or a rattata there. It eventually led to the near extinction of whole species, such as ponyta, eevee, pancham, and goomy lines. Any pokemon he does not like, arceus would strike them down, fainting on the first strike, disintegrating at the second. The species unown has also mutated, becoming stronger than most pokemon. They also have the ability to exterminate pokemon, but only in groups. Over time, as pokemon have become rarer and rarer, humans are taking extreme measures to protect as many species as they can. They have built machines that have created entire new worlds with links in between. But pokemon seem to have a hard time with surviving in other dimensions, and humans must step up to protect them before all is lost. But someone, or something, wants the extinction of pokemon to come, so that Arceus may be caught. A few people have been chosen to become the gods of these worlds, to protect them and their inhabitants.

There are three sides to chose from:Gods, Shadows, and Neutrals.
GODS:
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Gods:
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You will bring a single pokemon through the portal to your new world, who will be your partner and your only friend. You must make the land hospitable for life, gathering various thing to send back in exchange for pokemon and necessary items. Your small planet will deteriorate over time, due to natural events and the Shadow Hunters. You must also try to maintain as many species of pokemon that you can, as there are only so many worlds to bring them to. Beware the natural cycle of life, too, as it can lead to the extinction of a species very quickly, due to being eaten or starving to death. People will periodically move to your planet, and you must make sure they survive as well. If you manage your goals, pokemon will live on, and arceus can quickly be defeated.


Scientists:
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Your job is to study different pokemon species in hope of cloning them. You must collect this information to be able to create a clone: species, typeing, behavior, common moves, and diet. You will be paid some money for every species you are able to clone.


SHADOWS:
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Shadow Hunters:
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You are being paid to terminate the new worlds, without being noticed. You will be tasked with trying to drive certain species to extinction for large rewards. Back on earth, prices are rising fast, and people are losing jobs, and this is one of the few ways to make money now. If you are caught, however, you will pay a heavy price, and be sent to a planet filled with pokemon that are not afraid to kill a human. If you succeed at this job, arceus will be calmed after the extinction of all pokemon, and will let humanity live. If you fail, he will surly terminate all human life, even your own.


The Infiltrators:
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These people are part of the government that works for the Shadow Hunters, covering their tracks. They are mostly politicians who raise taxes but take the money for their own good. Also they plan on settling on a planet as a common person but it's really to update on their progress and kill of the pokemon. They may also be like the person founding a planet, but many will be used to either smuggling the kills or to lure in pokemon easier.


Origin Experts:
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These people study ruins and kill of the pokemon there. Also they are trying to find out where Arceus is so that they can capture him. The are also the scientists for the research on pokemon. Sometimes the Shadow Hunters capture a common pokemon and they have to experiment on them to create a disease to kill them off faster.


NEUTRALS:
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Colony builder:
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You believe the worlds should be used for humans too. Your job is to get people places to live in the new worlds. people will pay you money to buy houses from you. Eventually, you plan to take over the government with money as your weapon.


Everyday person:
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You are trying to survive it the new worlds, gathering resources to get money and run a business. This has the most freedom of secondary options, as you can do almost anything you want, but you have limits on your potential.


Which side will you chose?

Pokemon Partners:
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Every person may have a pokemon as their partner, even if there goal is to exterminate pokemon, due to humans being too weak to take down a pokemon. However, different people have access to certain types of pokemon.

Gods: They have no restrictions on what pokemon they may have as partners, but they MUST have one.

Scientists: They may only have pokemon that are electric, steel, or normal types, and they MUST have one.

Shadow Hunters&Infiltrators: They may only have pokemon that are ghost, dark, dragon, or bug types, and the MUST have one.

Origin Hunters: They may only have pokemon that are rock, ground, or steel types, but they DON'T have to have one.

Colony Builders: They may have normal, fighting, or flying types, but they DON'T have to have one.

Everyday People: They may have any type, but their pokemon's BST may NOT exceed 350 to start. They DON'T have to have one, but it is recommended.



The New Planets:

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Aquer: A planet that is mostly water, with many valuables on its ocean floor. It is the perfect home for water pokemon, but not for pokemon that live on land.

Ideca: A planet made almost entirely out of rocky spires filled with ores and minerals. This planet is perfect for flying, rock, ground, and steel types.

Gahiin: A planet home to a dense forest, full of rare fruits. Perfect for flying, grass, bug, and fairy types.

Rinea: A planet full of plains, crisscrossed with rivers, and small patches of trees. Can be home to all types of pokemon.


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Name: Jade Stone
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Appearance: Green hair and eyes, pale white skin. Very thin, and average height. Wears a labcoat over a sleevless pink top and blue shorts.
Personality: Jade is fassinated by pokemon, and will give her attention to a pokemon easier than to another human. Jade hardly ever makes eye contact with others when speaking to them. Jade easily is frustraded when others don't don't see her point of veiw. Jade will feel guilty for keeping a secret told to her. Jade will most likely make bad desicions during speech.
Background/History: Jade is from the Hoenn region, more specifically Lilycove City. Always curious about the portals being built in the old museum, she entered it often, helping out the scientists by collecting what they asked for in exchange for knowledge on what they were doing. One day after heading home, Jade found a box on the ground. Electricity was shooting from the box in short bursts. Quickly opening it, Jade found a baby Mareep along with a stone and a bracelet.

After many years, Jade and her Ampharos Amber figured out the secrets of the stones. Mega stones, a long forgotten secret first belonging to Kalos, had become rare, due to stones disintegrating if left exposed to the elements for too long. Using her findings, she managed to create a stone similar to mega evolution that works on all pokemon, with only minor boosts. Due to her inventions, Jade was aloud to head through a portal to examine any pokemon that are moved there.
Partner Pokemon: Amber the Ampharos(Dragon pulse, Rain dance, Thunder)
World: Rinea
Role: Scientist

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Being very quiet and patient, Galicia was usually ignored by other people. Even though she's pretty pessimistic, her mind works quickly around situations. She's the type of girl who's not afraid of anything and is only concerned about her survival. She will do whatever it takes to reach her goal, no matter the consequences afterwards. Being bold and very unnoticeable makes a deadly combination.

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Ever since she lost her parents at eight and was quickly kicked out of inheriting money by her greedy aunt, the streets gladly took her in. Sure the initiation was hard but Galicia managed to get in and survive the cruel world. One day while robbing a house, she found a weird sword in the basement but the leader said it was a deadly one. Ever since then, she always has her sword ready behind her.

When the disaster of the sudden death of pokemon occurred, it affected everything, even her Night Raider Gang. Some wanted to give up the street life to preserve pokemon, after all, they had some of their own. The rest didn't care and others were happy the pokemon were dying. Eventually the Shadow Hunters found this gang and asked for their help. Some just quit the gang and tried to run away, but they were quickly killed to keep silent. Among the dead was their leader. Galicia knew she was forced to join them or her fate was to go the same way of the lifeless bodies down on the pavement.

So that's why she was the first to accept their offer. She figured, the money would be well enough for survival and maybe humans wouldn't focus so much on creatures instead of their own kind. Plus, it's not like anyone wants to hire a girl who didn't even go to middle school. Others fearfully joined and the remaining were killed. That's how she joined the Shadow Hunters. Over time, she was promoted to a valuable asset since her sword made killing pokemon faster.

Galicia eventually learned to enjoy the bloodshed and killing of pokemon. Sure her sad Flygon would give her that look to stop, but she wanted none of it. The money was just enough and she was well off then her life on the streets. She knows that once all other wild pokemon are dead, she would have to kill Flygon too. When that day comes, she will do it without question.


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Outrage
Earthquake

Planet:Rinea
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Old July 19th, 2014 (08:59 AM).
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Old July 28th, 2014 (02:37 PM). Edited July 30th, 2014 by Spiede.
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Name: Aurora.
Age: nineteen.
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Appearance: a young girl, blessed with a beautiful, slim frame of about five foot, six inches tall. with bright blue eyes tinted with a darker purple, one can not help, but stare. the only mar on this body is located on the girl's right leg. running along this slender limb is a burn mark, riding from the bottom of her foot to right above the knee, spiraling up the leg. this permanent scar is always covered by a thigh high, black stocking. the other leg is unmarked and only bares another black stocking, this one only coming to right below the knee. over top these leg coverings are tall, white boots with pink trimmings. wrapped around her narrow waist is a pink skirt, followed by a black spaghetti strap blouse with white trim. drawn over this top is a black, half cropped shirt with a low riding neck rim. strutting out from the crop top's loose sleeves are tight arm warmers that stop at her wrists.

her hair is ridiculously long as she never cuts, only trims. it's color is a faint pink almost white. the strands are usually worn down with a loose braid on each side of her pale face. sometimes aurora will wear her rapunzel hair in a long, messy ponytail, with many loose strands around her face.

Personality: a soft spoken girl that speaks her mind, but only in quiet murmurs. her youth deems her ignorant of what the world used to be like, filled with Pokemon of various species in abundance. this world is unknown to her and the new world of suffering innocents has broken her spirit. as a child, aurora watched an entire species be slowly eradicated. this both frightened and angered the girl, from a young age she silently promised those erased creatures that she would find a way to help. this promise is what has molded the now young adult's persona. she is usually shy, but will do what she has to in order to keep her word. the sight of dying pokemon has some what desensitized the girl and although timid, she does not scare easily.

Background/History: aurora grew up in a time where pokemon species were dying off left and right. seeing this caused the girl great pain throughout her childhood as she loved pokemon with all her heart, this created a very sad and soft spoken individual. once the girl was in her young teenage years she did all that she could to help out the dying creatures, be it feeding them, building small shelters, rescuing them from natural disasters, or simply playing with them. her parents were very proud of their little pokemon activist and supported her in any way possible, but their world was dying as well as the pokemon.

aurora, with the help of her parents, formed a small group of volunteers that came together regularly to help pokemon. the young girl, although young and quiet in her ways, lead the teams of random people on various missions of rescue and care. she continued her work from the time she was fourteen to present, her parents helping along the way. on one of her trips out into the forests, she stumbled upon a small rilou, who later on became her partner. after so many years of tending to the weak and injured creatures, aurora's efforts were finally recognized by a high up representative of her community, who granted her access to the soon to be open portals. aurora and her parents were ecstatic when they received the news, it was a chance at new life, but soon their excitement came to a halt. only the young woman was able to cross over into the new world, she would have to decide. continue her efforts in preserving pokemon species or stay with her family.

the sensitive girl of course refused to go without them, but they insisted and explained that this was her calling, this was the only way. that going off into this new world was what she had to do to save herself and the remaining pokemon of their dying world. reluctantly the girl went, knowing that her parents were right, but her heart filled with a great sadness and guilt. she hoped that one day her parents would be able to come through to the new world.
Partner Pokemon: Lucario [M] (aura sphere, detect, extreme speed)
World: Rinea
Role: God
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Speide:The only problem with your su is, no one has gone through the portals yet. And to be a god, it is recommended that they did something special. A good example for her character is maybe saving a government person's pokemon. There is only one person to be revealed at the moment. It is Rebecca Sams and her Golem.

If the minor tweaks are made, it will be good. So for now, Aurora is not accepted.
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oh, i thought you said we started off in the new world? o.o i will fix that then and could she have started some kind of pokemon rescue group and that be the reason why she was chosen? i guess it would be kinda like a rangers group except directed towrads just pokemon.
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Old July 29th, 2014 (09:48 PM). Edited July 31st, 2014 by kaomojisama.
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Used to be an idol, she's beautiful with her black eyes. His hair is originally black, tied in a side tail but then she color her hair orange but leaves the underneath with the original color. She usually wears a pink short sleeved hoodie, white shorts and pair of white sneakers. Alternatively, sometimes she wears her white short dress.

Personality
Cheerful and kind to others, they never seen her down ever for second in public. She never concern about her life or future and always 'having fun' that day. She's really frank about things and sometimes hurt others because of that. Nah, everyday you'll only saw that side of her.
Although, when she got stressed out or in a pressure, she's pretty much crazy and like to destroy things. As a kid, she usually destroy her doll, but then when she's older, she once kill a pokemon secretly. That side of her is usually she hides.

Background/History
She started her idol career in young ages because of her poor parents. Able to became an idol, she received much money and lived happily with her parents. Not thankful, her parents became thirst of money and tortured her so that she could made more money for them. Pressure and stress came and she actually torture and kill her parents's pokemon secretly. Her Altaria feel sorry for it, but don't want to bother Rosetta about it.

Disaster of pokemon's sudden death happened too around when she kill her parent's, that's made her doesn't got caught. But someone from shadow side that happened to pass by saw her killing pokemon. She asked to do it again as Shadow Hunters, if not, her secret of killing pokemon will be spreaded. Rosetta resigned from her works and ran away to isolate herself. Failed, she got caught by the shadow hunters. Surrender in the end, she accepted it anyway. After all, she could gave more money to her parents and never got bothered.

But, she couldn't became idol again as it's job she loved. She scared that she got caught and her fans hated her. It's scarier than killing pokemon for her.

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World: Aquer
Role: Shadow Hunters


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oh, i thought you said we started off in the new world? o.o i will fix that then and could she have started some kind of pokemon rescue group and that be the reason why she was chosen? i guess it would be kinda like a rangers group except directed towrads just pokemon.
I told you the RP would start with them going in to the portals That is the first event that happens.
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ooooh ok, i see c:

so back to how she was chosen to become a god, would it be ok to have her be the leader of some pokemon rescue group and because of her efforts to sustain the species that is why she is chosen?
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ooooh ok, i see c:

so back to how she was chosen to become a god, would it be ok to have her be the leader of some pokemon rescue group and because of her efforts to sustain the species that is why she is chosen?
It would be perfectly fine
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When he was as young as seven years old Korika was a kind loving person that loved all Pokemon and most humans. Unfortunately people change sometimes its good while others it's not pleasing for Korika it was the latter. After two years of being excluded from family activities such as dining out or even sharing a meal at home Korika started locking himself in his room crying himself to sleep. As a result of this Korika became extremely sick and pale from the lack of food and socializing. Eventually Korika started to become insane to the point where he would start experimenting on Pokemon on how fun it would be to kill them different ways. A year later Pokemon started dying left and right so as a result Korika started hunting more and he became more volatile and inhumane. This is where he started craving blood and no one could stop him from killing not even a little girl protecting her Pokemon.

Korika is a pure genius to make up for his lack of brawn and fighting capabilities. Korika is craving knowledge that other people don't know yet so that makes him more deadly when pursuing such motives. When Korika starts killing tears of joy start to well up in his eyes because he believes that he is doing the world a great service by ridding it of its trash. Once blood has been spilled and Korika had gotten a scent of it nothing could stop him from killing and massacring innocent and evil people.

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Being a child with twelve other kids in the house Korika was the runt of the family and treated as trash. He was forced to sleep outside even when it was raining because they only had a one bedroom apartment. After years of being excluded from family activities Korika barricaded himself into his room causing him to go insane. When the Pokemon started dying Korika went out to search for them, so he could kill them. Killing Pokemon left and right he stopped when he saw a girl trying to protect her Pokemon he stopped for a moment to think if this was really what he wanted to do he shrugged this thought off and killled her and the Pokemon. A policeman saw Korika slaughter all the Pokemon and the little girl who happened to be his daughter out of fury the Policeman started firing shots at him which hit his knee cap limiting his abilty to move around. That day Korika had decided that he would live a new life and regret nothing.

Living alone he learned how to survive. He would kill Pokemon and sell their pelts to the local black market. Eventually he started to gain fame and his old town knew where he was. His mom and the policeman showed up with an entire battalion ready to take him dead or alive to bring him back to the village so he could be publicly executed in front of the whole town. Korika wasn't going to turn himself in so he fought back it only took 5 minutes to erase them all leaving his mother to be the last one so he could savor the moment. After admiring his work he started a journey to a town that was a couple of days away that had a message posted in the Black Market that a band of politicians were looking for mercenaries to kill mutiple people who opposed their opinion. On his way there he found a Weavile that he intended to kill the fight lasted 1o minutes which was a new record for anyone to last that long against him so he decided to take him on his journey with him. Once he arrived at the town with the job posted he found it razed to the ground and everyone that used to occupy it slaughtered. He found the single man that did this and asked him if he could join him in murdering people. The stranger later introduced himself as a member of the Shadow Hunters an elite group designed to kill and destroy the existence of Pokemon. The man decided he would trained Korika how to fight with a dagger and his brain. After 5 years of training the man decided that he would induct Korika into the ranks of a Shadow Hunter.


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World: Rinea
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Name: Kori Hideka
Age: 16
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He is a bloodthirsty animal that loves killing anything with his dagger. He loves the smell of blood. Whenever he smells blood nothing can stop him from going on a rampage until everything is dead. Being a frail teenager he isn't strong but, he is a genius. Craving knowledge he will stop at nothing to obtain it.

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Being a child with 12 other kids Kori was the runt of the family. Being excluded from family activities Kori barricaded himself into his room causing him to go insane. When the Pokemon started dying Kori went out to search for them, so he could kill them. Killing Pokemon left and right he stopped when he saw a girl trying to protect her Pokemon then he killled her and the Pokemon. A policeman saw him and Kori ran away from his town as a wanted fugitive.
Living alone he learned how to survive. He would kill Pokemon and sell their pelts to the local black market. Eventually he started to gain fame and his old town knew where he was. His mom came looking for him to bring him back home. Kori wasn't going to turn himself in so he killed his mom and walked away to a town that had a group that posted a message in the black market that said they were hiring killers. On his way there he found a Weavile that he intended to kill when he decided not to because it would be a waste. Once he arrived he found the town burned to the ground and everyone slaughtered. He found the man that did this and asked him if he could join him in killing. He later introduced himself as a member of the shadow hunters and trained Kori how to fight with a dagger.


Partner Pokemon: Weavile
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Dark Pulse, Ice Beam, and Shadow Ball

World: Rinea
Role: Shadow Hunter
Hm... the personality is a bit lacking in detail but I love the background story! Cool picture by the way! But back to the point, I see a bit more of his personality in the background story, so that fills in some gaps. But anyway, I declare this SU to be...

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Name: Rosetta Gladstone
Age: 19
Gender: Female

Appearance
Used to be an idol, she's beautiful with her black eyes. His hair is originally black, tied in a side tail but then she color her hair orange but leaves the underneath with the original color. She usually wears a pink short sleeved hoodie, white shorts and pair of white sneakers. Alternatively, sometimes she wears her white short dress.

Personality
Cheerful and kind to others, they never seen her down ever for second in public. She never concern about her life or future and always 'having fun' that day. She's really frank about things and sometimes hurt others because of that. Nah, everyday you'll only saw that side of her.
Although, when she got stressed out or in a pressure, she's pretty much crazy and like to destroy things. As a kid, she usually destroy her doll, but then when she's older, she once kill a pokemon secretly. That side of her is usually she hides.

Background/History
She started her idol career in young ages because of her poor parents. Able to became an idol, she received much money and lived happily with her parents. Not thankful, her parents became thirst of money and tortured her so that she could made more money for them. Pressure and stress came and she actually torture and kill her parents's pokemon secretly. Her Altaria feel sorry for it, but don't want to bother Rosetta about it.

Disaster of pokemon's sudden death happened too around when she kill her parent's, that's made her doesn't got caught. But someone from shadow side that happened to pass by saw her killing pokemon. She asked to do it again as Shadow Hunters, if not, her secret of killing pokemon will be spreaded. Rosetta resigned from her works and ran away to isolate herself. Failed, she got caught by the shadow hunters. Surrender in the end, she accepted it anyway. After all, she could gave more money to her parents and never got bothered.

But, she couldn't became idol again as it's job she loved. She scared that she got caught and her fans hated her. It's scarier than killing pokemon for her.

Partner Pokemon
Altaria
Dragon Pulse | Sky Attack | Flamethrower
World: Aquer
Role: Shadow Hunters


done, thanks.
I reviewed it, and everything is a okay with me! Touchy backstory by the way! Poor girl... So I declare this SU:

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I tweaked the personality and updated the SU as a whole to make it better and more detailed.
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Wow. That's all I can say. Nice job on explaining the transition of sane to insane. Love it!
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Old August 4th, 2014 (12:08 PM).
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Since Veevee has not updated their SU, we will be proceeding without them. Every world will be given an NPC character to fill any holes needed.

Slots for each world:
Aquer: More players wanted! (But not needed.)
Spoiler:
God: NPC
Shadows:
kaomojisama: Role: Shadow Hunter
Other: NPC


Ideca: INACTIVE
Spoiler:
God:
Shadows:
Other:


Gahiin: INACTICE
Spoiler:
God:
Shadows:
Other:


Rinea: Good to go!
Spoiler:
God:
Spiede: Role: God
Eeveeandmew: Role: Scientist
Shadows:
kingofusebi: Role: Shadow Hunter
Logical Cabbage: Role:Infiltrator
Other:


We will be accepting SUs for one more week, and I will submit the IC in a few days.
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Old August 6th, 2014 (06:56 PM). Edited August 7th, 2014 by Archer99.
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Name: Riley Heisenberg
Age: 16
Gender: Male


Appearance:
Spoiler:
Beige suit, black hair, Black sunglasses.
But when it's too hot he wears a white shirt with red shorts and beige sneakers.
When it's too cold he wears a winter camo windbreaker and white long pants, With white gloves and white boots.
He's always wearing his sunglasses and carring his katana with him

Personality:
Spoiler:
A temperamental guy, Extremly cheerfull with the people he likes and extremly cold blooded with the people he doesn't like.
He's a person who loves to help people with his same ideals and causes.
He never give up no matter what happens he prefers to die after surrender.
He hates to show his cold side but life has make him show it everytime the only thing he wants it's to make friends and a girl to love

Background/History:
Spoiler:
Being the last child of a family it's really hard and for Riley was even worst. Because he's the nerd of the family, But he was a different nerd, He was able to make a lot of physical activity and he loved that.

At his ten years he founded a wild Tynamo, It was hurt and he saved it from death, And that Tynamo was his first pokemon.

At his eleven years he ingresed to a trainers school, And he ingresed to a military training academy (Because of the pokemon disaster the trainers need to learn how to defend by their own methods and not only with his pokemons).


At his fourteen years Riley showed his skills on systems and computers, He was able to create a quick cloning method for little pokemons and he maked an advance in a translator to understand the pokemons.
At the same time he showed his combat skills with pokemons and with swords, His Eelektross was the most powerfull pokemon on the school and in the academy too. His swordsmanship was amazing for his age , But for him was all about of his efforts it wasn't easy for him and he trained a lot to became like this.

But his life changed suddenly at his fifteen years, On his birthday a crazy group of Voltorbs and attacked his city and one of the voltorbs reached to his house, At the time Riley was in the street trying to help and stop the attack of the voltorbs.

And then he heared the explosion..... His family, His friends and his loved girlfriend were killed by a crazy voltorb...... The only thing he have left from them was a gift for his birthday, A pair of sunglasses. He make a promise to them: "I never going to forget this!!! I'm going to end this for good!! and i'm never going to forget you..... Hitomi (She was his girlfriend)

And a year later Riley is ready to acomplish his promise to everybody he loved once on his life.
His only partner it's his first and only pokemon he have left... His powerfull Eelektross


Partner pokemon:
Spoiler:
Eelektross

Moves:
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Wild charge, Crunch and Crush claw

World:
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Rinea

Side:
Spoiler:
Scientist




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Archer, there are a few thing that don't sit well with me about your SU.

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1. The whole thing is a mess, with little punctuation. If you want to be accepted, please clean it up.

2. Rinea already has its God. If you want to be a God, please chose somewhere else.

3. I struggle to find the reasoning behind you character being a god. A teen who murdered their family would not be picked by the government to be a god.

4. I said in the SU pokemon may only have 3 moves. This is something that needs correcting.

Please fix it up accordingly to be accepted.


Until these are fixed, you are DENIED.
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Sorry i think it's corrected now
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Archer, that was a good amount of improvement!

And you are
ACCEPTED!!!

Our characters will be working together a lot!
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