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Old January 2nd, 2004 (10:51 PM).
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Basically what you do is post a sentence and people like Alyssa, Frostweaver, Latiosspud, or Kairi might come and correct your Grammar. Don't look at this like a put-down, look at it like a chance to improve your Grammar. Happy Posting.

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Old January 2nd, 2004 (11:11 PM).
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I can correct grammar as well. It's been a specialty of mine since I was about six. (That's when my teachers started asking me how to spell words they didn't know. Seriously.)
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Old January 29th, 2004 (03:05 AM).
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You know, I correct grammer too.....I just generally stay in the roleplaying area, where people with good grammer go XD
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Old January 29th, 2004 (03:11 AM).
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Old January 29th, 2004 (01:13 PM).
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I love grammar. But I can't get frostweaver's grammar question. I am reading and spelling way above my grade level.
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Old January 29th, 2004 (01:19 PM).
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Better should only be used as a comparison between two objects? =\ *is bad at grammar*
Could also need an any other girl there, but I guess better could work if there are two people on the team?
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Old January 29th, 2004 (01:34 PM).
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Quote originally posted by link722:
I love grammar. But I can't get frostweaver's grammar question. I am reading and spelling way above my grade level.
Its probably something else but the only mistake I see is that there is no "period." But Kairi is probably correct.

And by the way, can I be on that list?
*wonders if anyone saw the grammar mistake in that*
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Old January 29th, 2004 (01:55 PM).
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Ooh, eye liek korectin pplz grammar tooo, I'mm the bestest in mai klasz at it
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Old January 29th, 2004 (02:14 PM).
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AOL slang is considered bad grammar so don't use it! (ex: plz, y, etc.)
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ARWEN f Literature

Means "noble maiden" in Sindarin. In 'The Lord of the Rings' by J. R. R. Tolkien, Arwen was the daughter of Elrond and the lover of Aragorn.



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That has nothing to do with the game=\



I believe quotation marks take the place of punctuation in that sentence. I guess it could be something as little as a period, but if so frostweaver is more cunning than I imagined. O.x
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Old January 29th, 2004 (02:30 PM).
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oh... okay...

Correcting grammar is easy... though...
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ARWEN f Literature

Means "noble maiden" in Sindarin. In 'The Lord of the Rings' by J. R. R. Tolkien, Arwen was the daughter of Elrond and the lover of Aragorn.



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Old January 29th, 2004 (03:08 PM).
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And by the way, can I be on that list?
*wonders if anyone saw the grammar mistake in that*
*sees an incomplete phrase with "any by the way"... lacking a verb*
*awkward antecedent of "that"... readers do not know what "that" is unless s/he reads back, and that's great enough of a grammar mistake to lose tons of marks on essays... Frosty learnt that the hard way*

*Kairi and Kairyu are both correct . It is an incomplete comparison (didn't say what it's comparing to) and it's missing the period... or "footstop" for our British friends)*

*next question...?:

"Its our honors to be here with Your Majesty." Said the guard.

*wonders if anyone can get this one...*
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Old January 29th, 2004 (03:12 PM).
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Thats so obvious. O.o Even an idiot like me can get that. =P

Contraction needs an apostrophe, Its is only used without one when referring to something without genders possession. I.E. Its stuffed toy Honor shouldnt be plural either, and dont ask the rule that says why. X.x;
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*Kairi got the obvious ones... now where's the mean tricky ones Frostweaver hid? =p *c* *

*note: ignore Honour vs Honor spelling problem... we'll treat them as both correct here*
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Old January 29th, 2004 (03:17 PM).
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*doesnt see another one* *frosty is too smart* =P

You were just asking for that one by taking over this game yaknow. ;
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Old January 29th, 2004 (05:51 PM).
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Nah.... Hopefully everyone knows the grammar rules...

Yet me see... Heres a sentence with bad Grammar:

Allison was at his boring bedroom because she is an boring person.

2 Mistakes.
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Means "noble maiden" in Sindarin. In 'The Lord of the Rings' by J. R. R. Tolkien, Arwen was the daughter of Elrond and the lover of Aragorn.



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Nah.... Hopefully everyone knows the grammar rules...

Yet me see... Heres a sentence with bad Grammar:

Allison was at his boring bedroom because she is an boring person.

2 Mistakes.
... *thinks this question is beyond "help"... have to change to many things to fix the contradiction between verb tenses, along with the improper use of boring (but to fix it you need to change things dramatically)*
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Old January 29th, 2004 (07:57 PM). Edited January 29th, 2004 by Kairi.
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Quote originally posted by Arwen:
Nah.... Hopefully everyone knows the grammar rules...

Yet me see... Heres a sentence with bad Grammar:

Allison was at his boring bedroom because she is an boring person.

2 Mistakes.
I see one. In this post, grammar is not a proper noun, thus it doesnt need capitalization. =P
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Old January 29th, 2004 (08:00 PM).
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*sees even more mistakes...

That "question" has more than 2 errors... there's contradicting pronouns as well... along with improper tense and use of the word "boring"*
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LOL.... I did?

I wrote more than 2 mistakes... oops!
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ARWEN f Literature

Means "noble maiden" in Sindarin. In 'The Lord of the Rings' by J. R. R. Tolkien, Arwen was the daughter of Elrond and the lover of Aragorn.



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Old January 30th, 2004 (01:08 AM). Edited January 30th, 2004 by IceKitten.
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Quote originally posted by Arwen:
Nah.... Hopefully everyone knows the grammar rules...

Yet me see... Heres a sentence with bad Grammar:

Allison was at his boring bedroom because she is an boring person.

2 Mistakes.
An there's the other one

also Allison is a girl and ''his boring bedroom'' wouldn't make sense.
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Old January 31st, 2004 (12:10 PM).
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Incorrect...

Heres the list of rules in that sentence:
Pronoun-Anteceedent Agreement
Consistant Verb Tense
Grammar Errors.
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Means "noble maiden" in Sindarin. In 'The Lord of the Rings' by J. R. R. Tolkien, Arwen was the daughter of Elrond and the lover of Aragorn.



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*thought he already pointed out those 3 flaws? The 3rd point is not really grammar errors (too general)...it's the use of "boring" that messes up...*

*... no one got his previous one yet? the correct sentence should say...

"It's our honor to be here with you, Your Majesty," said the guard. *

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