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Old August 19th, 2005 (04:42 AM).
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Well here is my first fake card. I hope you like it! Please post any and all feedback.

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Old August 19th, 2005 (07:05 AM).
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Well not... tch, surprisingly well-done for a first. I see no flaws in tha design, tha bacground looks nice too, Jirachi itself has no flaws either, an' the attacks are good too. 10/10
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Old August 19th, 2005 (07:16 AM).
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Wrong, there is one small mistake!

The 9-Digit ID shuld be three pixels left from that strange wave (weakness place) and aligned with the Copyright, so 2 pixels from the yellow border.

Also the card name (all of it, including the owner's name) should be five pixels above the border of the pic box. As well as 1 pixel left (EX: Deoxys format) or 1 pixel right (EX: Hidden Legends format) from the left border of the same box.

But it is awesome for a first presentation!

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Old August 19th, 2005 (11:55 PM).
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great card, better than mine and I've done about 12! lol.:D
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Old August 20th, 2005 (11:51 AM).
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QFred: that was terribly unnecessary. No one need look that close for a mistake.

I'm impressed! That is a very nice looking card. As aforementioned, there aren't any noticeable flaws. Jirachi made a good presentation and the attacks, I feel, suit it.
Keep making more cards.

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Old August 20th, 2005 (01:52 PM).
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That is excellent for a first card. The main thing that bothers me is there are white specks around the energy and Brendan's portrait, but that could be graphics program problems.

The colorless and second psychic energy on Render are a little close together, and the weakness, resistance, and retreat costs seem a little too far down.

All around though, very nice.

And Geno is awesome! ^-^
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Old August 20th, 2005 (08:18 PM).
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Right. First, the placement for the Weakness and Resistance energies are a bit off. The energies for the second attack are too close together. the white pixels bug me a little. Try using Fangking Omega's symbol sheet at PPN. It's in the link in the Tutorial. It's not bad. Just a few minor flaws. 8/10.
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great first card i like it 10/10
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Old August 24th, 2005 (10:47 AM).
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Hey, i'm back! Anyway, thanks for all of the feedback. To explain why there are white pixel problems with the energy symbols, it's because AOL pixelates images as they are being loaded. They were rectangles before I edited them. Can anyone email me non-pixelated blanks and symbols? If you can, that would be greatly appreciated. My e-mail is [email protected].
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Old August 27th, 2005 (11:49 PM).
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Even about a very lil' mistake I have to say something!

But keep being very cool!
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