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Unread September 11th, 2005, 07:33 PM
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blue eyes white dragon
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Darkness surrounds
All that is left is a void
The silence echoes
And blackness just stares

Life is gone
But consciousness is left
Just memories
And feelings of times gone by

I hear nothing
And it is deafening
Slowly the darkness moves closer
Its weight crushes

Trouble breathing
Trouble living
The void swallows
The last light

No more memories
No more feelings
Just emptiness
Nothingness
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Unread September 11th, 2005, 07:52 PM
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nice one,give it 4-5 that all
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Unread September 11th, 2005, 09:24 PM
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Someone's angry. :/
  
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Very nice work blue eyes. Another worthy poem!
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Unread September 11th, 2005, 11:34 PM
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+l+Mystifying+l+
  
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Yes I so do agree with the person at the top of me.GREAT JOB!!^.^
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