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Old March 24th, 2004 (10:34 AM).
Phoenix Espeon
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This is all about three ten year olds from New Bark Town getting their first pokemon and going on a quest. They are called Peter, Liza and John.

Chapter One

Start of the Adventure

Peter woke up with a jolt. It was the day to get his first pokemon. He was so excited about getting his first pokemon today that he did everything in about ten minutes. Peter got his skateboard and went to Elm's lab. He had a choice of pokemon. Chikorita popped out the fist pokeball Cyndaquil out the second and Totodile out the third. Peter looked at them all over very quickly then decided on Totodile. He thanked Prof Elm for his pokemon then ran outside. A scream startled him. A wild Sentret had stolen a girls pokedex. Prof Elm came rushing out but Peter sent out Totodile. He decided to use Scratch. It hit the Sentret in the chest reducing its HP to Zero. Prof Elm threw a pokeball capturing it. Peter cheered and Totodile jumped up in the air. Later that day they started off on the adventure.
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Old March 24th, 2004 (12:59 PM).
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Ok here are a few problams with this:
1. there is no description in this (about the charecters)
2.its too short for a chapter

Hope this helps

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