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Old December 22nd, 2003, 03:30 AM
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Vito's Commentary - This is my third Revelation Series stories (the others used to be on the now archived community). The story would be based on the people's lives in Johto or Kanto (particularly characters like Kenta), the areas where the TV series' focus is rarely put upon. So enjoy this chapter! The people in this story are the ones you know. Kenta, Marina and Jackson, who will meet each other at a certain point. Why didnt I include the so called dub names for Kenta and Marina? Because I refuse to believe that they are Yoshi and Dani, and for other reasons that must remain obscure.

Kenta and the Hoenn League

Kenta continues his journey, aiming for success. His journey has started in Hoenn, a land of new Pokmon and mysteries connected.
"So I expect that you are going to compete in the Hoenn League?" asked Nurse Joy, of Littleroot Town's Pokmon Center.
"Yes." an eager Kenta said.
"Good. Then like all trainers you are going to register, and since it is compulsory you need an updated PokDex."
"Where can I get one?"
"Well Professor Birch lives in the southern area of town. You have a PokGear or PokNav?"
"I have a PokGear..." Kenta nervously replied.
"Well it should automatically recognize our mapping system. You'll be able to find Birch using the map." Nurse Joy said.
"Ok. Thanks for the help." Kenta said.
He walked off to Professor Birch's lab.

"Hello." welcomed Professor Birch, "You must be Kenta. Professor Elm speaks most highly of you."
"Hello." replied Kenta.
"So I expect you've taken the boat to Hoenn?"
"Yes."
"Well your PokDex is on the desk over there. It covers an additional 100 or more discovered Pokmon of Hoenn. If you see one, press the Record button to save it onto your dex. If you find an undiscovered one, press the Record Movie button. explained Professor Birch.
Ok then replied Kenta.
So thats all you need to know! Professor Birch said excitedly.

So Route 101 is ahead according to this map Kenta said to himself.
Time to commence then said a voice from behind him.
Jackson was behind him.
Jackson! Kenta said in excitement.
So youre off to the Hoenn League? Jackson asked.
Yeah. replied Kenta.
How come I didnt see you at the Silver Conference? asked Jackson.
You went? asked Kenta, I got into the Top 15 only last week.
So have you been in contact with Marina? Junichi asked.
She continued to conceal her location, but yes I have been in contact with her.
Well youll be proud to know that shes right here!
Hi Kenta! Marina said, making Kenta jump.
Marina! Kenta said excitedly again.
I thought we should do something together. How about this time we go as a trio? Jackson suggested.
Good idea, since were all going the same path Kenta replied.
Not really. Marina commented, I decided that I didnt want to get into this league stuff anymore. I like travelling a lot, so why not go as a trio?
Agreed? Junichi asked?
AGREED! they all said.
And now, as a trio, they continue their journey in the Hoenn League.


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Old December 22nd, 2003, 11:12 AM
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nice start to a story

not many stories out there for these characters

Kenta and Marina are my favorite characters

putting them together with Junichi will make it an interesting story


can't wait to read more
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Old December 22nd, 2003, 12:52 PM
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Thanks for the comment. I'll continue this story soon.
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Old January 6th, 2004, 11:05 AM
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Old January 6th, 2004, 01:41 PM
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Upon their journey...
"So what city is ahead of us now?" Jackson asked Kenta.
Kenta looked at the PokGear and said, "We're heading for Petalburg, so the nearest city that goes towards that path is.. Oldale town."
"Ok..." Jackson replied.
Kenta, Jackson and Marina arrived at Oldale town. They make a stop at the Pokmon Center...
"Hi Professor Elm!" Kenta said over the videophone.
"Hello Kenta." Elm replied, "I see you're at Oldale, I have something important I want you to do."
"Yes what is it?" Kenta asked.
Professor Elm looked at Kenta as if to see if there was something sticking out of his pockets, and then asked, "If you encounter any unusual Pokmon, can you send the data to me? Just insert the PokDex into the slot below."
"Ok!" Kenta responded.

"Wow! A wild Ralts!" Kenta said. They were at Route 102, searching for Pokmon.
"Go! Beedril!" Kenta said, opening the PokBall and Beedril coming out.
"Pin Missile!"
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Old January 6th, 2004, 05:10 PM
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pretty good for a short part

keep it up
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Old January 20th, 2004, 11:46 AM
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Old January 20th, 2004, 01:37 PM
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Beedril used Pin Missile on the Ralts, which hit multiple times and knocked the Ralts back. Marina jumped up and down, as if rooting for Kenta.
"Great Ball! Go!" Kenta said, as he threw the ball at Ralts... and caught it.
"You didn't need to use that Great Ball..." Jun'ichi said, "You could have used a simple PokBall."
"Why waste your chances?" Kenta said back.
They continued through the route, until they reached Petalburg.
"There's a gym here, according to my PokGear..." Kenta said.
"I can't see Hoenn on mine..." Marina said, disappointed.
Kenta pulled out a card from his pocket, once scanned into the PokGear, and said, "This is a Hoenn map card. It tracks your location in Hoenn. Scan it to work it."
Marina scanned it into her PokGear.
"Reading data..." the PokGear said, "Scan complete! Welcome to Hoenn!"
"Let's go to the gym!" Kenta said.
Jun'ichi was standing there, as if feeling ignored, but thern quickly ran after saying at the top of his voice, "Guys wait for me!"

"So you're Norman?" Kenta asked the gym leader.
"Sure am." Norman said, standing in front of him.
"Well I'm busy at the moment. This is my darling wife, Mrs. White."
"Hi!" Marina said nicely.
"I'm sure I have some time to have a chat with you guys before I battle." Norman said.
"Hello there kids." Mrs. White said, "You must be hungry. You're all definitely from Johto... they have a unique style of clothing there... so you all came from there?"
"Yes!" the three said.
"Well then, come on in. I have some food inside..."

Marina looked at a photo with Norman, Mrs. White, a tall girl with a red bandada and shirt, and a kid with a green shirt and glasses, and asked curiously, "What's this picture?"
Mrs. White came to Marina and said, "That's a picture of me, Norman, May and Max."
"Who's May and Max?" Marina asked.
Mrs. White looked up and said, "They're two kids who like Pokmon. Both have went out on a journey, with some kid by the name of Ash..."
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Old January 20th, 2004, 11:34 PM
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Very nice work!

I hope to read more

I like Kenta's comment on using a Great Ball "why waste your chances?"

very cool
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Old January 21st, 2004, 12:02 AM
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YAY! I love your fics. I know how you might be busy... but Carry on!!!!!!!!! Puh-leez
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Old January 21st, 2004, 02:05 PM
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Norman came into the kitchen they were sitting in and said to Kenta, "I'm no longer busy. How about we start the battle?"
"C'mon let's go!" Kenta said excitedly.
"Wait for me!" Marina called.
Jun'ichi was the next to look at the picture. He sat there for a minute, before Marina came screeching in and roaring at Jun'ichi, "C'MON! YOU CAN'T MISS KENTA'S MATCH!"

"This is a match between the challenger Kenta of New Bark Town," the nearby referee said, "And the Petalburg City Gym Leader, Norman.
"Following Gym Rules, both trainers may use 3 Pokmon during the match. Only the challenger may substitute Pokmon.
"Ready... and... BEGIN!"
Kenta got his PokBall hanging from his bag and said,"Go! Typhlosion!" as he threw it. Typhlosion, a fire Pokmon, came out.
"Not qute a starter are you?" Norman commented, "Go! Vigoroth!" he thrown a PokBall, and Vigoroth, quite a vicious normal Pokmon, came out from it's ball.
"Typhlosion! Flame Wheel!" Kenta commanded.
Typhlosion spits out a flame which turns into a wheel, which surrounded Vigoroth and burns it.
"Vigoroth!" Norman said, "Slash!"
Vigoroth did a furious Slash at Typhlosion, which dealt a good amount of damage.
"Typhlosion! Fire Blast!" Kenta said. Typhlosion did so...
"Faint Attack!" Norman called. Vigoroth had the chance to get away, and nearly escaped the Fire Blast, which also dealt a large amount of damage. Kenta could hear the noise of an attack coming, but he wondered, Where is the attack coming from?
"Typhlosion! Wait and then surround yourself in Flames!" Kenta said in a smart way.
"No!" cried Norman, but it was too late. Vigoroth had hit Typhlosion while it had it's flames surrounding it, causing lots of burning damage to Vigoroth and faintng it.
"That's one!" Kenta said happily.
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Old January 21st, 2004, 06:33 PM
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I must say. This next part was very good! Its funny when Marina yelled at Junichi to come see the match. Typhlosion fought hard Very nice strategy on stopping the Faint Attack
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Old January 21st, 2004, 07:09 PM
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Nice strategies! But I thought Flame Wheel is when Typholsion curls up and then he spins and attacks, oh well, everyone has their own version.
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Old January 22nd, 2004, 11:28 PM
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Old January 23rd, 2004, 03:13 PM
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Norman stood there, thought for a second, and sent out a Delcatty.
"What's that?" Kenta wondered, holding up the PokDex.
"Delcatty," the PokDex started, as it rendered the initial image, "It's ability, Cute Charm, will attract any physical attackers."
"Fire Blast!" Kenta commanded.
Typhlosion uses Fire Blast and it hits Delcatty, taking a substantial amount of damage.
"Attract!" Norman commanded.
Delcatty stared at Typhlosion, and a few seconds later, it swirled around and then stood there.
"Typhlosion! A Fire Blast!" Kenta commanded once again. But Typhlosion stood there infatuated.
"Delcatty! Tackle!" Norman commanded Delcatty as it did so repeatedly.
"Typhlosion! It isn't your girlfriend! Fire Blast!" Kenta called.
"Uh oh... it's just standing there..." Jun'ichi commented.
"Typhlosion! Do it!"
Typhlosion held out the blast and Delcatty was fried, and fell to the floor. Along with it, Typhlosion fainted.
"Oh no!" Kenta cried.
"Well..." Jun'ichi commented a bit, "That was a double knockout. If Kenta does this it's victory for him..."
"You're right..." Marina responded, before yelling, "YOU CAN DO IT KENTA!"
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Old January 23rd, 2004, 03:28 PM
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Yay! New Chapter! BTW are you a Questshipper or Backshipper? cuz it seems that ur a questshipper. WOOHOO!
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Old January 23rd, 2004, 03:49 PM
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I support Questshipping even though never mentioned. Kenta and Marina are the cutest couple. They were meant for each other.
But I also like AdvanceShipping.
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Old January 23rd, 2004, 05:26 PM
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You know Im the main Questshipper around here I have always said it was one of the cutest couples, but they are more perfect for each other by watching the special.
Very good part that time. Nice idea with the attraction. Lets get this badge Kenta!
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Old February 15th, 2004, 08:41 PM
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Are you gonna continue this? Its getting good. I hope you do.


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Old February 15th, 2004, 08:59 PM
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Oh sorry guys, with school I have lots ot things. I'll respond in a few hours.
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Old February 16th, 2004, 03:28 AM
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Norman groaned as he stood. "I guess you are quite the strong one Kenta," he commented, "Try this!"
Norman threw his final PokBall. It hit the ground, and out came a Slaking!
"What is that?" Kenta asked himself.
He pointed the device at Slaking, and it scanned the data instantly.
"Slaking." the PokDex started, "This Pokmon is capable of creating yawns that may lull their opponents to sleep. They may ignore orders at times, but are capable of creating strong attacks."
"Tough looking..." Kenta said, he reached out with a ball in his hand. "Go, Beedril!"
Beedril came out of the ball.
"Beedril! Pin Missile!"
Beedril attacks the Slaking and hits it several times.
"Wow... pretty much 1/8th of damage taken from Slaking." Norman commented, "I kinda underestimated you. Slaking! Facade!"
Slaking's facade hit Beedrill, taking 1/4th of it's damage.
"Another Pin Missle!" Kenta commanded, as Beedril did so.
Slaking was hit, but had lost more power from the Pin Missiles.
"Whoa!" Norman roared, "That is a lot of damage!"
Slaking had lied there.
"Pin Missile!"
"Hyper Beam!"
Norman's Hyper Beam hit Beedril causing it to faint.
"Go!" Kenta said, throwing a PokBall, "Tyranitar!"
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Old February 17th, 2004, 12:11 PM
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Awesome story! I've never seen the special. *Tear* But by the sounds of this fanfic and the way people talk about it, it makes me want to see it.
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Old February 18th, 2004, 12:17 AM
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Another great part to the story! Cool! He has Tyranitar!
Keep up the awesome work
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Old February 18th, 2004, 03:29 AM
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Tyranitar made a roar as it emerged from it's PokBall.
"Hmm... nice! But not good enough!" Norman said.
Kenta looked straight at Norman.
"That's what you think!" he said across the gym, "Tyranitar! Hyper Beam attack!"
Tyranitar's hyper beam shot from it's mouth and hit it's target, weakening it so much it looked as if it would drop.
"Oh my!" Norman said surprised.
"Kenta! You can do it!" Marina roared out.
"Not too bad for a trainer..." Mrs. White said to herself.
Jun'ichi stared blatantly at Marina, before saying, "Quit acting like a cheerleader." which made Marina stare back. Jun'ichi took a glimse at Mrs. White, who was staring at Kenta. He had sworn he heard her say "Nice performance" before she walked off.
"Not too bad." Norman said, as he called his Vigoroth back, "I can't let it get too weak, so I finish this match."
"It was a great match." Mrs. White said, emerging from the kitchen, shining a glittering Balance Badge, "You deserve this."
Kenta took the badge and loked as it glimmered in his face, and held it at the ceiling, looking up at the new badge.
"I have my first Hoenn badge!" he said in an excited way.
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Old February 18th, 2004, 06:22 AM
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Great Fan Fic! I really like the character's personalitites. "It isn't your girlfriend!"
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