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Old August 1st, 2006 (04:26 PM).
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Old August 1st, 2006 (05:09 PM).
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The smoke trail effect should look less made of spheres. I would try some kind of more random, flame-esque pattern. It just doesn't look like smoke the way it is now; it's too cartoony in a way that contrasts with the rest of the picture too much.
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Old August 2nd, 2006 (08:27 PM).
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Style wise, the cartoony smoke shape works if you intended it to look that way. It seems you wanted this Gastly to look more tame than sinister.

But that right eye definitely shouldn’t be blurred.

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Old August 3rd, 2006 (06:55 PM).
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Well, the Gastly looks a little hungover. Has he been drinking at the Lucky Luvdisc?

Maybe you could make the Gastly with a more mischevious look. Then for the tail... something kind of foggy... misty... or a rapid flame would work.

Overall, it's really great. I like the hungover effect.
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Old August 3rd, 2006 (06:58 PM).
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i like the cartoony affect but like aggron bird said get rid of the spherey look
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Old August 4th, 2006 (06:22 PM).
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Quote originally posted by mrplanters:
i like the cartoony affect but like aggron bird said get rid of the spherey look
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UGH!

It’s ARAGORNbird, not aggron bird. I hate it when people do that.

Sorry, just had to get that out XD

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