I'm TRYING to lure in Readers

[Dunsparce]

I just don't get it. On two other forums (One with more active members than here, one with WAY less), my fanfiction, Coherence, has done exceptionally well. What am I doing wrong this time through? D:

One disatvantage is that I can't bump it for news updates on this forum is that I can't post about how the whole Project is going unless I post another Chapter.

You see, this story also has some Fan Art made by a few people, and is really much more than a simple fanfiction. >.<;

[Seiji Tatsuo™]

Hm...I have no idea. I'll check your fanfiction out and tell you what I think of it, if it helps?

[Dr. Mack Foxx]

I kinda know how you feel. My stories tend to be unnoticed as well. I'll let you know what I think of Coherence.

[pokejungle]

This is kind a bad forum for Fanfiction.

No one's really active.

[Breezy]

Yeah. A very active forum PC is, but fanfic wise, there's only a handful of active members that come here.