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Old March 12th, 2007, 03:34 PM
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Of course you can rate my maps!
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Old March 12th, 2007, 03:39 PM
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i agree with a lot of people, this game has potential but you will have to work hard.

one thing i noticed was some of your tiles are tiled wrong. for example this is how the d/p tree should be tiled:


that will erase those "pathways" between the trees.
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Old March 12th, 2007, 03:44 PM
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Ah, good work, Minorthreat. Thats the correct tiling.

Now, I'm NOT rating your tiles, if I did, I would rate them a 2/10. lol. I'm rating your maps. Losanelle City is pretty good, but it too small to be a City. Honestly if you want to give it the title as a City, add a pond or two, and a flower shop or something. Other than that the overall placement is decent, but it has a lot of random openings. My overall rating for Losanelle City is 7/10 for a lack of City-ness

Route 701 is decent, but bare. No ponds, ridges, nothing exciting for the Player to see while treking through. Commonly found in beginning routes or small travel routes. 8/10
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Old March 12th, 2007, 03:54 PM
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Umm... Kamon, you don't need to talk *Royaly* like that... Losanelle city is like Petalburg City. There is not much!
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Old March 12th, 2007, 03:57 PM
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I'm not talking Royaly. I'm rating a map =P

Yes, I know its like Petalburg, but Cities like that were turned into towns in DP. I'm just saying its small, thats all. Though a 7 is still my final ratings. It just feels empty lol


credit to Minorthreat for the trees

heres an example of tree colaborations. This shows D/P colaboration, and my style.

I'm not trying to be rude, I'm only trying to help you make your game to achieve success.
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Old March 12th, 2007, 04:01 PM
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If I would use the one you make all around my cities, it will appear like they are surrounded by a forest.
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Old March 12th, 2007, 04:06 PM
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Riiiight, okay. Thats not a point at all. I think it looks more nature like, instead of perfect row after row of trees which looks plain and un-nature like

But thats completely your decision. Rememeber, don't hold a grudge on me, I'm simply rating your stuff =P
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Old March 12th, 2007, 04:09 PM
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My friend did that for me:

I am using that for Rauwolfia town. Dunno if I should use it for EVERY single land map.
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Old March 12th, 2007, 04:16 PM
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Hmmm, I like it! Use it, cherish it lol. It looks good! a mix between DP and zigzag, wilderness lol. You should use it

If you ever need me to clean up some houses or make you some buildings, just ask. I'll post an example in a minute, I need some food first lol
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Old March 12th, 2007, 04:30 PM
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You see... Your game have unique tiles, and I don't want to take them.
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Old March 13th, 2007, 07:06 AM
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What I showed you aren't my unique tiles, its a style. Either way, I like the one your friend did
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Old March 13th, 2007, 07:17 AM
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Well I have new screenshots of the up-comming demo:

Walking Rauwolfia Town


Going out of Bloosy Town
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i6/vavavant/4.png

Somewhere on Route 702
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Talking to the old man in Losanelle City
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Old March 13th, 2007, 07:21 AM
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looking better. The ponds look a little square and un natural lol. But keep up the good work! I like Route 702 from what I've seen
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Old March 13th, 2007, 07:33 AM
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Thanks. Route 702 will be really good. It is also where the Professor Alder's lab is.
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Old March 13th, 2007, 07:40 AM
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I revamped the houses in Losanelle City if you want it. It took 5 minutes lol
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Old March 13th, 2007, 08:45 AM
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I like it! But I don't know if I will use it...
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Old March 13th, 2007, 08:54 AM
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thats fine by me =P I just made it look more decent rather than ripped quality. If anything, I'll probably use it
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Old March 13th, 2007, 08:58 AM
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If I use it, I will have to remake ALL the houses/buildings that I had cleaned up.
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Old March 13th, 2007, 05:45 PM
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the screens actually look pretty good. I like them. One thing i have to say is, the paths and houses in Losanelle City aren't clean, they're all JPEGish and it really takes away from the quality of the map, you should clean it up some. Also the message window should be more POKeMONish verse the default RMXP one. Overall though i like the way this game is coming along. It has an extreme amount of potental.

Good Luck mate.
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Old March 13th, 2007, 10:54 PM
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mate, try not use jpeg files. it kinda ruins the picture quality by making it blur in most places. try and use GIF as long as it doesnt make the picture look weird but use PNG as it keeps the picture quality like a BMP, and uses less space than a BMP. use PNG if you feel comfy with it.
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Old March 14th, 2007, 06:38 AM
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Next time, PNG. Now, new screenshots are released!!

Walking in the rainny city of Canderlia!


Down the stairs in the South Route (Really, it is called South Route)


Reading a sign in Flaroma Town


Walking in that sublime town (Flaroma Town)
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Old March 14th, 2007, 07:35 AM
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Great job! I'm looking forward to playing this! This looks exactly like D/P, well, close
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Old March 14th, 2007, 01:51 PM
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If I use it, I will have to remake ALL the houses/buildings that I had cleaned up.
Your later screenshots are OK but still need work...lots of work. Like the mountaineous route, it would be good, but it D/P the grass is just the grass, theres not grass below it. Yours looks fake like that. The house I made is in decent format. By revamping ALL of your buildings, you could have a decent fangame. But by being lazy, and just keeping them ugly Jpeg, well, thats your choice, not mine

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Great job! I'm looking forward to playing this! This looks exactly like D/P, well, close
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mate, try not use jpeg files. it kinda ruins the picture quality by making it blur in most places. try and use GIF as long as it doesnt make the picture look weird but use PNG as it keeps the picture quality like a BMP, and uses less space than a BMP. use PNG if you feel comfy with it.
two problems with that. He saves in Jpeg, and the quality previously isn't the best because there all ripped from D/P screenshots
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Old March 14th, 2007, 02:22 PM
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... About the grass on the rocks, your right. I put it there just for a period of time. I will only put that grass patch without '' grass under it ''. Did you saw the new screens?
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Old March 14th, 2007, 03:18 PM
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I saw the new screens. Flaroma Town, or Sublime Town looks too open The regular buildings in Canderlia City look messed up around the shading, but are fine. The houses again, are Jpeged to death. And South Route's grass is messed up =P

thats my say lol
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