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September 3rd, 2007, 1:22 PM
Poetic Licence

Let the ink drop from the pen
Onto the paper
Onto the pad

Let the strokes come quick and easy
Slow and Painful
Onto the Paper

Let the mind wander freely
Catch a thought
Quick and Easy

Let the eye and see it's blemishes
On the paper
On the pad
Quick and Easy
Catch a thought

Let the hand fall when ready
On the Paper
On the pad

Let the mind know whats finished
Know whats done
Let and lie
Catch a thought.


Oddly enough I think this poem is probably the one which is more definate in it's meaning. Which is odd for me though I'll consider it fact when I get your opinions on it.

melod.ii ous demyx~♪
September 30th, 2007, 3:28 PM
Oh wow.

Well, for some weird reason this turned into a song for me, and had a freakin' cool rythm... so now I just can't get it out of my head. ^^; It's got such a gallopy feel to it~

I also really love the description. I know the words are just so simple, and that's what gives it such power.
It's mesmorizing.
I adore the last couple lines. It's really a piece of work~ (a good one at that)

Beautiful, I sincerely enjoyed it~.