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NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 10th, 2007, 4:11 PM
Here is my comic and some things i have to say.



Golden Sun
September 10th, 2007, 4:17 PM
No offense but the sprites are poorly drawn. Fanfic form of Comics aren't really good unless you know what your doing, and everything happened so fast, the people just... Teleported...


You should read the Comic Making Guide that's stickied..

Gary, the Magic Fairy
September 10th, 2007, 4:25 PM
I just love the little pokemon sprites. The story isn't all that impressive, but the pokemon are amusing. xD That Geodude is awesome. The Weedle & Caterpie are cute, too. :D

September 10th, 2007, 5:14 PM
Is this a joke? Seriously. I'm not sure.

Well, anyways, you skipped about.. three/four comics worth of information, you used badly edited overworlds (But a good attempt at the Pokemon), and I'm completely confused. YOur character robbed Prof. Oak, battled someone, and went through all of Viridian City in two comics. Talk about steroids 0.0;;

NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 15th, 2007, 3:47 AM
whatever i should never post stuff cuz everybody hates the stuff i make

September 16th, 2007, 2:49 PM
pretty good, but pidgey looks like dragonite.

NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 18th, 2007, 12:19 PM
Finally somebody likes it

September 19th, 2007, 2:45 AM
Dont just sit there feeling sorry for yourself, people dont hate it, there are good things and bad things about your comic and people are telling you he bad things so you can change it and make it better, not because they hate it. Its called constructive criticism ;)

NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 20th, 2007, 11:32 AM
right.*ahem*haha i knew that.XP

September 20th, 2007, 4:11 PM
I'm sorry if I came across flaming, here's what I meant to say.

Is this one of those jokes? It's not very funny if it is.

I'm sorry if it isn't, it's just that there has been an increase in people making fun of n00bs. No that you're a n00b. You're more like a n00bie. A beginner. You haven't trained yet.

Well, I like that you didn't use the MD overworlds, and instead tried spriting you're own. You should try to generally not skip that much. Keep in as much pointful (Not pointless) information in as possible.
Unfortunately, you used a way over-used battling the gyms plot. Also, the Squirtle is very weak, and should not know Water Gun. I don't think Squirtle ever learns Water Gun. But it learns Bubble. Brock also has an Onix.

I like your attempt at a custom hero sprite, but from behind it looks like the normal Fr/Lg sprite.
That's all.

NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 22nd, 2007, 4:29 AM
I get it.By the way it was my first attempt to making a pokemon comic.I am a gamemaker thats a noob haha.

September 22nd, 2007, 10:07 AM
Alright NoOb GaMeMaKeR as you are probably aware from everyone elses critism, your comic is not the best. But that does not matter. Personally I think your comic is not that good, here are the reasons.

1. The characters jump places real quick.
2. The speech boxes are not very nice to look at.

But other than that, the comic is fine. The overworld Pokemon look nice and about Squirtle learning Water Gun, well I don't really think that matters, that is up to you.

And the water gun looked nice. I actually think this is impressive for a first comic, not the best, but not awful.

I will rate this comic 5/10, Half way there, just try to improve a little.

NoOb GaMeMaKeR
September 23rd, 2007, 2:15 PM
i know someone lock this or delete it my comic sucks final