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Romance Hero
October 15th, 2007, 8:40 PM
I just saw spiderman 3 again on my computer and the love storyline is just compelling, so it just inspire me with some spark.
this sounds like an original love story poem, of old friendships, developing into something stronger

Show me where it matters, if I love you all around,
I've loved you since 3rd grade on our school playground.
I remember when we kissed that late night,
Your lips endorned with gleam-present light.
Our names carved on every school desk,
let everyone know, that we are the best.
Sometime in college I plan to appear,
In a reflection of your happiness and tears.
I'll show you the ring that continues to bind,
what you and i share and none other can find.
When we die our reason is the same,
We could not control our desire to be blamed.
For staying alive when the other is dead,
Will our love continue after? I think that's enough said.

Erik <3 MJ

November 6th, 2007, 11:13 PM
This one I find very original and a bit sad, yet another awesome work.