View Full Version : A pic and poem by me. ^^

July 9th, 2004, 2:55 AM
You've suffered all these years, but you never did complain, I never noticed until now but then I was insane. I knew that you were feeling blue but not how you were fighting through. Eventually, though, you left our lives, leaving us feeling alone and deprived, but as I sit here at my desk I finally though of this: Your an eagle, I know it's true, but with a strong spirit and eyes of blue. Your magnificent, and your pain is gone, so fly my father, into the light, the magnificent light, the light of the Lord.

By Me

And the pic is in the attatchment...It's the best thing I've ever drawn with the computer! ^^

lil' jose
July 9th, 2004, 3:15 AM
That is very nice! wish I could write like you.

July 9th, 2004, 3:28 AM
Heheh, really? Thanks ^^;; Personally, I don't think I'm a very good....You should see Minunchu's poems (She's not very active here, and she has a nasty habit of double posting, but her poems are some of the best I've ever seen...and yes I know her in person. For a total hyperactivel goofball, she's quite literate.) The poem's about my dad who died a couple years ago...I wrote that poem only about 30 miniutes ago and came up with it about 45 minutes ago.. It took me about 5 minutes to write XD

lil' jose
July 9th, 2004, 3:40 AM
That's very nice thing to write about.

July 9th, 2004, 4:11 AM
I like the picture a lot ^^ You shoulda posted the poem in the poetry forum *points to it* Ah well =D

July 9th, 2004, 4:30 AM
Very nice work! It's cool to see just how talented my fellow RPers are! Really, these are the only two forum groups I visit. :) Beautiful picture...I really like the blurred and lighting effects.

July 9th, 2004, 4:40 AM
Thanks! ^^ I just now noticed that I kinda messed up on the right wing though 0o;;