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February 3rd, 2008, 6:33 PM
Pokemon Hanover
Setting: Mechanicsville, VA Wednseday Morning at 7:00 ("She's Leaving Home")
Connor:(Yawns, looks at clock) HOLY CRAP!!!! I'm late!!! WOWSERS!!!!!!(dashes to Terrell Lab)
Babra(mom): Don't forget your backpack!
To be continued (I have to go to bed).........
Connor chooses Pikachu and Pikachu follows Connor outside of the PokeBall

February 3rd, 2008, 7:18 PM

First, I offer the advice of reading the rules. We have a certain set of standards that we hold fics up to.

Second, instead of typing in the reply box, use some sort of word processing program. That way, you don't have to cut your fic short because you run out of time to work on it. You can save your work and write it at a later time. And also, doing so would allow you to catch unwanted mistakes, like missing spaces. You have that random smilie in your prose, and that's not wanted.

Poke around in the different advice threads here in PFF. When you feel like posting again, make sure that it meets the rules. Aim for a page in length at least (to start off with), and look over your story before posting.

Unfortunately, I have to close this now. It's what the rules dictate.

Good luck to you. And don't give up.