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August 30th, 2008, 8:35 AM
Open my eyes...let me feel...
I want to see; something real...

All I knew,
All I had in view,
Dreams I had about you,
They were a number, but certainly not few,
But I would have thrown it all into the blue,
If only I knew,
That soon, I would face my waterloo...


You covered my eyes with a veil,
that you may not fail,
you moulded me based on what you wnted from me,
All because I could not see...

You thought I had no destiny...

(Right now, I'm just pouring out works I wrote earlier in the morning...it's how I'm feeling right now...)

Akarei Yorume
August 30th, 2008, 11:16 AM
Wow, that's intense. So what you are trying to get across here is that you didn't know that you were being controlled?
And does this have to do with me?

August 30th, 2008, 12:55 PM
Not really controlled; I was following a path that I thought was there, I believed things that were not real...

And yes...all of my one-thread poems are.

Akarei Yorume
August 30th, 2008, 1:03 PM
Oh, ok. I wrote one, if you're interested...

August 30th, 2008, 1:04 PM
And I've read it...already, you aren't looking at recent posts.