View Full Version : NOT POKEMON Comotoon's Finest *Critique Please*

November 29th, 2008, 4:30 PM
Here are my comics I'm looking for constructive criticism.

My Comics

Tale of Bravio *Current and favorite Comic*
This is my favorite comic that I've made so far. So far I've uploaded a cover, and the prologue.
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5272/127e92eca05f4184f824526uf9.th.png (http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Tale_of_Bravio/index.php?p=490426)
Click on the picture for a link to the comic's site where there's more pages.

Life of Grim
Wow this ones okay I made when I was experimenting with blurred backgrounds.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4719/logissue2hm2.th.png (http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4719/logissue2hm2.png) http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7716/logissue1cj5.th.png (http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7716/logissue1cj5.png)

Ristar vs Sonic
A page from a comic I planned to do but decided not to may complete it later. It's Ristar's landing to earth.
http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/9351/page1ou8zl5.th.jpg (http://img389.imageshack.us/my.php?image=page1ou8zl5.jpg)