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August 22nd, 2009, 3:47 AM
Hey, I wanted to make my own story!

It's about a guy named Steven who wants to become the greatest Pokemon trainer ever. And on his way, he will discover secrets and paths that nobody has seen before.
When I show an icon of a Pokemon, it means that Steven just recorded the Pokemon in his Pokedex.

This story is in episodes. I don't have like decided dates when I release each episodes. I just release them when I'm done with writing them.

There was a guy named Steven. He wanted to be the greatest Pokemon Trainer in the world! He wanted to do whatever it takes to become the Champion. The truth will you find in this story...
Name: Steven.
Age: 10.
Hometown: Pallet Town.

After Ash left Pallet Town, Steven moved in in his house. Ash's mother had got married with Prof.Oak, so she moved in to Gary's house, where Oak now use to live.
Steven was gonna catch up to Ash, and defeat him to become the greatest Pokemon Trainer in the world!
Steven wake up early in the morning 6:00 AM, and hurried to the Pokemon Lab to get his first Pokemon from Prof. Oak. He entered the lab and ran over to Prof. Oak excited to get his first Pokemon.
Oak said: "Oh, hi, Steven!"
Steven answered: "Hello, Oak, where's my Pokemon?"
- "Steven, you remind me about Ash! He were so excited about getting his first Pokemon. I have only one Pokemon left. Ash and Gary took the other ones. Go take it!"
Oak pointed to a table with a Pokeball.
Steven walked up to the table and took the Pokeball.
Steven threw the Pokeball and said: "Go, Pokemon!"
The Pokemon that came out was a Charmanderhttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon004.png!
"Do you like your Pokemon?" Oak asked.
Steven answered excited: "Yes, I love it!"
- "I'm sure Charmander feels the same about you." Oak smiled. "Well, you better get out on your adventure!"
Steven said: "Oh yeah! Bye, Oak!"
Steven walked out of the lab and ran out to Route 1 when he suddenly got stopped by Gary.
Gary said: "Wait, Steven! I want you to have these!"
Gary pulled out some Running Shoes.
"I don't need them anymore! If you're gonna catch up to Ash, you need to be fast! Yeah, and my sister Daisy wanted you to have this Town Map!"
Gary gave Steven a Town Map!
Steven said: "Thanks, Gary!"
- "Good luck on your adventure!" Gary shouted.
- "Thanks and goodbye!"
Steven walked happily on his road to Viridian City.
Suddenly a Spearowhttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon021.png jumped on him!
"Wow" Steven said shocking.
"Charmander, use Tackle on him!"
Charmander used Tackle!
But the Spearow used Growl to weaken the power!
Steven said panickly: "Okay, there's only one way out of this. RUN!!"
Steven and Charmander ran as fast as they could to get rid of the Spearow.
Suddenly they bumped into a man and a lady with a talking Meowthhttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon052.png!
The lady said: "Haha, we got you!"
Meowth: "Okay Spearow, here's the money we promised you!"
They were obvously paying the Spearow to chase Steven right in the hands to Team Rocket.
But they didn't pay Spearow, Meowth just scammed him and used Pay Day!
Spearow fainted.
Meowth: "Muahahaha!"
The man said: "My name is James, and this is Jessie. We are Team Rocket, and we want your Pokemon!"
Steven shouted: "Never!"
Meowth said: "Wrong answer!"
Team Rocket grabbed Steven and Charmander in a balloon!

5 minutes later...

Steven and Charmander had been taken to the Viridian Gym. They saw a big man in front of them. It looked like the boss, or something.
The big man said: "My name is Giovani! Finally I get to meet you, Steven..."

To be continued...

Pokedex Completion:

Pokemon in Pokedex:
#004 Charmander http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon004.png
#021 Spearow http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon021.png
#052 Meowth http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon052.png

Please comment!

August 22nd, 2009, 6:37 AM
Okay, here's Episode 2, people!
Steven looked nervously at Giovanni.
"W-w-what a-are y-you g-gonna d-do t-to u-us?"
Giovanni answered evil: "We want your Pokemon!"
- "N-never!" Steven answered angry.
Steven took Charmander inside the Pokeball, and threw the Pokeball out of a window!
"Charmander, RUN!"
Charmander ran crying from the Pokemon Gym as fast as he could.
Giovanni shouted: "Go after that Pokemon!"
Jessie, James and Meowth ran after Charmander.
"So I guess it's just you and me here..." Giovanni said.
Steven shouted nervously: "S-stay away from me!"
- "You did a really big mistake releasing your Pokemon. Who's gonna protect you from my MEWTWO?!"
Giovanni just threw out a Master Ball, and out came a legendary Pokemon Mewtwohttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon150.png!
"W-what is that thing?" Steven said.
Steven pulled out his Pokedex.
On the Pokedex, it said: "Mewtwo is created by the Team Rocket with help of a feather from Mew. It's created to take over the world."
Giovanni: "Yeah, you heard it right! And we are gonna take over the world with this Pokemon!"
Mewtwo: "WHAT?! I don't wanna be a member of this lame team! Don't you think I have the power to do this myself?!"


Charmander is still running for his life while Jessie, James and Meowth is chasing him. Charmander starts using Ember behind him.
"Dang! How are we supposed to get past this fire?"
They were just next to the Viridian Forest. Charmander was at the one side of the fire, and Team Rocket at the other side.
The fire started to spread to Viridian Forest.
Meowth said: "Oh, look what you've done, you stupid Pokemon! You've created a forest fire!"
Since Charmander is a Fire-type, he is hiding in the fire so Team Rocket can't get him.
Jessie said irritating: "Oh, you smart little rabbit!"
James: "We need to get a water Pokemon from Giovanni!"
Team Rocket ran back to the gym.

When they entered the gym, they got surprised by the Mewtwo standing there!
"Hey, boss, is it something you would like to tell us?" Jessie said wondering.
- "No."
Mewtwo: "WHAT?! Even more lame people in this team?! I'm getting out of here! I want to take over the world all by myself!"
Giovanni shouted: "Don't let him get away!"
Giovanni threw a Master Ball at Mewtwo.
This was the most shocking thing.
Mewtwo broke free!
Mewtwo turned to Giovanni and said: "How dare you?!"
"How dare you do that to me!!"

To be continued...

Pokedex Completion:

Pokemon in Pokedex:
#004 Charmander http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon004.png
#021 Spearow http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon021.png
#052 Meowth http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon052.png
#150 Mewtwo http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon150.png

August 22nd, 2009, 11:37 AM
Here's episode 3!
Steven was scared for his life when Mewtwo roared like that. What will happen? Find out now!

Mewtwo blew Team Rocket far away!
Team Rocket screamed: "Team Rocket is getting blown away again!"
Mewtwo were watching carefully on Steven.
Mewtwo said: "Are you one of them?!"
Steven answered shaking: "N-no. I'm j-just a-a Pokemon Trainer."
- "...Fine."
Mewtwo fled!

"Puh! That was close!" Steven said.
"I need to find Charmander!"
Steven ran as fast as he could to Viridian Forest.
Then he noticed the fire.
"Charmander must be inside!" Steven said.
"CHARMANDER! It's me, Steven! Come out!"
Finally Charmander came out of the forest fire.
But Steven couldn't get to Pewter City because of the forest fire!
"Come back in the Pokeball, Charmander." Steven said.
Steven took Charmander in the Pokeball.
Since Steven couldn't get past the forest, all he could do was to catch a water Pokemon to stop the fire.
Steven decided to go back to Prof. Oak to ask for some Pokeballs to catch some Water Pokemon.
Steven ran back to Prof. Oak's lab, and when he asked for Pokeballs, Oak said he didn't have any.
Steven answered: "But I need to have it! There's a fire in Viridian Forest!"
- "What?! This is a crisis! Follow me!"
Steven followed Oak into Gary's house.
"Gary! Bring your Blastoise and follow us! There's a fire at Viridian Forest!" Oak shouted.
Gary answered shocked: "What?! I'm right on it!"
So Steven, Oak and Gary ran as fast as they could to Viridian Forest to stop the fire.
Gary took out his Blastoisehttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon009.png.
"Blastoise, use Hydro Pump!" Gary shouted.
Oak shouted: "Fast! We need more water Pokemon!"
Oak gave Steven $3000 and said: "Steven! Take this money, run to the Pokemart, buy many Pokeballs as possible and catch as many Water Pokemon as possible!"
Steven ran to the Pokemart to buy Pokeballs.
Steven shouted: "Fast! As many Pokeballs for these money!"
Steven got 15 Pokeballs.
He ran out of the mart and looked for a pond. He found a little one, but that would work.
A Poliwaghttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon060.png jumped on Steven!
Steven threw a Pokeball on Poliwag!
But he broke free!
"I need to weaken it! Go, Charmander!" Steven said.
Charmander used Tackle on Poliwag!
"Now I can try catching it!"
Steven threw a Pokeball and managed to catch it!
"Okay, now I need to hurry back to the forest!"
Steven hurried back to the forest and took out his Poliwag.
"Ah! I see you catched a Poliwag!" Oak said.
Steven shouted: "Poliwag, use Bubble!"
Poliwag and Blastoise finally stopped the fire!
"Puh! That was close!" Oak said.
"We're not done yet! We need to see if someone is hurted in the forest!" Gary shouted.

To be continued...

Pokedex Completion:

Pokemon in Pokedex:
#004 Charmander http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon004.png
#009 Blastoise http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon009.png
#021 Spearow http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon021.png
#052 Meowth http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon052.png
#060 Poliwag http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon060.png
#150 Mewtwo http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon150.png
Episode 4 is coming!
Is it exciting?

August 22nd, 2009, 1:28 PM
Episode 4 is here, people! :D
Steven, Oak and Gary had to see who got hurted in the forest.
"Oh, no!" Oak screamed.
"All the Sudowoodo's are gone!"
"What?!" Gary said shocked.
"That can't be! No single Sudowoodo left?"
"Nope." Oak said.
Gary answered: "This is searious! We need to punish who did this!"
"Umm... I think it was Charmander... But I wasn't there at the moment."
"You weren't with your Pokemon?!" Gary asked shockly.
Steven said: "No, but I can explain it. We got kidnapped by Team Rocket and..."
"Don't say anymore." Gary said.
"Those rats always tried to sneak away with Ash's Pikachu..."
Steven started look around in the forest.
"Oh no!" Steven shouted.
"It's a damaged Kakunahttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon014.png!"
Oak: "Oh my gosh! We gotta get it to a Pokemon Center!"
Steven, Oak and Gary ran to the Pokemon Center in Pewter City.
Nurse Joy said that the Kakuna was gonna be okay. She also thanked them for bringing him there.
After healing the Kakuna, Nurse Joy said: "The Pokemon will make it, but he can't make it on his own. I think you should have him."
Steven accepted the Kakuna to his team.

Then Steven and his team went out of the Pokemon Center and up to the Pewter Gym. Steven entered the gym and went forward to the Gym Leader.
The Gym Leader said: "Hello. My name is Brock. I am the Pewter Gym Leader. I'm a Rock Gym Leader, and I'm ready to smash you!"
The battle with Brock started.
Steven took out Poliwag, as Brock took out his Geodudehttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon074.png.
Steven: "Poliwag! Use Bubble!"
Brock: "Geodude! Use Rock Smash!"
Poliwag got his half HP damaged.
Geodude only had 1/50 HP left!
Next round, Poliwag started with Bubble and defeated Geodude.
Brock sent out Onixhttp://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon095.png!
Onix used Rock Throw and defeated Poliwag!
Steven sent out Charmander!
Charmander used Ember! Onix got burned!
Onix used Rock Throw and defeated Charmander.
Steven sent out his last Pokemon, Kakuna!
Onix got hurted by his burn.
Onix fainted!

Steven won the battle!
"Congratulations, Steven! You have earned this Pokemon Gym Badge!" Brock said.
Steven got his first Gym Badge!
"The closest Pokemon Gym from here will be the Viridian Gym." Brock said.
Steven answered: "I've aleready been there, and it was just Team Rocket!"
"WHAT?!" Brock said shocked.
"Giovanni is the Team Rocket Leader?"
"Yes!" Steven said.
Brock answered: "Oh my gosh! We need to get another Gym Leader! And we also need to take away the Gym Badge from him!"
"Come on! We got no time to lose!"

To be continued...

Pokedex Completion:

Pokemon in Pokedex:
#004 Charmander http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon004.png
#009 Blastoise http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon009.png
#014 Kakuna http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon014.png
#021 Spearow http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon021.png
#052 Meowth http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon052.png
#060 Poliwag http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon060.png
#074 Geodude http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon074.png
#095 Onix http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon095.png
#150 Mewtwo http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon/dungeon150.png
Liked it? Comment!

August 23rd, 2009, 7:56 PM
hi, i guess im first to review! this is very... very fast-paced. the events happen so quickly it sometimes gets a little hectic... and youve made several grammar mistakes. it could use some work, but it holds the charm that some of the original episodes had... keep working at it!

August 24th, 2009, 2:51 AM
First of all, you shouldn't quote them, and second, you shouldn't right in script form. There is no description and the story is quite confusing.

August 29th, 2009, 1:02 AM
Thanks for comments, guys! I will soon have Episode 5 here.