View Full Version : i want to be everything

September 20th, 2009, 9:52 AM
and everyone
there's something in my chest
that rattles like a snare drum
i need to open you up to see

are you you?

or are you me?

September 20th, 2009, 10:31 AM
Wow, that poem definitely makes you think.
I guess the only problem would be capitalization, but then that would ruin the poem flow, wouldn't it?

September 21st, 2009, 3:41 PM
I don't know about ruin the 'flow', more like i'm lazy and pretentious it looks nicer and happens to work for this one. are your thoughts capitalized? They might be, but I don't think mine always are, and so.

Thanks for commenting! you are wonderful ;)

September 21st, 2009, 4:00 PM
You're welcome.
'bats eyes' i know i'm wonderful! i can't help myself!
my thoughts? waht thoughts? well, ususallly i capitilize everything, well, in writing anyways.