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February 16th, 2005, 5:57 AM
Suicidal Love

It's aching through my body
It's driving me insane
The temptation of being with you
I want to hold you again

I still remember that day
I woke up, and you were gone
You didn't even leave a note
I sat there and started to mourn

We were supposedly inseparable
Our relationship was gold
Yet you just threw it away
You made me feel so cold

Now I'm here holding a knife
Thinking this is the only way
Shivering and shaking nervously
I was going to die today

My hand began to move
The knife pierced through my skin
"There's no turning back,"
I said with a depressed grin

I quickly fell backwards
Lying motionless in my deathbed
But I continued to cry
Even though I was dead


This is dedicated to somebody who I believed to be my girlfriend. She and her family moved away back in 2001 without telling me. ;_; I know, I'm bad at writing poems.

February 16th, 2005, 7:01 AM
Thats's my favourite type of poem..
I once wrote something similar in school and ended up getting suspended..o.0
Well if its your first poem, its good. I would have never thought of that even now..
So as usual, any more coming up?

February 16th, 2005, 7:09 AM
Maybe. I haven't had all that many emotional moments in my life, so I don't have too much to write about. XD

You got suspended for that?! O_O; That's... new. XD

February 16th, 2005, 7:12 AM
Nice poem, I'm not really good at making poems though. ^_^

February 16th, 2005, 7:19 AM
Neither am I, this is my first attempt. Thanks though. o.o