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February 25th, 2005, 2:15 PM
Here is one of my Haikus, it is all in Japanese. It was written for the begining of one of my Vampire novels. I will give a translation upon request. (I am giveng you a minute to get a feel of the Japanese.)

かぜ きく と
き し の はなす くう
き で ち かぐ.

Kaze Kiku to-
Ki shi no hanasu kuu-
Ki de chi Kagu

February 25th, 2005, 8:41 PM
It looks and sounds really pretty, (Ooh, a vampire novel? *_*) but I need a translation, is that okay? =3 PM me if you don't want to write it in public. xD

February 25th, 2005, 9:03 PM
It's cool... Yes, a Vampire Novel.. Onely a few chapters have been written. I am doing research for another book right now though.
Here is the translation(it looses it's 5,7,5 format), it is a bit morbid:

Hear the wind
as it speaks of death
smell the blood in the air.