View Full Version : The things you have done. (my newest poem)

~Black Moonlight~
March 3rd, 2005, 2:18 PM
I took some advice from LT and came up with this below, thanks for the advice LT!

It started years ago, and lasted untill today,
Your smart looks, Your everlasting smile,
But yet you can never understand me,
I don't let that bother me though,
Because I know things will change,
But the things you have done,
Will never make it the same.....

March 3rd, 2005, 2:21 PM
I love it! But what's it about????????? 10 out of 10! Good job!

~Black Moonlight~
March 3rd, 2005, 2:23 PM
I don't really know what it's about, because I just thought of it but I guess it's about relationships!

March 3rd, 2005, 2:26 PM
Oh.....Well it's still good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Black Moonlight~
March 3rd, 2005, 2:34 PM
thanks well if anyone else has something to say please say it!