View Full Version : Revelations Series - Kenta and the Hoenn League

Hiroshi Sotomura
December 22nd, 2003, 3:30 AM
Vito's Commentary - This is my third Revelation Series stories (the others used to be on the now archived community). The story would be based on the people's lives in Johto or Kanto (particularly characters like Kenta), the areas where the TV series' focus is rarely put upon. So enjoy this chapter! The people in this story are the ones you know. Kenta, Marina and Jackson, who will meet each other at a certain point. Why didnt I include the so called dub names for Kenta and Marina? Because I refuse to believe that they are Yoshi and Dani, and for other reasons that must remain obscure.

Kenta and the Hoenn League

Kenta continues his journey, aiming for success. His journey has started in Hoenn, a land of new Pokmon and mysteries connected.
"So I expect that you are going to compete in the Hoenn League?" asked Nurse Joy, of Littleroot Town's Pokmon Center.
"Yes." an eager Kenta said.
"Good. Then like all trainers you are going to register, and since it is compulsory you need an updated PokDex."
"Where can I get one?"
"Well Professor Birch lives in the southern area of town. You have a PokGear or PokNav?"
"I have a PokGear..." Kenta nervously replied.
"Well it should automatically recognize our mapping system. You'll be able to find Birch using the map." Nurse Joy said.
"Ok. Thanks for the help." Kenta said.
He walked off to Professor Birch's lab.

"Hello." welcomed Professor Birch, "You must be Kenta. Professor Elm speaks most highly of you."
"Hello." replied Kenta.
"So I expect you've taken the boat to Hoenn?"
"Well your PokDex is on the desk over there. It covers an additional 100 or more discovered Pokmon of Hoenn. If you see one, press the Record button to save it onto your dex. If you find an undiscovered one, press the Record Movie button. explained Professor Birch.
Ok then replied Kenta.
So thats all you need to know! Professor Birch said excitedly.

So Route 101 is ahead according to this map Kenta said to himself.
Time to commence then said a voice from behind him.
Jackson was behind him.
Jackson! Kenta said in excitement.
So youre off to the Hoenn League? Jackson asked.
Yeah. replied Kenta.
How come I didnt see you at the Silver Conference? asked Jackson.
You went? asked Kenta, I got into the Top 15 only last week.
So have you been in contact with Marina? Junichi asked.
She continued to conceal her location, but yes I have been in contact with her.
Well youll be proud to know that shes right here!
Hi Kenta! Marina said, making Kenta jump.
Marina! Kenta said excitedly again.
I thought we should do something together. How about this time we go as a trio? Jackson suggested.
Good idea, since were all going the same path Kenta replied.
Not really. Marina commented, I decided that I didnt want to get into this league stuff anymore. I like travelling a lot, so why not go as a trio?
Agreed? Junichi asked?
AGREED! they all said.
And now, as a trio, they continue their journey in the Hoenn League.

December 22nd, 2003, 11:12 AM
nice start to a story

not many stories out there for these characters

Kenta and Marina are my favorite characters

putting them together with Junichi will make it an interesting story

can't wait to read more^^

Hiroshi Sotomura
December 22nd, 2003, 12:52 PM
Thanks for the comment. I'll continue this story soon.

January 6th, 2004, 11:05 AM
are you gonna continue this story?

I hope to read more^^

Hiroshi Sotomura
January 6th, 2004, 1:41 PM
Upon their journey...
"So what city is ahead of us now?" Jackson asked Kenta.
Kenta looked at the PokGear and said, "We're heading for Petalburg, so the nearest city that goes towards that path is.. Oldale town."
"Ok..." Jackson replied.
Kenta, Jackson and Marina arrived at Oldale town. They make a stop at the Pokmon Center...
"Hi Professor Elm!" Kenta said over the videophone.
"Hello Kenta." Elm replied, "I see you're at Oldale, I have something important I want you to do."
"Yes what is it?" Kenta asked.
Professor Elm looked at Kenta as if to see if there was something sticking out of his pockets, and then asked, "If you encounter any unusual Pokmon, can you send the data to me? Just insert the PokDex into the slot below."
"Ok!" Kenta responded.

"Wow! A wild Ralts!" Kenta said. They were at Route 102, searching for Pokmon.
"Go! Beedril!" Kenta said, opening the PokBall and Beedril coming out.
"Pin Missile!"

January 6th, 2004, 5:10 PM
pretty good for a short part

keep it up :cool:

January 20th, 2004, 11:46 AM
Pls. continue it :D It's really nice

Hiroshi Sotomura
January 20th, 2004, 1:37 PM
Beedril used Pin Missile on the Ralts, which hit multiple times and knocked the Ralts back. Marina jumped up and down, as if rooting for Kenta.
"Great Ball! Go!" Kenta said, as he threw the ball at Ralts... and caught it.
"You didn't need to use that Great Ball..." Jun'ichi said, "You could have used a simple PokBall."
"Why waste your chances?" Kenta said back.
They continued through the route, until they reached Petalburg.
"There's a gym here, according to my PokGear..." Kenta said.
"I can't see Hoenn on mine..." Marina said, disappointed.
Kenta pulled out a card from his pocket, once scanned into the PokGear, and said, "This is a Hoenn map card. It tracks your location in Hoenn. Scan it to work it."
Marina scanned it into her PokGear.
"Reading data..." the PokGear said, "Scan complete! Welcome to Hoenn!"
"Let's go to the gym!" Kenta said.
Jun'ichi was standing there, as if feeling ignored, but thern quickly ran after saying at the top of his voice, "Guys wait for me!"

"So you're Norman?" Kenta asked the gym leader.
"Sure am." Norman said, standing in front of him.
"Well I'm busy at the moment. This is my darling wife, Mrs. White."
"Hi!" Marina said nicely.
"I'm sure I have some time to have a chat with you guys before I battle." Norman said.
"Hello there kids." Mrs. White said, "You must be hungry. You're all definitely from Johto... they have a unique style of clothing there... so you all came from there?"
"Yes!" the three said.
"Well then, come on in. I have some food inside..."

Marina looked at a photo with Norman, Mrs. White, a tall girl with a red bandada and shirt, and a kid with a green shirt and glasses, and asked curiously, "What's this picture?"
Mrs. White came to Marina and said, "That's a picture of me, Norman, May and Max."
"Who's May and Max?" Marina asked.
Mrs. White looked up and said, "They're two kids who like Pokmon. Both have went out on a journey, with some kid by the name of Ash..."

January 20th, 2004, 11:34 PM
Very nice work!

I hope to read more^^

I like Kenta's comment on using a Great Ball "why waste your chances?"

very cool :cool:

January 21st, 2004, 12:02 AM
YAY! I love your fics. I know how you might be busy... but Carry on!!!!!!!!! Puh-leez

Hiroshi Sotomura
January 21st, 2004, 2:05 PM
Norman came into the kitchen they were sitting in and said to Kenta, "I'm no longer busy. How about we start the battle?"
"C'mon let's go!" Kenta said excitedly.
"Wait for me!" Marina called.
Jun'ichi was the next to look at the picture. He sat there for a minute, before Marina came screeching in and roaring at Jun'ichi, "C'MON! YOU CAN'T MISS KENTA'S MATCH!"

"This is a match between the challenger Kenta of New Bark Town," the nearby referee said, "And the Petalburg City Gym Leader, Norman.
"Following Gym Rules, both trainers may use 3 Pokmon during the match. Only the challenger may substitute Pokmon.
"Ready... and... BEGIN!"
Kenta got his PokBall hanging from his bag and said,"Go! Typhlosion!" as he threw it. Typhlosion, a fire Pokmon, came out.
"Not qute a starter are you?" Norman commented, "Go! Vigoroth!" he thrown a PokBall, and Vigoroth, quite a vicious normal Pokmon, came out from it's ball.
"Typhlosion! Flame Wheel!" Kenta commanded.
Typhlosion spits out a flame which turns into a wheel, which surrounded Vigoroth and burns it.
"Vigoroth!" Norman said, "Slash!"
Vigoroth did a furious Slash at Typhlosion, which dealt a good amount of damage.
"Typhlosion! Fire Blast!" Kenta said. Typhlosion did so...
"Faint Attack!" Norman called. Vigoroth had the chance to get away, and nearly escaped the Fire Blast, which also dealt a large amount of damage. Kenta could hear the noise of an attack coming, but he wondered, Where is the attack coming from?
"Typhlosion! Wait and then surround yourself in Flames!" Kenta said in a smart way.
"No!" cried Norman, but it was too late. Vigoroth had hit Typhlosion while it had it's flames surrounding it, causing lots of burning damage to Vigoroth and faintng it.
"That's one!" Kenta said happily.

January 21st, 2004, 6:33 PM
I must say. This next part was very good! Its funny when Marina yelled at Junichi to come see the match. Typhlosion fought hard :cool: Very nice strategy on stopping the Faint Attack

January 21st, 2004, 7:09 PM
Nice strategies! But I thought Flame Wheel is when Typholsion curls up and then he spins and attacks, oh well, everyone has their own version.

January 22nd, 2004, 11:28 PM
Keep it up!!! :D Hope to read more.

Hiroshi Sotomura
January 23rd, 2004, 3:13 PM
Norman stood there, thought for a second, and sent out a Delcatty.
"What's that?" Kenta wondered, holding up the PokDex.
"Delcatty," the PokDex started, as it rendered the initial image, "It's ability, Cute Charm, will attract any physical attackers."
"Fire Blast!" Kenta commanded.
Typhlosion uses Fire Blast and it hits Delcatty, taking a substantial amount of damage.
"Attract!" Norman commanded.
Delcatty stared at Typhlosion, and a few seconds later, it swirled around and then stood there.
"Typhlosion! A Fire Blast!" Kenta commanded once again. But Typhlosion stood there infatuated.
"Delcatty! Tackle!" Norman commanded Delcatty as it did so repeatedly.
"Typhlosion! It isn't your girlfriend! Fire Blast!" Kenta called.
"Uh oh... it's just standing there..." Jun'ichi commented.
"Typhlosion! Do it!"
Typhlosion held out the blast and Delcatty was fried, and fell to the floor. Along with it, Typhlosion fainted.
"Oh no!" Kenta cried.
"Well..." Jun'ichi commented a bit, "That was a double knockout. If Kenta does this it's victory for him..."
"You're right..." Marina responded, before yelling, "YOU CAN DO IT KENTA!"

January 23rd, 2004, 3:28 PM
Yay! New Chapter! BTW are you a Questshipper or Backshipper? cuz it seems that ur a questshipper. WOOHOO!

Hiroshi Sotomura
January 23rd, 2004, 3:49 PM
I support Questshipping even though never mentioned. Kenta and Marina are the cutest couple. They were meant for each other.
But I also like AdvanceShipping.

January 23rd, 2004, 5:26 PM
You know Im the main Questshipper around here :) I have always said it was one of the cutest couples, but they are more perfect for each other by watching the special.
Very good part that time. Nice idea with the attraction. Lets get this badge Kenta!

February 15th, 2004, 8:41 PM
Are you gonna continue this? Its getting good. I hope you do.

*sorry for the double post*

Hiroshi Sotomura
February 15th, 2004, 8:59 PM
Oh sorry guys, with school I have lots ot things. I'll respond in a few hours.

Hiroshi Sotomura
February 16th, 2004, 3:28 AM
Norman groaned as he stood. "I guess you are quite the strong one Kenta," he commented, "Try this!"
Norman threw his final PokBall. It hit the ground, and out came a Slaking!
"What is that?" Kenta asked himself.
He pointed the device at Slaking, and it scanned the data instantly.
"Slaking." the PokDex started, "This Pokmon is capable of creating yawns that may lull their opponents to sleep. They may ignore orders at times, but are capable of creating strong attacks."
"Tough looking..." Kenta said, he reached out with a ball in his hand. "Go, Beedril!"
Beedril came out of the ball.
"Beedril! Pin Missile!"
Beedril attacks the Slaking and hits it several times.
"Wow... pretty much 1/8th of damage taken from Slaking." Norman commented, "I kinda underestimated you. Slaking! Facade!"
Slaking's facade hit Beedrill, taking 1/4th of it's damage.
"Another Pin Missle!" Kenta commanded, as Beedril did so.
Slaking was hit, but had lost more power from the Pin Missiles.
"Whoa!" Norman roared, "That is a lot of damage!"
Slaking had lied there.
"Pin Missile!"
"Hyper Beam!"
Norman's Hyper Beam hit Beedril causing it to faint.
"Go!" Kenta said, throwing a PokBall, "Tyranitar!"

The King of Water Pokemon
February 17th, 2004, 12:11 PM
Awesome story! I've never seen the special. *Tear* But by the sounds of this fanfic and the way people talk about it, it makes me want to see it.

February 18th, 2004, 12:17 AM
Another great part to the story! Cool! He has Tyranitar!
Keep up the awesome work :)

Hiroshi Sotomura
February 18th, 2004, 3:29 AM
Tyranitar made a roar as it emerged from it's PokBall.
"Hmm... nice! But not good enough!" Norman said.
Kenta looked straight at Norman.
"That's what you think!" he said across the gym, "Tyranitar! Hyper Beam attack!"
Tyranitar's hyper beam shot from it's mouth and hit it's target, weakening it so much it looked as if it would drop.
"Oh my!" Norman said surprised.
"Kenta! You can do it!" Marina roared out.
"Not too bad for a trainer..." Mrs. White said to herself.
Jun'ichi stared blatantly at Marina, before saying, "Quit acting like a cheerleader." which made Marina stare back. Jun'ichi took a glimse at Mrs. White, who was staring at Kenta. He had sworn he heard her say "Nice performance" before she walked off.
"Not too bad." Norman said, as he called his Vigoroth back, "I can't let it get too weak, so I finish this match."
"It was a great match." Mrs. White said, emerging from the kitchen, shining a glittering Balance Badge, "You deserve this."
Kenta took the badge and loked as it glimmered in his face, and held it at the ceiling, looking up at the new badge.
"I have my first Hoenn badge!" he said in an excited way.

Dragon Man
February 18th, 2004, 6:22 AM
Great Fan Fic! I really like the character's personalitites. "It isn't your girlfriend!"

February 18th, 2004, 10:08 AM
Now that part was very good! Hehe, Junichi telling her that. I bet she got pissed :laugh:
Kenta really showed Norman. Got his badge! Cant wait to read some more :)

Hiroshi Sotomura
March 1st, 2004, 12:02 AM
Norman waved goodbye as Kenta left the gym to heal his Pokmon. Junichi followed. Marina stood with Mrs. White, talking about May and Max, and talking about Ash. The trio departed from Petalburg before night falled.
"'Cording to this," Junichi started, looking at his PokGear, "We're in Route 104. Petalburg Woods is just ahead."
"Well let's go!" Kenta said, running off.
"Wait Kenta!" Marina said trying to stop him, "It's the brink of the night! You need light to see!"
But Kenta kept running. Marina sighed, turned on a flashlight and said, "He might find himself in more than he asked for soon enough... Petalburg forest is more than a kilometre away. If he doesn't stop running he'll be tired."

"Help!" a girl cried.
"Who's that?" Kenta said.
"Rockets everywhere!"
"Get out of our way, kid." one said, pushing Kenta onto the grass and refocusing on the girl. About 5 rockets were surrounding a girl in the distance.
"Oh boy... Rockets in Hoenn?" he commented, making one turn around.
"Oh dear. What do we have? The kid that had foiled Bashou and Buson's plans:?"
"The kids!" Marina said coming in with Junichi.
"You'd better let the girl go!" Junichi said at them loudly.
"Guys you might have to leave this to us two." one Rocket said. The others went away, leaving two Rockets.
"Prepare to meet your newest foes!" one said,
"And we know how Jessie's and James goes!" the other said,
"We don't really like their motto."
"It feels like you won it through a lotto."
"I'm Kent, senior Rocket movement co-ordinator!"
"I'm Wendy! Previously Johto Human Resources conductor!"
"We are... Team Rocket!" they both ended.
Kenta, Marina and Junichi stared at each other and the to Wendy and Kent.
"Pfft... at least we don't repeat this like Jessie and James often. We are more into business." Wendy said.
"Who's Jessie and James?" Kenta asked.
"Lunatics." Kent said.
"What are you doing with the girl?" Kenta said loudly towards them.
"What we do is our business. She knows the location of an extremely rare Pokmon... two to be exact. Latios and Latias normally fly around Altomare City, but Hoenn is their favorite spot. This girl knows the spot they hide in as we've witnessed her playing with them before. Now it's time for us to go!" Kent said, as both him and Wendy put on their jetpacks and zoomed away, with other Rockets following with the girl in possession.
"We have to get the girl back!" Kenta said, holding a PokBall, "Go! Skarmory!"

The Vince Knight
March 1st, 2004, 12:39 AM
Nice story Masato-kun.
I like the bit where the battle is so cool.

March 1st, 2004, 8:33 AM
Wow! Another great chapter! I like the idea of using new Rockets.
I like how Kenta just ran off to go to the woods. He sure likes adventure.
This should get even more interesting when involving Latias and Latios.

Keep up the great work :)

Hiroshi Sotomura
March 6th, 2004, 2:19 PM
"Ride on!" Kenta said, as Junichi and Marina went on Skarmory.
Kenta's hair had swayed in the night wind as they approached the Rockets still up in the sky.
Kent noticed, and turned around. He reached for his pocket and sent out a Salemence.
"Beat this!" he said, "Salemence! Fire Blast!"
The fire blast came coming, as Kenta told Skarmory, "Duck!"
Skarmory dived away from the blast.
"Very reliant on moves?" Kenta commented, "Typical of a Rocket."
"You don't know who you're dealing with!" Wendy said, "Go! Scizor!"
Scizor flew up in the air, as Wendy commanded, "Attack them with your claw!"
"Steel Wing!" Kenta commanded again.
The Rockets were getting away with the girl. Kenta saw this and then said, "Dive straight after them!"
They had gotten away from Salemence and Scizor and Wendy and Kent, and further ahead were the Rockets.
"Swoop at the girl!" Kenta said. Skarmory swooped and grabbed the girl from the Rockets grasp.
"Not so fast!" Wendy said.
"Go! Typhlosion!" Kenta said, sending it out as it went on Skarmory's strong back.
"You'd better give up!" Marina said.
Typhlosion used a Fire Blast, which had damaged the Rockets boosterpacks, and as they all exploded it send them all blasting off, the girl in Kenta and friend's possession now.

"Thanks!" the girl said, "I owe you one..."
"That's okay," Kenta said.
"So who exactly are Latios and Latias?" Marina asked.
"My friends!" she said, "We hide secretly nowadays... if you want to find us, shhh... our secret hideout is just... err... I can't say the direction in words, but..."
The girl ran off, disappearing into the darkness.
"Want to follow her?" Junichi said.
"Come on!" Kenta said.
"Over here!" the girl could be heard saying in the distance of darkness.

March 7th, 2004, 11:16 PM
Its getting even more interesting. Fighting off the back of a Skarmory. Very nice.
Cant wait to read more :cool:

The Vince Knight
March 8th, 2004, 1:31 AM
More I need more writing...

Hiroshi Sotomura
April 11th, 2004, 3:53 PM
Kenta gasped when he walked towards the girl. He found himself floating in a secret area, in fact the entire area looked really secret.
Jun'ichi and Marina had followed, and next second all three were together floating around the mysterious area. The girl appeared right in front of them.
"I want to show you something really cool," the girl said. She took down her banded hair as it turned red. Her clothes turned green, and her hair was tied on sides, as she then said, "My name is Bianca, and this is the secret garden."
Kenta gaped at Bianca.

You guys know Bianca? She's the girl from the 5th Movie, Pokmon Heroes. Also known as Kanon.
Back to the story.

"Anyway, the secret garden is a special place. People never knew that there were multiple entrances to get to here." Bianca said, "By the way, you guys are floating thanks to my special Pokmon. Come out!"
Out in the sky around the light comes a near transparent Pokmon. Then Latias appears.
Kenta looked at Latias and asked, "What's this Pokmon?"
Bianca jumped onto Latias, and Latias had then stopped his levitation power, making Kenta, Marina and Jun'ichi start to fall, when Latias did a swoop with Bianca on her back. They landed on Latias.
"This Pokmon is Latias." Bianca said.
Kenta took out his PokDex.
"Latias. The Eon Pokmon. Average Height: 1.4m. Average Weight: 40.0kg. Full Specific Data Unknown."
Kenta then put away the PokDex and said, "Amazing."
"There are two established entrances to here." Bianca said.
"One of them is Altomare." Marina said.
"Right!" Bianca said.
"How'd you know?" Kenta asked.
"Books." Marina put in, "I've also been to Altomare numerous times. Even though I missed out on the waveriding day, which I hear there've been many other special events there."
Bianca smiled at Marina.
"Right. A person named Ash Ketchum came. He saved the entire Altomare City. Too bad you missed out." Bianca replied, "Then as you know, the forest hole is a way to get here. More entrances are establishable, but only by Latias here. I established this new link, so I could see Hoenn. But I needed to be disguised in case anybody wanted to get me, but my disguise kinda failed."

oni flygon
April 11th, 2004, 4:09 PM
Nice story! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^

April 14th, 2004, 7:40 PM
Another great chapter. I see we are doing an Altomare visit. That place is great :cool:

Hiroshi Sotomura
April 26th, 2004, 12:38 AM
Kenta turned down at the Secret Garden. The paths and everything were set and decorated, and some small stands had strange items on them. He then looked around more.
"What are you doing?" Bianca asked.
"Taking a look." Kenta replied, "This garden... it's... like it's magical or something..."
"Well be careful not to fall." Bianca said.
"Should we land?" Marina asked.
Bianca turned to Marina, and then said, "Why not? We've been in the air long enough. C'mon Latias!"
Latias swooped towards the ground with Kenta and company on it.
"Well anyway, we should be going back." Kenta said.
"Ok!" Bianca said, "Thanks for everything. I'll see you at more entrances of Hoenn, too!"

"That was nice, meeting Bianca and all." Kenta said.
"Now Kenta, you should stay in the range of our lamp." Marina said.
"It's not like you have the bossy boots."
"WHAT?" Marina roared, before looking the other way.
Junichi turned around, but silently turned his head back.
Kenta ran off.
"Oooh not again!" Marina commented.
"He's gonna get it..." Junichi said.
And Kenta most certainly did, as he fell into the lake.
"Typical Pokmon Master..." Junichi and Marina said looking at each other.
Junichi and Marina sat down, lit a campfire, opened 3 tents and watched as a figure came out of the water - Kenta.
"Typical Pokmon Master? Gah." he said, and nothing else said.
He dried himself near the fire, they all got into their sleeping bags, and fell asleep.

Several hours later, it was the brink of the noon, or at least eleven o'clock, when Marina had cooked some breakfast. Kenta and Junichi had disappeared, however.
"I wonder what those two are off to.." she said to herself, looking up at the sky.

April 26th, 2004, 1:51 AM
I really have enjoyed reading this so far. I have never seen any of the specials. For that matter none of the anime because our pay TV was cut and it isn't shown on free to air channels in tassie.

April 26th, 2004, 1:44 PM
Another great chapter. Hehe. He fell into the water:D
It was a great idea to have them visit Alto Mare
Cant wait to read more