View Full Version : A more advanced persocom (revived)

Midori Chi
May 1st, 2005, 1:12 PM
Hello! A long time ago, I made an rp based off Chobits. Here's the plot:

It is the future. Persocoms now have powers..yes..powers...So..there's evil persocoms as well..trying to hack them out of style. So...you play as a a persocom to fight!

Programmed powers:
Rp example:

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 1st, 2005, 9:49 PM
Umm, I think it needs more of a plot then that, sorry. :surprised

Midori Chi
May 2nd, 2005, 10:56 AM
Okay! Here you go!

Plot: It is the future. Persocoms are created to have powers. Dita and Zima have found a way to make persocoms with EVIL powers. They are trying to hack all the persocoms so they can grab the atention of the latest style. You can be either bad or good.

Is that better?

Zero ex
May 3rd, 2005, 1:00 PM
hey i want to join, an other chobits story cool

Name: Kyoske
AGe: created 5 months ago but it seems of 17 years.
Gender: Male
Personality: sometimes happy, sometimes serious.
Programmed powers: Heat sensor, can see the heat aura of all living things, and have a secret machine gun in his back, the persocom is still not complete.
Looks: Tall of some 1.90 Meters, short black hair, use a black jaket.(secret military persocom)
Rp example: As Kyoske was searching for his enemy, he suddenly was hacked by dito, making him one dark persocom. Then Dita told to Kyoske, you must destroy.. her... destroy Chi. When Dita stop talking Kyoske leave the place to find chi.

May 3rd, 2005, 1:28 PM
hey can i join, a chobits new story sounds good

Age;16 , created 3 months ago
Personality:little crazy sometimes, and mysterious
Programmed powers:x ray and zoom program
Looks: 1.85 tall , have a red dark coat, hair black not too long
Rp example:cygnus run out from the laboratory were it was made, know he walks the city stealing and scaring people

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 3rd, 2005, 3:20 PM
Hehe, I'm joining as well.

Name: Nemo
Age: 16
Gender: male
Personality: Very serious
Programmed powers: Lava, fire, magma, ect...
Looks: I'll scan a picture of him to show ya'll
Rp example: Nemo was trying to find his twin brother, they had got out of the testing lab that they were being held in. He had blowen up the right wall so him and his brother (Neo) could get out. He found him under the wall he had blowen down, he was in bad shap so he toke him to a hotel near by. There he fixed him up. *end of example*

Name: Neo
Age: 13
Gender: male
Personality: Hes really hyper, like Chi.
Programmed powers: Ice, super cold water, snow, ect...
Looks: I'll scan a picture of him to show ya'll
Rp example: Do I really need to give two examples?

Midori Chi
May 3rd, 2005, 6:17 PM
lol! No (Raven) ..you don't have to give 2 examples! ^_^ Thank you EVERYONE SO much for joining! Hmm...So we're mentioning Chi in this rp, it seems...should I play as Chi?

May 3rd, 2005, 6:55 PM
yeah you should be chi, since you created the roleplay, and isnt lava and magma too exagerated for a persocom?

Zero ex
May 3rd, 2005, 7:26 PM
lol! No (Raven) ..you don't have to give 2 examples! ^_^ Thank you EVERYONE SO much for joining! Hmm...So we're mentioning Chi in this rp, it seems...should I play as Chi?

yea you should be chi, hey when does this roleplay will start it will be cool

Midori Chi
May 4th, 2005, 3:41 PM
..I say..now if you guys agree...So then..here's Chi's info!

Personality:sweet,cute as can be,unsure about the world,loving
Programmed powers:can turn off any persocom and contact any persocom even when the other has a guard program built in
Looks:look at my avatar! ^_^
Rp example:

Instead of this being an example..this is the start..to let you know.. ^_^

Chi opened her eyes. She looked out at the window with no curtains. "Hideki?" She looked around. "Must of gone to job...Need to go to Bakery.." She got out of bed and slipped off her oversized shirt,changing into her usual brown-ish sailor outfit. She then went to the streets. "Over here! He went into the allyway near the apartment on Tako street!" Ploice were appperantly chasing after a criminal.

May 4th, 2005, 7:10 PM
i have just arrive the city, i have being walking around watching how persocoms and people interact, i which i have a normal life, the thing is that i am not a normal persocom, i was not made for that, so what is my purpose?, what i am going to do know..

Zero ex
May 4th, 2005, 7:15 PM
I was running, escaping from the militar guys then i saw a persocom, of some 1.85 with my special program i can see that and i told to him, please help me, they are chasing me.... they want me so i can kill help me.

May 4th, 2005, 7:21 PM
i see his face and say; ok, since i have nothing to do, but it will cost you

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 4th, 2005, 7:59 PM
IC: Nemo was walking down the street with his lil twin brother, Neo. Neo sees a gray cloud in the sky "Whats that?" he askes his older brother. "Thats a rain cloud, it has water in it, or rain."...."What is rain?" Neo askes. Right when Nemo was about to tell Neo what rain was he saw Persocom begging another Persocom to help him. "We better go see whats going on." Nemo says to his lil borther.

Zero ex
May 4th, 2005, 8:05 PM
We must do something, they want me to kill do something, i dont want to kill! o no i got other people attention, wait they arent those mans they are other persons, as i saw up it started raining, and then the policeman screamed, there he is we must catch him, as i saw to the other way i saw other two persocoms and i telled to them please help me if they catch me they will make me kill, idont want to kill please...

May 4th, 2005, 8:10 PM
yeah i'll help, i will distract them while you run to the central park ,i see you there later, as i said that i told nemo and neo to help me distract the police man so kyoske can go..

Zero ex
May 4th, 2005, 8:16 PM
Okay... thanks, then i start running to the central park, as i were running i thought i dont now if i can trust them, but is better than nothing maybe they arent cops, or something, maybe they really want to help me, then i will wait in the central park.

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 4th, 2005, 8:18 PM
IC: Nemo said to Neo "Go with Kyoske (I beleave that was his name) and help him hid, while I help this guy distract the police men."...."But I don't want to leave you!"...."Just go, you'll be alright, trust me."....Neo runs off with the guy to help him hid.

May 4th, 2005, 8:30 PM
ok nemo, do we kick this people or we just dont let them pass?

Zero ex
May 5th, 2005, 8:00 AM
As i was running i saw a person or pesocom was behind me, and i thought o no more policeman, then as i saw it was a boy so i exclamed, hey can you help me?

Midori Chi
May 5th, 2005, 2:56 PM
ic: Chi saw...4 persocoms,is it? in the allyway. Chi stepped forward. "Maybe I can be of assistance.." She strted to glow a little.

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 5th, 2005, 4:00 PM
IC: Neo said to the guy "Yeah, I can help you hid, my house isen't to far from here.".....Nemo looked at Cygnus and said "Lets kick their buts!"

Zero ex
May 5th, 2005, 4:12 PM
Then i saw a persocom that was glowing and i tell to Neo look that persocom is glowing, so bright, lets go and see, maybe she is god and want to help me plese neo lets go to where that persocom is.

May 6th, 2005, 11:35 AM
haha thats it nemo, i kick the but of two policemen that were trying to punch me

Zero ex
May 6th, 2005, 11:47 AM
As Cygnus kicked the police, the police telled to both nemo and cygnus, go out of the way that Persocom have weapons, he could kill someone! O no! a kid is with him, that persocom will kill the other!! Then I start running to where the glowing persocom was ant i told to Neo, hey im filling strange, there is a voice in my head.

Midori Chi
May 6th, 2005, 12:42 PM
ic: Chi's expression turned into Freya. her voice changed. "Do not harm them...never hurt the innocent.." She said. Then she glowed at her fullest and has able to get rid of the thief. The theif started running...the police caught him,and they were off to sent him to jail. Chi stopped,turning back to herself. She looked over at the persocoms. "Are you alright?"

Sumomo & Kotoko
May 6th, 2005, 9:08 PM
OOC: I made Nemo and Neo as sprites.
*Nemo is the red one and Neo is the blue*

Midori Chi
May 7th, 2005, 12:39 PM
ooc: Cool! ^_^ ..Now rp,please! Umm..this is on page three...I'm figuring you just forgot..So..instead of double posting.I'm editing it..then,maybe you guys will remember!