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Dark Suicune
January 14th, 2004, 5:41 PM
Okay, so this exactly fan fiction. It is a poem I wrote a couple of days ago while I was supposed to be doing my homework.

Here it is! I hope you guys enjoy it!
*Please do not steal this!*

Colder Than Ice
By Dark Suicune aka Ookami Aku

I look into its intense crimson eyes,
Inside a frigid inferno lies,

Bright, blazing, and bold,
Yet cruel, calm and cold,

Freezing talons run down my back,
It is as though the creature will attack,

The thing's eyes are locked on me in a deathly gaze,
This is my very last day of days,

I squeeze my eyes shut in fear,
A warm creek flowing down my cheek, a tear

The North Wind cries a lonely howl,
How I long it to be a native fowl,

The chorus grows stronger,
I wish to be here, in this wretched place no longer!

Suddenly I see the beast spring,
Its fangs bared and its malicious snarl frightening,

A thousand burning daggers pierce my skin,
They sink in and out again and again,

Tearing at my flesh and ripping at my heart,
I can even feel my soul coming apart,

My heart is galloping in a wild frenzy through my rib cage,
This is worse than singing alone on a stage,

All of a sudden, the pain stops,
It is as serene as the proud, majestic mountain tops,

I open my eyes expecting to see a grass-filled field dotted with clover,
Instead, I see the snowy realm where I had fallen,
My life is not over!

The breeze whispers gently to me, its voice as light and sweet as cream,
"All is well. Twas only a dream."

On a distant knoll a misty figure looms,
As delicate and elegant as when a frail lilly blooms,

It catches my gaze!

I look into its intense crimson eyes,
Inside a frigid inferno lies,

Bright, blazing, and bold,
Yet cruel, calm and cold,

Colder than ice.....

Oh yes, if any of you havn't figured it out already, the "beast" is a Suicune.

Please comment! I'll really appriciate it!

January 14th, 2004, 7:11 PM
That was excellent! I really felt Suicune's essence. *reaches under him* Oh, it was an ice cube. But, really, it was a great poem!

Dark Suicune
January 14th, 2004, 7:32 PM
Yay! Someone commented!

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :D

February 16th, 2004, 2:48 PM
Nice poem!Awsome!Cool!:cool:
It's a nice piece...hope we see more poems from you!^_^

The King of Water Pokemon
February 17th, 2004, 12:14 PM
Nice. I like the choice of words and detail. Excellent, optime!

November 12th, 2004, 4:57 PM
sweet, i love it! No offense, but i think u might of got that from a poetry book, but, i have no proof. whatever. It rox anyway!