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May 31st, 2005, 1:35 PM
I wish my life would die
With the sunset
Sleeping while the tears flow
Until I pass the horizon's gates
I would save my last breath
For when the light falls
Upon my death
The moon would rise
Break me
Take me
Would you ever bury me
The blood will flow
Red nectar to leak from my vein
As you dance all around me
Sprung with life
With lies of pain
The shame
If I ever wake again
Will you still be there
After I meet my end
Will you still love me
Hurt me
Hate me
Leave me behind
In the shadows
Tell your lies
Keep all secrets
The shame
There is no sweet afterlife
To soothe my soul
Though I lie asleep here
I'm always awake inside
No longer can bear the shame
Or will you hide
Through my looking glass
That is the moon
I see you leaving
I smell it in the orchids
I see it in your eyes
I taste it in your blood
Break me
Take me
Hurt me
Hate me
Breaking our mutualism
Forever to live
And I forever to die
The shame
One last thing to whipser
before I die
Sorry for all your pain
Goodbye for good.

I wish....

June 1st, 2005, 1:18 PM
Aww! This poem is so sad! Its about heartbreak and saying goodbye, right? It's really sweet.. You are a good writer ^^;

June 1st, 2005, 5:39 PM
OMGoodness, I've always adored your writing style. <333 It's very morbid and graphic, but it's wonderful at the same time. <33 This poem makes one think of love, hate, and heartbreak. All of them both wonderful and dreadful aspects of life at times. X3

Wonderfully wonderful job! ^^ Keep it up. :33