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July 6th, 2005, 12:22 PM

On the planet Teotalcom, humans live happaly, all but a hand full....
who you might ask... why the Taltroks don't live happy lives...
why you ask... welll, it is becouse of their gifts, what gifts... WINGS....

Not all have the same wings... infact wings vary from person to person but there are very few of them... and the reson is... becouse the human's fear them... "they fear us becouse they balive we are evil." is what our lord tells us every night before he puts up the ward so that noone may enter our caves, "If you choose to make yourself feared you are no better than they are." he would always say in the morning when he brought us breakfast.
We love our lord and wish for him never to leave us but sadly...

He was taken from us... by none other than the humens who know him only as The Angel of Black Waters. They used to blame him for our births saying that he was always the father, this is untrue I am the only son he has ever spawned and even with that there is no way that I can save him on my own. My father has never abandoned us. When your parents left you becouse of your wings my father was the only one to take you in...

Join me as part of the Dark Angles, to save my father from sertain death, please help me....
If you don't then I don't know what I'll do with out my father....
fill this out to help me...

Wing type: (feathered, leather, or just make it up...)
Wepon: (remember this is a past time so no guns of any kind..)
can you fly?: (tell me if you can fly or if you need to be taught)
appearance: (tell me what you look like... or show me)


Name: Alan
Age: 18
Wing type: feathered
wepon: my father's sword.
Can I fly: Yes I can.
Appearance: the one standing next to my father in the pic at the top.

July 6th, 2005, 12:29 PM
name: Teresa
age: 14
wing type: feathers
weapon: hand gun, and sword
fly? yes
apperance: blonde hair, overly long t-shirt, and wings. thats pretty much it.

July 7th, 2005, 5:59 AM
OOC: KT your not allowed any guns???

Name:Jin Kazama
Age: 16
Wing type: Leather
Wepon: Sword and if possible laser on head
can you fly?: yes
appearance: topless, black trousers with fire on them long hair to neck

July 7th, 2005, 10:05 AM
Wing type: Feathered
Wepon: Sword
can you fly?: Need to be taught
appearance: http://www.animevisions.net/Pictures/angelsanc/angel1.jpg

July 7th, 2005, 11:43 AM
Kasanai Tsumi, change your wepon, like squall said there are no guns of any kind...
but your accepted otherwise.

Squall, you're accepted... hope you have fun. and ya you can have a laser on your head but it must be called a beam..

Golden_Deoxys... of course your accepted if you want me to see your pic.. you know were to find me...

July 7th, 2005, 12:57 PM
I can't wait for this to start ^^

July 7th, 2005, 1:03 PM
Alan stands on the cliff looking over the camp site... his father had been taken form him only the day before.... "I hope the guys get up here soon...." he says to himself ruffling his wings.

July 7th, 2005, 1:07 PM
The youngish looking woman walks towards the campsite, lightly colored hair blowing in the slight breeze. She seemed normal, unless one saw the wings, something one might consider a blessing. An angel, maybe, but one that could fly. Walking into the site, she stopped, looking around slowly. "The first one here? Hm...."

July 7th, 2005, 1:48 PM
Pllllllllllz not to late X|

Name: Saro
Age: 17 male
Wing type: Feathered
Wepon: Mace
can you fly?: Yep :3
appearance: http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/300W/images3.deviantart.com/i/2004/085/9/0/My_sunny_day.jpg

July 7th, 2005, 2:28 PM
OOC: Hope this isn't considered double posting and I haven't got accepted yet but...

A rather tired looking boy of 17 panted up to the campsite. To anyone, he looked perfectly normal, but if the cape from behind his back was removed, it would have been an entirely diffrent story. It would have been nicer if it wasn't on a cliff, but twas good exercise. He noticed a pretty girl there but was too shy and tired to say anything at the moment. He leaned against a tree to catch his breath.

July 7th, 2005, 2:42 PM
Her gaze drifted upwards to the skies, a song deep in her heart slowly came forth, a song of pure beauty.

Home is behind the world ahead
And there are many paths to tread
Through shadow to the edge of night
Until the starts are all alight
Mist and shadow, cloud and shape
Hope shall fade...All shall....

OOC: Yes, It's from Retrn of the King. I just had it in my head and wanted to post it ^^;;

July 8th, 2005, 3:17 AM
Jin walked up to the cliff. He looked like a devil with the beam on his head but Alan knew otherwise. He walked up to Serenity.
"Hi there that was a nice song" He said to her
"Where did you learn it from?" He asked agin

July 8th, 2005, 4:23 AM
"I....learned it from ancestors...upon scrolls it was written..."She looked to him, blinking. "But otherwise it is nothing....a song none the less...."

July 8th, 2005, 11:04 AM
The song sang by the girl was truly amazing. She had a wonderful talent. There was also another person up on the cliff. He finally decided to introduce himself. "That was a great song, even if it was just a song. Hi, my name is Saro. It's nice to meet you both." ^__^

July 8th, 2005, 12:58 PM
Alan looked down seeing three figures huddled together, he drops from his perch and spreads his white wings, feathers fell onto the three, "It was good of you to come... I didn't think that many would come to my father's aid."


he smiles as the wind ruffles his hair a bit... "My name's Alan."

July 8th, 2005, 1:03 PM
She looks to Alan and bows slightly, in respect and nods. "It is a pleasure to meet you....I am Serenity..." Turning slightly red, she looks away, wings flutering slightly.

July 8th, 2005, 1:17 PM
Alan smiles at Serenity, takes her right hand and kisses it.. "The pleasure is all mine." he looks her deep in the eyes.

He then turns to the others, "and you are?"

OOC: by the way KuraCottum you'r in.

July 9th, 2005, 7:16 AM
"The name's Jin Kazama" Jin said walking up to him boldly. He bowed in respect
"Sorry to hear of your fathers kidnapping and I swear i will do everything in my power to help get him back." He said bravely and then waited for everyone else to introduce them selves

July 9th, 2005, 10:18 AM
Saro bowed respectfully. "My name's Saro. It's an honour to help your father." As of right now, everyone seemed like a pretty resepectable group.

July 9th, 2005, 10:20 AM
"Serenity...." She went silent after her name, unknowing of what to sat next. Out of these, she was probably the only one unable to fly.

July 9th, 2005, 10:31 AM
After the greeting, Saro took off his cape and fluffed his wings. They were an inky black colour, but feathered. It was finally nice to be able to strech them out infront of others that wouldn't mock him.

July 9th, 2005, 11:39 AM
Alan smiles and bows to the others, "It is good to know that so many have come to my plea for help... I don't think I could do anything without you.." he falls silent, "but I fear that if we don't hurry we might be to late.... My father is segualed to be exicuted within a weeks time.."

July 9th, 2005, 11:50 AM
he looks to Alan and rests a hand upon his shoulder. "Do not worry my friend....I know we can save your father....have faith....."

July 9th, 2005, 11:59 AM
"we shall go now to save your father who once saved us form the humans." Jin said walking up to him and serenity. Bowing again Jin leapt up and started hovering. He saw serenity looking sad.

July 9th, 2005, 12:07 PM
"Well then, I agree with Jin. We should make haste....but where would we exactly find him?" He didn't begin to fly yet, he could fly, but that would be wasting to much energy. His wings we're that strong to carry him very far.

July 9th, 2005, 12:13 PM
Serenity blinked, watching them. They just had to bring up flying....they just had to.. She gently took hold onf one of her own wings and stored it, fighting back tears. She lowered her head. "You...You all go ahead......"

July 9th, 2005, 12:13 PM
"No need to be sad young one..." Alan says smiling.. "I'll teach you to fly..."

He looks up at the sky and closes his eyes.. the wind blows his hair and the morning sun shines off his face, "I bet you're a quick learner."


July 9th, 2005, 12:16 PM
"I....I don't know.....it took me many years to just lean simple tasks....." She sighs, letting go of the wing. "Maybe I shouldn't have come....I do not want to hold anyone back....."

July 9th, 2005, 12:22 PM
Saro blinked. "well I won't leave until you can get off the ground. I'm sure he can teach you to fly." He remembered how he used to have difficulties flying and symathised with her. He folded his wings and leaned against a tree, watching Alan teach her to fly.

July 9th, 2005, 12:35 PM
"You won't slow anyone down... " he grabs her in his arms, "I'll teach you miself."
he picks her up, "first you must know how it feels."

July 9th, 2005, 12:47 PM
She nods but shivers, even feeling safe she is afraid. "I...I can trust you....."

July 10th, 2005, 2:54 AM
"Come on Serenity you can do it" Jin called encouraging her to fly.
"Master alan shall I go on ahead?" He said to Alan flapping his wings ready to fly.
"I can clear a path if you like" He said pulling his sword out and rubbing the red beam on his head

July 10th, 2005, 6:10 PM
alan shook his head.. "no this is her jerney noone elses." he flaps his wings and takes to the air... every mucle reacted and he flew over a hundered feet. "Trust me." he whispers in her ear before he let her go.

July 10th, 2005, 6:14 PM
Serenity nodded as Alan spoke those words then let go. Falling....falling....please....trust.....NOW!! Her wings spread quickly, catching her fall. They flapped gently as she looked up to Alan, smiling.

July 10th, 2005, 6:16 PM
Alan nods and flies past her encuriging her to fallow.

July 10th, 2005, 6:18 PM
She nods and follows, catching up after a bit. "I...thank you very much...Alan....if...I may call you that....."

July 10th, 2005, 6:25 PM
"Of course you may." he says smiling.
he leads her around the mountain once before landing with the others.

July 10th, 2005, 6:38 PM
She lands alongside Alan and smiles as her wings flutter slightly. She turns to Alan, touching his arm. "Thank you....."

July 10th, 2005, 6:42 PM
"It was nothing" he says bowing.. "I didn't really expect anyone but myself to know how."

July 10th, 2005, 6:46 PM
"...Is there anything...I could do to help you?" She tilts her head, showing curiosity and a small hint of love.

July 10th, 2005, 7:24 PM
Alan smiles and bows to her, "The best thing we can do now is sleep. We head for the castle tomarrow." He starts to turn and Serenity surprises him with a kiss on the cheek.

July 10th, 2005, 7:28 PM
"Alan...I justwant to ask if I could sleep near you. I just believe that...well....maybe it'd be a good idea..." Serenity smiles and nods.

July 10th, 2005, 7:30 PM
Alan smiles and looks toward the setting sun, "Well there are dangers so.. Sure if that's what you want."

July 12th, 2005, 7:58 AM
Jin wakes up during the night hearing things. He sees people with flaming torches coming up.
"What the hell!?" He says walking a bit further forward to get a good look there were humans heading up the mounting with flaming torches.
"ALAN SERENITY GET UP WE ARE BEING ATTACKED!" He shook them both wildly.
he took out his sword and rubbed his beam. Smirking he said in a voice of darkness
"PETTY FOOLS SHALL NOT SURVIVE THE DEVIL" blasting a beam at the humans and then at everything going out of control

July 13th, 2005, 1:05 PM
Alan takles him down... "Stop... we don't have to fight... wake everyone up.. we have to get out of here." Alan says standing up.. "If we fight we are no better than they are.

July 14th, 2005, 10:33 AM
Jin was in a rampage he couldnt stop and it was hurting him.
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" He shot another beam. He fell to the ground losing consiousness.

July 14th, 2005, 2:41 PM
Alan picks him up and yells to the others, "Lets get out of here!" he heads for the other side of the mountain.

July 14th, 2005, 2:43 PM
"Right! You want me to fly ahead and make sure nothing is in the way?"She looks to Alan as her wings flutter.

July 14th, 2005, 2:52 PM
"No serenity.. It could be dangeruse.. the best thing now is to stay together."
Alan helps the others up.