View Full Version : Father of Ash

July 10th, 2005, 10:21 AM
Author's Note: Okay maybe i'm not the best speller, the best writer, the best anything but i'm giving this a try. It's really hard to come up with words on how to describe certain feelings and places for me. Oh yeah, Daren is Ash's father's name. I just made the name up so, don't ask questions 0.o But yeah...here:


The world of Pokemon is vast and packed with hundreds of creatures of different types and environments. Thus to research them, they need to be caught. Pokemon trainers are people who catch Pokemon and battle each other for sport while making special bonds with their Pokemon on each of their vigorous journey's throughout the lands of Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn. A famous trainer you may know by the name of Ash is on his way to becoming a Pokemon Master, but we never knew his Father. The history of his Father will be told and someday maybe Ash's ear's will catch word.

Two boys stood outside of a small house in Pallet Town making their goodbyes, one of them was going to be a pokemon trainer and was leaving today. "Brother, where are you going?" Daren asked.

"Sorry little bro, i'm going to be away for the next couple of years pretty far from here."

"But I don't want you to leave, who will play with me?" Daren pouted.

"Maybe our neighbors, Daren. If Dad was here he would play with you, but he's out there like I am going to be training and fighting to become a Pokemon Master."

"But...will we ever see each other again?"

Daren's brother rubbed his head trying to think of something to say. "When you're 11, let me know. That would give you one whole year to hone your skills after you become a pokemon trainer. We'll meet up with our Pokemon and have an adventure, the two of us, okay? I promise." Daren and his brother hugged eachother tightly finalizing that this moment would be the last time they would see each other face to face. His Mom couldn't bear to see him leave, staying in the house. She opened the curtains to see her sons. One day she knew that eventually both of them were gonna be gone and she would be alone. "Take care of Mom for me, don't make her cry. Tell her I love her and that i'll find Dad." They released each other from their arms. He put on a smile and began his walk on the dirt road turning his back to Pallet town. Daren shouted at the top of his lungs, "Don't forget your promise!"

She closed the curtains and sat on the couch. Daren watched him walk away and let the moment sink in. His mom was sniffiling(sp?) and trying to dry her tears up with her apron. She went to the kitchen and started started pulling out food, pots and all sorts of stuff to cook dinner. His Mom began cooking tofu(sp?) while he came inside and sat at the dinner table staring at the empty chair thinking about how his brother was doing already. "Mom..."

"Yes, son?" she turned around with her head cocked with a quizical expression.

"I'm going to become a Pokemon Master." Daren said in all seriousness.

Five years later in the same town Daren had turned ten.

July 11th, 2005, 4:11 PM
Well, it a good start. Your spelling wasn't that bad and your a pretty good writer. Its cool someones doing a story about ash's dad. Mine just wasn't worth poting. Please continue.

July 11th, 2005, 7:52 PM
Cool! I like it, can't wait for more. To make sure your words are spelled correctly. Try Microsoft Word. White_Winter_Wolf, you know your stories are good. Don't say that! Daren... so random... his son is named Ash.

July 12th, 2005, 1:40 PM
Yes, it makes me wonder.. Did Daren ever complete his training? Did Daren's brother leave him, so Daren left his family?

I guess this will be somehow, told within the story, and anuway, nice start. Go on. Please :)