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Crystal Walrus
August 27th, 2005, 12:00 PM
hi ive made a sprite comic now after i read every 1 elses I though i should try

Chapter 1 part 1 (http://img320.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mycomic7nw.png)
Chapter 1 part 2 (http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mycomicpart27mv.png)

If you have some small and a full trainer sprites i will let you be in my comic
if you dont hav sprites il take 2 requests for trainers at a time

August 27th, 2005, 12:44 PM
Wow I'm guessing it took like 5 minutes to make both of them? Your story is the most cliche plot I've ever seen. I mean what's the point? What's the story? Generic pokemon guy goes and a pokemon journey? How many times has that been used? You didn't even "Have the time" to make speech bubbles, OR cut the map so it isn't the hugest panel on the freaking strip. I mean, you didn't even put any effort into your OWN sprites. This comic fails. 1/10

Forest Grovyle
August 27th, 2005, 2:22 PM
Thread closed on the thread creator's request.