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December 2nd, 2005, 12:11 PM
*pokes head in* Hey yall! How you all doing in the poetry world? Well, I found this buried in the middle of a pile of stuff, and I decided to post it. It doesn't exactly rhyme, but I still consider it poetry. Also, you may be seeing my poetry thread come back soon *cough cough* So keep your eyes open for that ^^

Dearly Beloved

Dearly Beloved,
I think I let you down again.
And nothing’s going to change what I did...
And you're so close...but then again so far away...
We're separated by an invisible glass frame.
Have you even acknowledged my existence in this world?
Because I'm screaming out your name, screaming unheard.
Have you ever stopped and thought there was someone on the outside?
Someone who is bleeding for you, wandering hopeless every single night?
Because I'm lying here and these bloody Tears of Misery never seem to end.
They keep falling and falling into a Pool of Dread;
but it's all coming back to me,
and I think I'm back in the Depth of Reality.
I love you.
I'm not afraid to say that now.
The words were once meaningless, dead and grey.
And I never loved anyone until this very day.
But you changed that, you showed me the light.
Light which I thought I would never see for the rest of my dull pathetic life.
No, I wouldn't go back if I had that one chance.
But if I could, I would break this wall of glass...
Because I'm reaching to you, only to fall into an Ocean of Confusion...
And I'm blinded by nothing, ceased with delusion...
But who am I to cower in fear?
No, these are the last of my falling tears.
So now my Love, this is the end...
Goodnight for now, until we meet again…

Tell me what you guys think.


December 2nd, 2005, 12:46 PM
Pretty darn good Eli. I like it a lot. XD I never saw your old poetry thread, but judging from this...you should definately bring your thread back. I look forward to more. XD

Sumomo & Kotoko
December 2nd, 2005, 2:19 PM
Yayay, I like the poem, tis is very well writen.:D

I would like to see more of your poems.

*claps for Eliana*

December 4th, 2005, 7:06 AM
Thanks people! ^_^ It will indeed come back soon, after my little writer's block XD

December 4th, 2005, 10:29 AM
The poem is really great,I hope I will see more from u.Oh yeah...GREEN DAY ROCKS!

code zerro the deluge
December 4th, 2005, 10:36 AM
i like it a lot it is cool
keep it up