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Captain Jack Sparrow
December 5th, 2005, 10:08 AM
Hello, this is the thread called Scip's Poetry. Here, you can post your own poems, or you can ask me to write poems about certain things. Here's one that I've already written:
Dreaming of the stars on high
that speak to me in secret sighs
drifting on a breeze
only I can feel and hear

Could it be the sacred wind
that's calling me to now begin
to walk into the dark
carrying the light of tomorrow

Beating of the wings up high
beyond the earth
beyond the sky
Come on, don't hesitate,
morning sky watching over
the world

So, what does everyone think? If you like it, please post and say if you do or don't, and if you don't, you could tell me what I could change. Also, here's an attraction: tell me something, like a category, like a wedding or anniversary, and I'll write a poem about it! :D