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December 16th, 2005, 8:22 PM
Sprinting quickly and quietly through the town, a young thief was trying to escape
the village before anyone awoke. Making to the edge of the village he released a
Dragonair, hoped on it back and flew off.

That was the theifs first incident with thieft. Now add three years to it and he is
the top theif in Team Magma. This was the story of Randall, also known as Spike.
He was the best theif Magma has ever had, but they lost him when his concience
hit. Now he and 4 other ex-thieves live in a small town know as Ravnica where
they try to right their wrongs by stopping thieves. They were called the Redemors.
The Redemors were leaving to go a town over when a bunch of pokemon were stole.
Now tell me, 5 ex-theives leaving town and a binch of pokemo go missing. Geuss
who gets blamed? The Redemors!

Its been a week and no evidence point to the Redemors so they are forced to
release them. Now they have to figure out how to earn back the trust of the town,
keep a low profile, and dont do anything stupid around the police.



Name: Spike
Age 17
Gender: male
Home Region: Johto
Description: http://www.flavor-red.com/men/zero.jpg
Personality: Randall is quiet, he keeps to himself most of the time, but if the matter upsets him, he pipes in and most of the time he isn't very polite about it.
Pokmon: Umbreon, Espeon, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, and Dragonair
History: Randall grew up in New Bark Town. When he was 10, Prof. Elm gave him an Eevee. He loved his Eevee so much he didn't want it to evolve. So he searched and searched for another Eevee. It went from there. He became an Eevee trainer now owning many Eevee and thier evolved forms.
Other: Randall holds a pokegear with other various items he has.

December 16th, 2005, 9:01 PM
Of corse I will join.

Name: Terra

Age: 17

Gender: female

Personality: Shy, mysterious, she doesn't like to talk much but if it upsets her she will reply and she won't be nice about it either.

Home Region: Kanto (It rocks)

Pokemon: Rapidash, Dragonair, Gyarados, Houdoom, Arcanine, and Sneasel

Apperence: regular brown hair, broen eyes, she wears the Team Aqua girl Admin outfit except it's all black, and she has a sapphire jem hanging around her neck.

History: People mistreated her when she was young, so she decided to join Team Aqua and became an Admin then an Elite. She quit when she was meditating one night and while meditating her concience kicked in hard.

Other: Terra is psychic.

RP Sample: Do I really need one?

December 17th, 2005, 9:27 AM
No you dont need one. Only three spots left.

December 17th, 2005, 1:52 PM
Name: Ravana

Age: Seventeen

Gender: Female

Personatily: Ravana tends to keep to herself and often appears to others as emotionless. Unless she senses danger in the proximity or the team is under attack, she will react as the others would. Usually Ravana is relied on to keep a straight face in dangerous situations. Infatuation, sympathy, and care barely cross her mind at all.

Home Region: The Hoenn Region.

Pokemon: Houndoom, Sneasel, Absol, Mightyena, Tyranitar, Quiliva.

Appearance: Her hair is a light, misty auburn with it tied in the back of her head with a braid-like piece of fabric that is a little darker than her hair. A frilly, collar-like cloth is around her neck which is attatched to the front of her all-out frilly, gothic, 1800's black dress (that frills in layers near the bottom). The back of the dress starts a bit below the shoulder blades and has a tie down to the waist area (which starts the frill layers). To match the dress, Ravana wears black arm-gloves with leather on the backs and fronts and netting on the sides (that stop at the back of her hand and palm). The dress at about halfway down after her knees and is then followed up by (very)long black boots with the same kind of netting as her arm-gloves, which have (reachable) pockets in them for storing weapons. ( The girl in this picture (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v228/Aerith7/rosepetals.jpg) )

History: Up until age ten, Ravana's life was happy and peaceful. But, at that fateful decade year, both of her parents were captured and killed by Team Aqua. Once she saw that Team Aqua had a rivalry with Team Magma, she made it her set life's goal to join up with Team Magma to take down Team Aqua for stealing and killing her parents. After five faithful years to the theif team (she joined as a low rank when she was twelve), it finally dawned to her that what she was doing wasn't the right thing. Stealing to steal back revenge was even lower than what Team Aqua had done to her. After becoming a rouge Team Magma member, Ravana joined with four other rouge theives to indirectly take down the team that she had tried to take down, along with some Team Magma members she had known before she quit. Though, this job is beginning to slow down her dream and now she begins to regret quitting the Magma team.

Rp Sample: The door remained shut in the small hut that the five of them shared. It was a good thing too, because the air outside was bitterly cold from the breeze and season. A sigh emitted from her throat as she placed her back against the wall of the hut and then slid down to a sitting position. Ever since she had quit Team Magma, everything slowed down for her. She was used to the upbeat life of crime, and since she quit, there was basically nothing left to keep all of them occupied. And as the saying goes: 'Idle Hands are the Devil's Plaything.'

"With the rate of slowness there has been, and the lack of trust from the townsfolk..I begin to regret ever quitting the team..."

After realizing what she had said, Ravana turned her head to the side and placed her hands on her knees, and then her head on her hands. She sighed once again, knowing that the thought of rejoining the Team may cross her mind again unwillingly.

"And speaking of the team..where are the others?" she wondered.

Other: Like I said, Ravana is usually emotionless. But when she is angered or prevoked, she can release emotions she didn't know she had (In the heat of battle, crushes, anger, stress, etc.)

December 17th, 2005, 4:11 PM
Accepted!!! 2 more slots only!

Utter Disaster
December 17th, 2005, 4:23 PM
Name: Ranson
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Personality: Ranson is very cautious wherever he goes. Yet, he can be a little reckless, and that get's him in trouble.
Home Region: Hoenn
Pokemon: Absol, Mawile, Swampert, Furret, Flygon
Appearance: brown spiked hair, blue eyes, red folded bandana, white shirt, camo jeans, white shoes, black wristbands
RP Sample:
It was dark and foggy near Route 120 on Monday night. It was so foggy you couldn't see anything around you, not even your finger if put it close to your eye. This was obviously trouble for drivers.

A girl in a pick-up truck was driving along the road in an area near 120. Her name was Joan. She was just coming back from an inaugeration for a School Council. The road was bumpy and uncomfortable to drive on, but it was the quickest way back home. Shortcuts have always helped Joan out, usually in tough situations. She decided to take this route so she could just go home and rest. It was a long day, and boy she needed the rest.

As she continued on the road a slight fog started to roll in. Joan was getting worried but she continued on. The fog started getting thicker and thicker as Joan drove on. It was very thick, but Joan was just able to see the road. Fortree wasn't two far now. With a mile more to go, the fog completely surrounded the truck blocking the front view. Joan was very freaked out now. She stopped the truck and got out.

Everything was covered in a dense fog. Not even a shadow was seen. The a light came from behind Joan. She turned her head towards the light and there were actually two lights coming towards her. It must have been another car! Joan felt a bit more confortable now. As the car came closer, it didn't seem to be slowing down. Joan looked at her truck; she turned it off, so the car wouldn't be able to see it. Joan didn't know what to do now. She jumped in front of her car and began waving her arms and screaming for the car to stop, but it was no use. The car was too close.

It must have been ten feet away when Joan leaped to her left to avoid the collision, yet she didn't know where she jumped. She found herself rolling down a steep hill. She went faster and faster hitting sharp rocks on the way. As she rolled down the hill she heard the crash of the cars and what she thought was fire. She rolled for at least two minutes and at least 65 miles per hour, then she hit the ground.

The first thing she felt was a sharp pain in her arm since that's where she landed. An object landed right next to her head, It was a piece of the roof of her truck. She lay there for a few minutes before she had enough strength to move. A sharp pain came in her arm again. She looked at it. Her arm was completely motionless. It must have been broken. Joan looked around her. It was still very foggy and cold, and her sweater got torn on one of the rocks. It was her worst nightmare come true. She was all alone..and useless.

Other: Ranson used to be a League Champion and an Aqua Admin.

December 17th, 2005, 7:46 PM
((Long time no see eh Randall? I sorta left after my comp died, and now I'm back! In two RP's only. Hurrah for you, this is going to be one of them. *school must die*))

NAME:Rue Ichiro
POKEMON:Glalie, Feraligatr, Metagross, Skarmory, Gyrados, and Cloyster
APPERANCE:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v243/Kaiyoseila/ruejoy.png (Darker haired one.) She wears a black mask with a red streak across the middle whenever she's not in a hideout or a base.
PERSONALITY:Rue is serious, collected, sly, mysterious, and resourceful. She is more often speaking her mind, and nothing else. She is very bold, yet she has an issue with too much talking, therefore is labeled a quiet and thoughtful girl, because she’s almost always in thought, thinking of possibilities and could-be’s. But even though this all is true, she is easily set off, and her temper can rise to the breaking point in a heartbeat.
HISTORY:Rue was born and raised in Goldenrod city, being ignored by her parents and a great theif for Neo team rocket at one point in her life and Team Aqua at another. She is extremely sneaky and has a talent for lying, pick-pocketing, decieving, and making big thefts. She always wore black gloves she got from the mask of ice whenever she stole things, and she still wears them today. When she leaves the security of a hideout or headquarter, she's always wearing a mask that covers her nose and mouth, thus not many people know what her complete face looks like. Being a theif she doesn't trust easily, and doesn't even completely trust her fellow Redemors.
RP SAMPLE: Hmm...do you still need an RP sample from me? It's been so long. It'll be up to you. Your call, I'll check back for your answer. (I can't be here tomorrow, sorry!)

December 18th, 2005, 2:55 PM
Naoko, accepted. Utter Disaster, last time I RPed with you you posted 3 time within 3 pages. SOrry but I want someone who post more. 1 spot left.

Ebil Slowpoke
January 15th, 2006, 8:42 PM
This is just team X with a different name aint it?

January 15th, 2006, 9:25 PM
Duh. thats why is hasn't been posted in, in over 4 weeks.

January 15th, 2006, 9:46 PM
OOC: -.- are we still going to wait for one more person?

January 16th, 2006, 10:10 AM
{{ I'd advise against that. Maybe we should just start and wait for that one more person to join in afterwards. Atleast we'd have something to do until then.. }}

January 16th, 2006, 11:26 AM
I got in trouble for reviving Team X. Thats why I didn't start it.

January 17th, 2006, 2:24 AM
Name: Leo

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Personality: Understanding,Mysterious. He Is A Big Softy Even If He Dosen't Know You If You're In Danger He Will Help.

Hometown: Pallet Toen In The Kanto Region

Pokemon: Charizard,Squirtle,Ivysaur,Gengar,Pidgeot And Pikachu

Appearance: http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/300W/fs6.deviantart.com/i/2005/090/a/0/Squall_____Or_was_it_Leon__by_summer_maxwell.jpg

History: He Is One Of The 3 Sons Of Ash Who Is Hiding Behind The Name Of Harry Since Leo Was 5 He Got Picked On At School But That All Changed One Day He Found His Secret Power Of Psychic But That Led Him To One Question "Are All My Brothers Psychic Like Me But How?" One Day He Found Out That His Mother Is Psychic It Was Passed Down To Her 3Sons Camo,Himself And His Other Brother Making Leo Begin His Pokemon Journey At 11 To Find His Destiny But Nowadays He Is A Pokemon Master His New Question Is "What Is My Destiny?"

Other: Leo Is Psychic

January 21st, 2006, 8:41 AM
{{ That's one more..So..Can we start? =7 }}

January 21st, 2006, 3:52 PM
Hello, did you not get the concept of I got in trouble for Team X and this is just a remake? I will make a new RP with less of Team X in it later. But I'm not starting it/

January 22nd, 2006, 6:50 AM
{{ -_-;; Okay then..Just tell me when you make the RP.. }}

January 23rd, 2006, 5:53 PM
Ok, I promise I will!!! Not sure when I am making it.