View Full Version : Maki...enter the pokeball

January 6th, 2006, 6:43 PM
It was a regular day when..."BEEP,BEEP"''AHHH! Im up, im up!''Maki said."yawn""Hmmm
Whats that noi...""caterpie!!!"catrpie interupted."aaggghhh! A...a BUG!!!,Kill it dad."
Son,dont be like your aunt Misty."Dad said. "Oh,my freind said he got a pokemon for me!"Maki said. He rushed to route 1000. "... What!!! I have to get my own pokemon!"
Maki complained."Um,I said Id give... is that a Caterpie? Maki's freind lavan said.
Soon the Caterpie followed Maki everywhere he went."Huff" Alright ...your mine!
Maki said challenedly. He threw 1 rock at it and caght it.

January 6th, 2006, 7:08 PM
Ummm... It was interesting, but I think it was to short and plotless to be a fic...

January 6th, 2006, 7:34 PM
Read the rules to get help for your fanfiction. Technically, I wouldn't know if it even qualifies for a fanfiction due to the conspicuous absense of line breaks...

Anyway, you should go check it out.

January 6th, 2006, 7:44 PM
*reports to Niko*

Don't spam again.

oni flygon
January 6th, 2006, 8:12 PM
Eh... put some effort into your work next time... and read those threads in the writer's lounge. They'll help you.