View Full Version : Living Lies (This is my first poem so I hope it's okay.)

Let's Fighting Love
January 9th, 2006, 7:47 PM
I live in a pool of lies.
The unique thing of this pool is that it never ends.
As I swim deeper I know I can never make it back to the surface.
I still hop a bottom comes soon.

Then I can rest in full peace knowing, I there is an end to the deception called my words.
Now the lies have spread like a virus and there is only one hope.
I must stop them all.

I must start telling the truth unless I am willing to go into the fiery evils.
I know the reason why all this has happened,
because I am never willing to accept how depressing my life is.
My savior Jesus Christ knows I wish to live happily,
but how is that possible in a world only I know......

A world of Living Lies.

Lady Akita
January 15th, 2006, 8:15 PM
I see your devout christianity has helped you in your writing. ^~ There's nothing not okay about it. I don't like to criticize poems, because they are usually coming from a deeper point of view from the poet. And then, your poem is nice. Keep up the good work.