View Full Version : Villians on this Earth

April 27th, 2006, 12:35 PM
I know it kinda sucks but I aint a poet. So dont expect anything worth publishing.

There are many villians on this earth
who try to belittle what you are worth
the vary in many ways great and small
and I have not the time to list them all
so I will say just a few
so simply to get a brief message across to you
4kids is a villian, there is no doubt
everytime I think of what they did to one piece, I want to shout
the hypocrit's villain, this you cannot deny,
they tell you what to do but it is nothing more than lie
the media is a villian, I think the left is too
but unofortunatly, there is nothing much for me to do
because there are so many villians which torment me
that the human eye cannot see
but I do my best, to ignore their lies
to make their words as insicnificane as houseflies
I still face villians every day on this earth
who try to belittle what I am worth
but try as they will, they will not move me
because there is something else that I see
an angel on my shoulder, who chases the villians away
and helps restore me to a peaceful day.

April 28th, 2006, 5:27 AM
your poem sounds a bit harsh....kinda mean emotion...but still quite nice...it just not that organized...but like you said, your not a poet so...its a okey-dokey poem!

April 28th, 2006, 8:07 AM
Well, like I said, I am not nor was I aiming to be a Shakesphere(or whatever his name was) I just felt like doing something. May Ill do another soon.

April 28th, 2006, 4:05 PM
Hehe I agree with phantom_of_death. I like some of the parts in their it has good rhythm. ^_^ Its actually good even if your not a poet.

April 30th, 2006, 12:49 PM
Pretty good considering u aint a poet!