View Full Version : Poems for the Loveless.....O_O?

May 18th, 2006, 5:44 AM

I Miss You

I tried to put my attention
On the beautiful world that you left
But my heart still screams your name
And weakens my soul

My life has never been dull
Since the day you left
Now I’m just simply wishing
For a day with you

Every bit of happiness in me
Left me and went with you
I only have the pouring rain
To hide my sadness

Sometimes I want to cry
But since you took everything
All I know is missing you
For every single moment of my life

Raining Sadness

I’ve come to the end of my road
Knowing I just came back to the start
Everything comes back to me
Everything…from my heart

I stand here on a raining road
My whole body soaked in sadness
But as I stand here all alone,
Your image comes back….

As my love for you has grown,
My spirit weakens
I really didn’t want you to go
I just want you by my side

But as the days go by
Even if I have met different people
All whom, have tried their best
But still, you are the one I love

Now as my world disappears,
My love still grows strong
No matter how long I stare at an empty room
I can still care for a person like you

But I keep asking myself
Why do I even bother?
Why do I even care?
To think and love a person like you

so? is it good?

May 23rd, 2006, 3:32 PM
Yes, I like them both. I never could had image u as a poet, I was wrong! CoOl . . . Keep up the good work

May 25th, 2006, 5:02 PM
they were pretty good. i didnt like the way they flowed in a couple of places. but overall i think the poetry was good. and your style is decent.

May 27th, 2006, 7:22 PM
Those are two great poems. ^_^ Good Job.

May 27th, 2006, 7:46 PM
and i though this thread was dead......O_O! thanks guys!