View Full Version : The Vaati Dex

June 18th, 2006, 2:05 PM
Some of you may remember my old comic, pokemon Egon. Well anyways, what some of you won't know is that I planned to make a pokedex to go with it. So far I have four pokemon, all from scratch. I have 3 out of 4 shineys done. Comments are more than appreciated.


And for all those who aprove and enjoy this project, please, spread the word.

(The code for the button is: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v217/matt-crowe/supbut.png)

June 18th, 2006, 2:25 PM
Nice work, Vaati. The gorrilla is very nice, my favorite, but, it's head is odd. If you take off a little bit on the right side of it's head. it'll be good, but, if you add an ear, it would be better with an ear shape.

1st: 8/10
2nd: 9/10
3rd: 7/10 It looks too 2-D.
4th: 9.4/10

June 18th, 2006, 2:33 PM
I personally dislike the 3rd one myself, it was pretty rushed. And the first one was my first ever fake. But I agree with everything you're saying.

June 18th, 2006, 2:38 PM
Ahh...another FakeDex project. I always enjoy checking out new FakeDexes. I love the style you used on them. They could definately use some work in a number of areas, mainly shading. Although the shading on the Cosape is really good. Overall, I like these a lot!! As always, good work man. Keep it up. XD

June 18th, 2006, 2:57 PM
I'm only really satisfied with the shading on Karshorn and Cosape, I don't mind the shading on Whyorn, as he's my favorite (due to being my first)

June 18th, 2006, 3:10 PM
Those two were the ones I thought were done the best as well. That's funny though. Corcyro was my first scratch and he's still my favorite. XD It's like a sentimental thing, I guess.

June 18th, 2006, 5:02 PM
Vaati, you had done a nice work, some of the best scratches i've seen.

Still, in some parts the shading is kind of... "annoying", if you do get my point.

Now i just want to know the types...

June 19th, 2006, 3:44 PM
The VD on the button could be mistaken as Viral disease i would be careful real nice though.

June 20th, 2006, 8:17 PM
That was total spam Valdorath
Also, Vaati. I love your scratches, the shading is done well( or atleast to what I can do)

June 20th, 2006, 10:39 PM
Hyperion: He was referring to the work. But it would help if he had gone more indepth in his commenting.

June 20th, 2006, 10:44 PM
wow. i like the ape thing, Cosape. just like king-kong, except littler. nice work on all of them, better than anything i could do, lol. keep up the good work, and make up other neat pokemon too-;)

June 22nd, 2006, 7:59 AM
Thank you all =D

By the way, I updated Ornimar a little, he now has unfolding wings/fins.


Shadow Wolf 2
June 24th, 2006, 10:09 AM
I personally dislike the 3rd one myself, it was pretty rushed. And the first one was my first ever fake. But I agree with everything you're saying.
I think that that's some nice shading there Vaati!
I only think your lineart could be somewhat smoother.

June 25th, 2006, 5:47 AM
Alas, lineart has always being my weakest point -_-

Thank you for the comment though ^^

Rena Ryuugu
June 25th, 2006, 5:51 AM
Really good... The shading is a bit annoying... But that's all I see that could get in the way. Keep up the good work!