View Full Version : KW's Altaria, Feebas, Swablu, Ledian, & Missingno.

August 8th, 2006, 3:45 PM
I made some more pictures; please comment~ I know they're not the best...










August 8th, 2006, 11:51 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...... i think you did well on these, i really love the vibrant colours you use, and the fact you have colourd lineart! its love <3!

altaria looks so good there, but the crests seem a little out of perspective to me. and that bg has such a sence of tme and space, its beautiful, and adds to the apprent beauty of altaria in itself. its almost like a beauty concept! <3!!!!!
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e262/Mazilwolf/feebasfin.jpgFeebas's fin *on top* looks a little odd and out of perspective with the rest of it, but he fin and the mouth on a feebas always seems sad.i cant really explain, but i tried to illustrate quickly what i meant in that picture, just nip the bottom off...i think......
i dunno, maybe you were thinking out side the box and made it happy! <3^^!!!
(KW, this thread is making me HIGH!)
and once again, you made a good underwater feel. maybe next time put thelittle refections and light rays coming through the water? just a suggestion as i hope to be seeing more from you!
swablu its just so right! i cant really seem to criticise it X3! except the bottom of the beak seems too far in...anyways: kudos on that! its cuteness! 'specially the eye! *squee*
i never really looked at a leadian before... but the head seems a funny shape, but i dont know enough to acctually critizise, so i wont.
oooooooooh, MAN missingno! that thing was love! xD the way you protrayed it, and with that bg, it makes me chuckle! well done!

i just want to suggest something for next time: maybe add some shading, and put some neat little details into the bg's? i really think you could go somewhere with these!

looking forwrd to seeing more soon (man, this is an essay and a half ¬¬')

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
August 9th, 2006, 5:00 AM
wow, these are good.

Altaria: The backround is good, BUt I can
see it was spray canned. The head and the wings
have very good detail, but maybe the tail could
use a lighter shading.

Feebas: a nice shade of blue
for the backround, and its good
because it dose look like its swimming down
at a slant. Nice good on the colors too.

Swablu: The backround is
just random green, it dosen't
have much of a senery, but a nice shade of
green. Its wings have a very good shade of
white, and so does the blue on the body.

Ledian: It seems to be in a cave,
with changing colors.
Its head is a little deformed, but I can't
coplain. And the darker shadings are great.

Missingno: the backround perfectly
suits missingno, with good colors of green.
And Missingno looks nice 3-D. (Good shade of
green too)

Overall (added score): 45.59/50

August 9th, 2006, 7:48 AM
I really like the Feebas! ^-^ I think that one's my favorite. It's at an odd angle, but it really seems to work. The fin doesn't look deformed to me, it just looks like the force of swimming through water is pushing it down a little. The Altaria is all right, though I agree w/mazilwolf about the crests. The Swablu is cute! It's beak looks a little too flat though, I would imagine it protrudes a bit more. The Ledian does look a little funny though. Mostly, as ~Enu~ said, it's the head. I think you just drew it at a strange angle and it ended up a bit squished.

Nice colors though, and the backgrounds are good. Good job!

August 9th, 2006, 3:06 PM
mazilwolf: What crests (I feel so stupid)? I'm glad you like the Altaria.
I agree that the fin on the Feebas looks a little off, but for the most part, it's just because Feebas is swimming to the water, causing the fin to be pushed back/down.
As for Swablu's beak... I really am not much for drawing bird Pokemon, so they just turn out how I doodle them.
I thought the Missingno. looked okay, but I was worried that someone would think it was too blurry.
~Enu~: Altaria's background wasn't spay-canned, it had a layer of foil added to it.
On the Feebas... That's exactly what I was aiming for!
I couldn't figure out what to make for the background, so I experimented and this was the better of the lot.
YAY! Shading was one of my main goals on the Ledian.
OMG! A 10/10 on Missingno.!!! Thank's so much!
Light Azumarill: Quite right on the Feebas.
Other replies would be similar to the others.

August 9th, 2006, 7:05 PM
The Altaria looks like a holographic Pokemon trading card!! xD It's beautiful. Lacking some shading, but beatiful nonetheless.

WOW. That's probably the best rendition of missingno. that I've ever seen. Good job. <3

August 10th, 2006, 1:00 PM
wow those are really cool colors!

August 10th, 2006, 3:28 PM
So... it seems that Altaria and MissingNo. are my best pictures here; that's good.

Thanks for the comments everyone. Keep an eye out for my new threads
(My next pic should be a Clefable)