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February 20th, 2007, 5:26 PM
cuz I wish spring ish here... ^w^

pweety please read and review!!

"pink (pretty little things)"

pretty little things,
pink blossoms

so young to bloom
so quick to fade

so slow to fall
where children played

so brief, so frail
coy, and unafraid

lo, as it lands
on grass' blade.

February 20th, 2007, 7:18 PM
I liked this one. ^_^ Your rhyming was near flawless and the whole thing overall sounded very cute, 'though I can't say I want spring to come. xD

Nice job~

February 23rd, 2007, 5:49 PM
Aww, that was a really nice poem! 'Twas very pretty and sweet. ^w^

February 25th, 2007, 11:20 PM
thankees for teh comments!!! ^w^