View Full Version : What Will Become Of Us?

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
August 6th, 2007, 9:31 AM
A Life in the Balance is a Reason to keep on Running, Yet A Life that's certainly gone is reason to stop. Why do we stop when it seems hopeless? Why shouldn't we thrive harder in the hopeless times? By Nature we are evil, we are cruel. We we're decided to be when are sin was first.

Adam And Eve.

Garden of Eden.

The Serpent is the most cruel in are eyes, yet in the eyes of God

We are The Most Cruel, We are the ones to kill for fun

Animals kill for food, to protect themselves

We Kill for enjoyment of another's pain and suffering

To make them cry and bleed,

And when they beg then we laugh in their face

Kicking them while they are down.

Is that why we stop when things get bad?

Is that why we give up hope?

Because we are truley evil?

When we are in trouble who will help us?

When we are suffering who will aid us?

It will certainly not be one of us, For we are cruel by nature.

We Can't change.

We can only ammend what we've already done in the Eyes Of God.

What will become of us?

Are We the ones who will destroy this planet?

Are we the one who will kill Billions of Lives?

What will become of us.

August 6th, 2007, 7:45 PM
I noticed two typos/spelling erroes you might want to fix: "amend" and "truly" were mispelled. But other than that great job, definitely a poem that makes you think... The world is seriously messed up these days... *shakes head sadly*