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August 7th, 2007, 10:54 PM

My first Sprite Comic..yay.

NOTE:For those who have really bad eyes like mine, you might want to save the picture first, then zoom in on it. =P

CHAPTER 1: The SS. Kaho Raid!


August 8th, 2007, 6:46 AM
Its doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me. They're on a ship, team flare comes (I like the name BTW) they battle, they lose?, and its takes an hour to convince the captain to turn the ship around? it just doesn't make a lot of sense to me. sorry

August 10th, 2007, 8:58 AM
You mixed generations. Hacking? Thats for games, these are COMICS. Work on your grammar, as well as your mapping, both fail. Also, never use things like LOL or WTF in a comic. Makes you look illiterate.

All your panels, as well as some characters, are resized. It also follows no storyline.

Sheer Cold only attacks one Pokemon at a time.