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Shine Diamond episode 51a--The Afterpost

Posted February 6th, 2019 at 10:02 AM by EmeraldSky

This week, after reflecting on her impending match with the boys, Dawn's first battle gets underway!

I moved Ash's training scene with Estrella (and Dawn's training) into an interlude because the episode would run long if I included that, the heart-to-heart (which I expanded on), and the battle itself.

I cut out the cutaway with Maylene's training because I felt Dawn's preparation (and Ash's training) took priority.

Maylene's Meditite Kuto is short for bokuto, the Japanese training sword. Her Machoke Tana is named after the katana.

I sped up part of the battle itself to emphasize Dawn's inexperience in a battle, and how just how prepared Maylene was even though her training occurred offscreen.

Next time, Dawn rallies from from a bad sart, but will it be enough to win her first battle?
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