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Episode 50b delayed

Posted 4 Days Ago at 8:35 AM by EmeraldSky
Updated 19 Hours Ago at 7:07 PM by EmeraldSky

Episode 50b of Shine Diamond is delayed due to Bulbagarden (one of the places I post the story at) getting an upgrade.

The story will be back as soon as the board is back up.
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Shine Diamond episode 50a--The Afterpost

Posted 1 Week Ago at 11:32 AM by EmeraldSky

This week, the group arrives in Veilstone City, where they see that Paul has shaken the Gym Leader, Maylene.

The biggest change was cutting out the evil team. I have a very specific place I'm wanting Team Galactic to appear in the Veilstone storyline, so having Mars and Jupiter show up would mess up the setup for a few episodes down the road, when their appearance matters. That, and Maylene's depression was a decent enough plot.

I also sped up the confrontation with...
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Hiatus extended

Posted 1 Week Ago at 5:01 PM by EmeraldSky

Shine Diamond's holiday hiatus is extended for another week due to circumstances beyond my control--the story will be back on the 16th.
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Shine Diamond episode 49--The Afterpost

Posted 4 Weeks Ago at 11:29 AM by EmeraldSky

This week, the group arrives to visit one of Dawn's friends, only to find that Team Galactic has plans of their own for a hot spring!

This was one of those episodes that translated very nicely from Team Rocket to Team Galactic. That, and the plot sounds like something Team Galactic would do, considering they nearly drain one of the lakes in the games.

Remix Ash would know better than to demand battles from every person he passes--he will only ask for a battle with mutual...
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Shine Diamond episode 48--The Afterpost

Posted 4 Weeks Ago at 3:19 PM by EmeraldSky
Updated 4 Weeks Ago at 3:20 PM by EmeraldSky

This week, Dawn's frustrations about constantly losing in contests boil over!

At first, I wanted to show the Contest, but the more I thought about it, the more I realized that the episode would be more powerful if we just focused on Dawn and Satomi having a heart to heart, which culminates in the boys jamming with her as a show of support. This is why that we only see parts of the Contest (and the moments leading up to it) in a flashback.

Originally, Ash, Brock and...
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